Talk: Clone Commander Lee/archive1

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• Good catch on those minor characters from Traitor, but watch carefully the edits being made to your articles. Proper formatting is important. Articles need to be included in relevant categories, say, for example, Humans, Males, Slaves, and the Appearances need to be linked, italicized, and formatted. Here's hoping you stick around, learn the ropes, and help the Wook grow. Enochf 18:52, 16 October 2008 (UTC)

Signing comments

Please use four tildes (~~~~) to sign your comments on talk pages. Do not just type out your name. Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:22, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Thank You. I do. --Clone Commander Lee 22:03, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Warning

Do not recreate pages that have been deleted. If you continue, you will be blocked from editing. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:32, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

Why have the unidentified pages from Duel of the Droids have been deleted ? I see no reason for it ! --Clone Commander Lee 19:34, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

• There's no point in creating individual articles for every nameless, meaningless extra that we see. It serves no purpose and only clutters the wiki. By your reasoning there should be an article on every ewok, stormtrooper and jawa ever glimpsed in the Star Wars films. It just makes no encyclopedic sense. Gry Sarth 20:00, 9 February 2009 (UTC)
• Okay but funnily the unidentified Aqualish technican page has been created again.--Clone Commander Lee 18:57, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

User Page

OK, I have to say, you've got the best user page ever. It's succinct, to the point, and elegantly understated. Quite refreshing! Doluk^Talk 19:57, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

Recent changes patroller

How can you become a recent changes patroller ? --Clone Commander Lee 18:05, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

• Its a self-proclaimed title. If you make use of the Recent Changes/Latest Activity page/box a lot, then you can dub yourself this and put the {{User patrol}} userbox on your page. —Lucius malfoy7 20px ^{(Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents!)} 20:20, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Removing content

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• Sorry but this page was complete useless. It wasn't deleted for 3 months and so it tried to delete it. This won't happen again. --Clone Commander Lee 17:44, 28 April 2009 (UTC)

Broadside

Hey Lee, I was wondering how Broadside is going. You said on the TCW project that you were going to work on the Broadeside (clone) article, but I saw that you have not editted on the article since the 18th of April. If you are still planning on working on the article, fell free to continue editting on Broadside or ask me or any of the other project members for advise if needed. If not, could you please then remove Broadside from the current individual projects list incase another user wants to take it as a project. Thanks. :) Kilson Likes PIE 21:03, 05 May 09 (UTC)

• I've made some edits on this page today. If you want to do some more feel free to do so. --Clone Commander Lee 17:37, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

One month already

Hello to all the members of WookieeProject: The Clone Wars! Considering the project has just been launched, we've had a great first month, taking three articles to FA status and five articles to GA status. I would like to remind you to please try to do whatever you can to help out; there are still many potential articles that can be taken up as projects, and many of you are already working very hard on them. In the next month, we have a goal to double (if not multiply even more) our current FAs and GAs, because once Season Two starts airing, there will be a ton of more articles that will require attention, and it's best if we get as many as we can out of the way now. Thank you for contributing! Your project head, CC7567 ^(talk) 20:20, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

GAN

First of all, you aren't allowed to vote for articles you nominate. Users used to be able to, but that was changed in a policy revamp. To nominate an article, start editing the GAN page and scroll all the way down to the bottom. You should see this:

<!-- Template to copy-and-paste for new nominations

 *** DO NOT EDIT BELOW THIS LINE ***

===[[Article name]]===
*'''Nominated by''': 
*'''Nomination comments''': 
====(0 ACs/0 Users/0 Total)====
'''Support'''

'''Object'''

'''Comments'''

-->

That's the nomination template format. Copy it and paste it just above it so that it's at the bottom of the page when you hit the "Preview" button, and fill out the required fields (the article's name, and signing your name with ~~~~ under "nominated by"). Optionally, you can post a comment for the nomination. Once you're ready, you can submit the page, and the article will be nominated.

Glancing through the article, there are several minor issues that should be corrected beforehand. I'll continue reviewing once the article is nominated on the GAN page, but for now, there should be no sourcing in the intro. Zak's birth is not referenceable to any source; everything except his birth has a source, and that's the Clone trooper Databank entry. Additionally, I recommend placing the article into Microsoft Word or a similar word processing program and running both a spelling check and a grammar check for the article. Please also make sure that the article adheres to both the Manual of Style and the Layout Guide. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:08, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

The Gauntlet of Death

Can someone can help my with this project cause I only have the preview. --Clone Commander Lee 07:37, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

• First of all, you might want to specifically ask someone on his or her talk page, because I'm not sure if others will see messages you put on your own talk page. Second, if you don't have the necessary materials, you might just not be able to complete it. In taking up projects, we assume that you have all the materials necessary to complete it. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:02, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

RE: Zak (clone)

Hey Lee, in the future, when you have addressed objections on one of your noms, please leave a message on the actual nomination page itself. For examples of what I mean, just take a look at some of the other Good article noms. Most of the time, people put "Addressed", or "fixed", under each objection separately, so that it is easier for the reviewer—and the nominator—to keep track of what the nominator has and hasn't fixed. Thanks! :) Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Jujiggum) 14:02, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

• I'm going to go ahead and take the liberty of clarifying the "bold" comment that CC7567 is objecting to on the GAN page since the bold sentence was my addition to begin with. Just wanted to give you the heads up. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 00:08, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

TCW Check-in

So that our project doesn't end up like that cruiser. Hey Clone Commander Lee! This is your monthly check-in from your project head of WookieeProject The Clone Wars. Our Featured Articles haven't seen any additions as of yet, but our Good Articles are steadily growing. I'd like to remind you to check the current projects listing when you have the chance. If you still have the intent on working on any projects (specifically within the next two or three weeks) that you've reserved there, then it's fine. If you no longer have the intent to work on your project(s), please update it so that others have the chance to work on items there. Thanks again! Your project head, CC7567 (talk) 00:37, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Your GAN articles

Hey Commander Lee, just so you know, you can add WP:GAN to your watch page to check in on your nominated articles. I listed quite a few objections in your Rugor Nass and Slammer noms, so you might want to check up on those when you have time. :) JangFett ^Talk 18:26, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

IRC

Please come on IRC and join #WP:TCW when you can. If you need help, don't hesitate to ask. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:05, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

• For now, I would advise requesting an AC removal vote for Slammer. The article isn't sourced, needs to be expanded, and needs to comply with all other GA policies before it should be nominated. Please contact me with your thoughts. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:11, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
  • The way we remove nominations is by starting a removal vote, and once there are three votes, a nomination can be removed. Also, the easiest way to join IRC is by going to Wikia's web gateway, selecting the channel you want to join and typing in your name. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:05, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Rugor Nass

Lee, I'd like to ask you if you're still intent on seeing Rugor Nass through its GAN process. As it stands, there are a lot of objections that still need to be fixed, and I feel that it would be better for you to learn what's expected of a Good article with Zak, as his article is much shorter and easier to do. In any case, if Nass doesn't see any work by next Wednesday, he will have to be removed under our policy of a three-week inactivity or failure to address objections. If you still have the intent to work on him, please let myself or an AC member know as soon as possible. Thank you. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:51, 27 June 2009 (UTC)

WP:TCW again

Hey Clone Commander Lee. As project head for WP:TCW, I'm trying to get a better idea of who's still interested in participating in our project. If you're still interested in participating, please leave a note on my talk page or contact me in IRC. If you do not respond within a week, I will assume that you are no longer interested in participating. That doesn't mean that your name will be removed from the "Participants" list, but it means that any of your current projects will be removed from the project page so that others have a chance to work on them. Likewise, if you currently have any projects under your belt, I highly encourage you to review them, and if you don't plan on working on them within the next two or three weeks, I recommend reconsidering them. Thanks. Your project head, CC7567 ^(talk) 05:48, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

• Lee, do you really feel that you can take on Broadside, Matchstick, Jek, and Rys when you haven't even passed a Good article yet? I would seriously recommend considering holding off on them and trying to pass Zak first so that you know what to expect when writing. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:47, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Rescue on the Tranquility

The two that were "killed" by Ventress later got back up. They were only knocked out. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:23, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

• Nevermind; I made a mistake. The ones that she deflected shots at were the other two that were killed. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:38, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Broadside

I don't have the time to review it now, but I would recommend looking through the MOS and LG yourself. Also, none of your sourcing is working. Furthermore, are you sure that all my objections for Zak are addressed? I haven't taken another look at it yet, but I'm not going to review Broadside if there are still objections remaining for Zak. Furthermore, I'm going to waste my time if I have to object to the same things on both articles, so please make sure both are ready before I look at either. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:51, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

• Lee, I'm simply going to ask you to stop taking up so many WP:TCW projects until you can show that you can pass one GA. Unless you are extremely confident that you can do eight articles in two weeks (that's the set deadline for all current projects, and you haven't worked on Gobi Glie for months) without even having passed a single GA or knowing what's expected of one, I would highly advise that you reconsider. If you're just reserving them because you're worried that others will take them, they most likely won't. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:04, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
  • If you plan on cutting down on your projects, please remove the ones that you no longer immediately plan to work on from the project page. Thank you. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:41, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Broadside

Lee, I'll give it a copyedit once you're done. I went in and corrected your references and sources. JangFett ^Talk 18:26, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

• Once you're done, you can send me a message/reply to this. The {{inuse}} tag is still on Broadside, so I don't want to begin editing it.JangFett ^Talk 18:47, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
  • I'll take a look at it later on today. :) JangFett ^Talk 13:41, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay. First thing, make sure you expand the intro. I corrected quite a lot of grammatical errors, and tense issues. I saw issues with underlinking. Also, if I recall, only Skywalker and Tano went to the facility to get the Y-wings. Broadside joined Skywalker, Yularen, and Koon inside the Resolute. You don't need to much information from Procedure as well, try to cut down the content, only mention if it is related to Broadside. Read this: "Skywalker concluded, cause Ryndellia was near to Naboo, that Grievous next attack aim was the Kaliida Shoals Medical Center." Improper English. Try to go back and correct some of these issues, they're quite a few of them. Overall, this article needs a lot of work before I can give it a proper copyedit. If you need help, I'll be on IRC channel #WP:TCW most of the day today. JangFett ^Talk 15:42, 12 July 2009 (UTC)

• Please, if you have time, login into IRC channel #WP:TCW. I need to discuss issues regarding Broadside, and it's better than spamming your talk page :) JangFett ^Talk 18:41, 12 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Try [1], it's Wikia's IRC channel gateway. Click the dropdown and find #WP:TCW. JangFett ^Talk 19:08, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
    • What error does it say? JangFett ^Talk 19:14, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
      • Have you ever logged into IRC before? I'm not sure if freenode is down, or if your firewall is blocking the connection. JangFett ^Talk 19:17, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
        • I'm talking about have you ever been on IRC before in the past. Is this error new to you? JangFett ^Talk 19:22, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
          • It is a possibility that your firewall is blocking your connection, or if you using a wireless connection, it has a weak signal and cannot connect to freenode. JangFett ^Talk 19:39, 13 July 2009 (UTC)

Hey Lee

Try logging into IRC channel #WP:TCW so we can discuss about Broadside. Also, thanks for reviewing my Bel GAN. If you want to strike an objection, it's <s>Your Objection</s>. JangFett ^Talk 19:10, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Wolffe

Sorry; I didn't realize that you had already taken him. But next time, please try to make sure that you cross out your projects in the master lists so that others know what's been taken. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:19, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

• Whoever archived your nom must have forgotten to do so. In any case, it's too late now for the notice, but congratulations. :) CC7567 ^(talk) 18:32, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
  • If you're the one who took it to Good status, then yes, you can. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:35, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:

Zak (clone). It is listed as a good article, and possibly the AC forgot to message you the successful GA nom template. JangFett ^Talk 18:54, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

More Broadside

Hey Lee, since you cannot login to IRC, I'll explain what needs to be done for Broadside. I'll continue after you nominate it. Actually, Lee I would like to check this article again before you nominate it. :) JangFett ^Talk 19:11, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

1. Expand the intro
2. Intro- "After going throught the Balmorran Run, Shadow Squadron engaged the Malevolence and destroyed their ion cannons, forcing Grievous ship to retreat." Don't forget to check your spelling. Also, watch out for underlinking and overlinking issues. Yes, Shadow Squadron did engage the Malevolence, but Grievous did not retreat after they destroyed the warship's ion cannon. Malevolence must be in italics, same goes with any type of ship. (i.e Venator-class Star Destroyer)
3. Bio- In the first paragraph, you need to source it. Also, their is no build up for Broadside's mission. Explain where Broadside served in the GAR, and his mission around 22 BBY.
4. I see tense and minor grammatical errors throughout the article. Also, again, watch out for underlinking issues. Any time a new subject comes up, link it—but only if it hasn't been linked before in the article. You can link a subject in the intro, then link the subject again—only once though—in the bio too. Make sure you add context as well.
5. Add quotes for the bio, and if you can, the P&T.
6. Add another image in the bio, and move the current image in the bio near where Shadow Squadron took off for the Balmorra Run.
7. Make sure your references are correct. Double check, and don't forget to reference "Kamino" in the infobox.
8. Missing sources in the sources section.

• You must misunderstood me Lee, make sure you be careful of overlinking and underlinking in your articles. I went in and gave broadside a copyedit, and you did a good job getting all the information in. Make sure you add italics for ship names, such as, Twilight and Malevolence. Change "Forcing Grievous to retreat" in the intro. Grievous did not retreat after Skywalker and Shadow Squadron destroyed the Malevolence's ion cannons. Read the last sentence in his bio, which I added, that's correct. Overall good work, and also before you nomiante it, go back and add Plo Koon's part in the battle. I'll check your Senate commando article soon. JangFett ^Talk 18:10, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Keep the italics and the usage of linking in mind. For the intro, you can add more about Broadside's mission in The Clone Wars: Procedure. The intro needs to be proportional to the bio. JangFett ^Talk 18:28, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
    • All right, good work Lee :) I'll review the senate commando soon. JangFett ^Talk 18:32, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
      • Anytime Lee :) JangFett ^Talk 18:34, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Unidentified Senate Commando captain

See my talk page for your images. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 00:47, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:Broadside and Matchstick

I'll give Matchstick a copyedit later on today. As for my objection for Broadside, I'll strike it out. I'm still planning on giving Broadside another review. JangFett ^Talk 16:30, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Projects

Lee, I'm simply going to ask you again to make sure that you are one hundred percent confident that you articles are ready to pass the GAN process before you start running off and working on other projects. A lot of them have the same issue of a lack of proofreading, and until you can be consistent, there aren't going to be a lot of people (particularly, myself and the other ACs) who are willing to object to the same things on all of your nominations. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:38, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

• Lee, I hope you understand that I'm both asking you to proofread more and slow down before nominating anything else right now. Thank you. CC7567 ^(talk) 15:37, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

As you're a part of the Wookieepedia:WookieeProject The Clone Wars, I think that you should cross those articles that you have chose, as the rules of the project requires this. I noticed at least one missing crossing Wookieepedia:WookieeProject The Clone Wars/Characters|here (the Unidentified Senate Commando captain). I could do it myself, but I feel that it's your duty, and I also wanted that you remember it in future, and check the other project of you, and cross them if necessary. Thank you for your time.--Kreivi Wolter 20:37, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

• I'll give your articles a copyedit Lee, but I strongly recommend that you proofread your articles before you nominate them. I'll take care of Matchstick first, since I did say I was going to give it a copyedit a few days ago. JangFett ^Talk 16:51, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Yes, sorry, I was caught up in my noms, as well as reviewing others. I stroke out my last objection for Broadside. JangFett ^Talk 17:58, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Broadside

Well, since Broadside isn't called by the name since the departure from the Resolute, one can say that the battle had little to do with him. But I say that we know for sure that he was present and must describe everything that happens to him. Right now, however, this isn't the main problem. Lee, the article seriously suffers on basics such as grammar and linking: it just doesn't read like a good prose. I'll give it another look soon and once all major grammar points are fixed, we could go back to the actual content. Mauser^Comlink 18:28, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

• Lee, I'm not going to help you on Broadside until you can prove to me that you're committed to working on his article. If you're going to be working on ten projects at once (and that includes Barb Mentir), I have no way of knowing what your level of commitment is. My perpetual advice to you is to halt your other projects and show me that you are fully committed to your current projects once I put up objections. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:18, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Broadside objection

The objection has been stricken, but as I said, please remember to take care of such things before you nominate an article. Darth Trayus 30px ^{(Trayus Academy)} 20:39, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Broadside (again)

Lee, I'm sorry for the way I acted earlier, but the fact of the matter is that I'm asking you to halt your other projects after I review Broadside. If you're going to continue writing multiple articles at once still without knowing what is expected of a GAN, chances are that a) the same objections will have to be made for every single article and therefore require a rewrite on your part, or b) someone will have to copyedit each one. While the latter usually is not a problem, I would prefer if you learn all you can before working on other projects. If your concern is that you're not a native English speaker, then going through the nomination process first will help you improve it. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:04, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: Wooley

No, I did not forget about giving Wooley a second review. I'll get to it as soon as I can Lee :) JangFett ^Talk 16:17, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Re: The Gauntlet of Death

Right now I'm only planning to promote the Battle of Rishi, so you are welcome to take the rest. As for the comic itself, there are plenty of places on the Internet where you can grab a scan of it. You just have to do some searching ;) QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 12:21, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:CT-327

Sure Lee, I'll give it a copyedit. Have you looked it over and made sure you corrected grammatical errors? JangFett ^Talk 19:00, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

First look

1. All right, first off expand the intro.
2. "While checking a meteorite shower, droid commandos attacked the station and CT-327 was the first to be killed when he recognized the droids with a stun baton" This sentence is very confusing. I'll reword it, but Lee make sure in the future you read your work, even out loud if it helps you. I know English isn't your native language, but at least try :)
3. Are you sure CT-327 was a rookie clone? While I remember the few inside the bunker were, I'm not so sure about 327.
4. I expanded the P&T.
5. After his death, is the rest really relevant to him? While it's fine that you mentioned the back story of the Rookies, the rest of the Rishi moon mission is irreverent.
6. Overall, I corrected a lot of wording issues, minor grammatical issues, and linking. Remember to link new subjects that appear, and always double check your work. JangFett ^Talk 19:18, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

• Lee, you shouldn't copy from different articles. Even though it may sound correct; you should take notes from it, check the sources and then reword what you want to copy with your own words. While Stride is neither a GA or FA, you still shouldn't copy from other articles. JangFett ^Talk 19:25, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Okay, I'll take a look. Check the guide too Lee, make sure CT-327 is a rookie. JangFett ^Talk 19:34, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
    • While I'm not too sure, try asking CC for suggestions. I know that you cannot keep calling him "rookie" in the article, if it is not confirmed. The article is currently based around the fact that he is a rookie clone, but it could be a assumption. The guide calls him a "Clone sentry", while the rest of the stationed clones were called "rookies" or "shinies". JangFett ^Talk 19:48, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
      • All right Lee, I'll take a look. I'll be going offline soon, and probably won't be able to give Bait a proper copyedit tomorrow because of my busy schedule. I'll try to give it one, but I can't make any promises. JangFett ^Talk 08:05, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
        • I gave it a quick glance copyedit, and right now the P&T still calls him inexperienced. I'll thoroughly review it tomorrow if I can. JangFett ^Talk 08:12, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Re:Bait

Sure, but lee, I would concentrate on your current noms before you start nominating more. JangFett ^Talk 17:05, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

• That happened to me when I began starting to write articles. A lot of people tend to nominate one article then go back and nominate more, and that's because they're use to the nomination process and know what to expect. Lee, you currently have one GA, and I'm not saying that's bad. But you should show the AC members, like CC, that you're capable of nominating articles and sticking with it. The majority of your current GANs have the same issues, i.e, grammatical issues, and that's something you need to correct before you start nominating more. While it is fine to let someone else give your articles a copyedit, you should also give it a copyedit during the writing process. You currently have over 10 projects and 4 of which are nominated for GA. Before you start nominating more, stay with the current noms that you have already. JangFett ^Talk 17:16, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
  • No problem Lee, and of course, I'll give Bait a copyedit soon. JangFett ^Talk 17:26, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
• Okay Lee, a couple of problems.

1. "While altering the appearance of the Delta-7B, Skywalker says to R2 that the damage must look as realistic as possible" Why is he changing the appearance of the Delta-7B, and what is his motive?
2. "Skywalker's Jedi Padawan Ahsoka Tano reports that they're approaching the ice field on schedule" What ice field?
3. "Tano reveals that she thinks that it is a dumb plan and the Separatists will never fall for it" What plan?
4. I don't think Anakin called Ahsoka stupid in the comic :P I fixed that error
5. " Skywalker then releases the fighter and some other trash out of the Twilight and into space." After I corrected this sentence, it shows the lack of build up. While you said this, later on, the batle droids say "Come out Jedi". Was Skywalker actually inside the fighter? Mention that eariler.
6. You frequently use the word "cause", however the way you use it doesn't make sense in the sentence. "Cause" and "Because" are two separate words with different meanings.
7. Again, lack of build up. You failed to mention that he brought a fake lightsaber instead of a real one. Also, was it truly "fake"? You mention that he uses it, so it is a real lightsaber but not his.
   • JangFett ^Talk 16:03, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: CT-327

If you can't find anything that explicitly states that he was a rookie, then chances are that he wasn't. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:01, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Re:

The reason why they're disappearing is because you need to close the <ref> tag. i.e, <ref name="Lee">''Reference''</ref> JangFett ^Talk 18:40, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Question Lee

Hey Lee, for a while I have been noticing that you copy everything from my userpage. Why is that? While it's fine that you're using tables and that border around the page, you shouldn't copy everything from my page. JangFett ^Talk 18:03, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

• Oh, okay. If you like, I'll help you out. If you want the same layout, but with different colors, please say what colors you like and I'll fix up your tables and that border. The Wookieevaction template is fine Lee, don't worry about that :) JangFett ^Talk 18:10, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
  • You mean your signature? Sure.
    • To make a custom signature is easy. First, create a subpage from your userpage. i.e, User:Clone Commander Lee/sig. Then if you know basic HTML, you can start by adding in custom fonts, colors, the size of your name; as well as small images. Then finally, go to your preferences and scroll down and check the box that reads "Custom signature". Above that, paste this: {{SUBST:User:Clone Commander Lee/sig}} and then save. Your done! If you have any other questions such as knowing HTML, I'll help you out :) JangFett ^Talk 18:18, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: TCW online comics

That's really cool dude, thanks for joining the OOU mini-project. One thing though, Mauser might do Mouse Hunt soon, so if you're about to do it, make sure to ask him first. Kilson Likes PIE 22:44, 04 August 09 (UTC)

• Yeah, in fact I'm doing Mouse Hunt right now, so please stay away from it. =) Mauser^Comlink 22:50, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: For you

Thanks Lee :) Here is something for you as well, JangFett ^Talk 18:19, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

JangFett Talk has awarded you a Wookiee Cookie! Keep up the good work

• Your grammar is improving, but before you submit any article changes, use the preview button to double check your work. As for my left over Broadside objections, I apologize and I'll strike the remaining out. For you signature problem, what do you need help with? JangFett ^Talk 18:34, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
  • My name is one word, JangFett. As for your signature, what colors do you want and I'll go head and modify your signature. Is your sig in a subpage? i.e, User:Clone Commander Lee/sig. JangFett ^Talk 18:56, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
    • Okay Lee, here you go :) User:Clone Commander Lee/sig. Now, go to your Preferences and scroll down and check the box that reads "Custom signature". Above that, paste this: {{SUBST:User:Clone Commander Lee/sig}} and then save. JangFett ^Talk 19:14, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
      • Lee, go back and remove the < nowiki > tags in your preferences :P JangFett ^Talk 20:47, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
        • No Lee :P Here is what you do, without the "nowiki" tags, paste this in that custom sig box, also make sure the "Custom sig" check box is checked. {{SUBST:User:Clone Commander Lee/sig}} JangFett ^Talk 21:22, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Broadside

I know. I'll review it again tomorrow. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 18:50, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

• Cause it's still relevant, that's why. No proof to the statement that the clones guarding the hangar were his superiors. Mauser^Comlink 03:50, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
  • In TCW the clone troopers have armor of all possible colors and yellow armor alone does not indicate a superior officer. Also, Broadside never confronted that clone, Matchstick did. Mauser^Comlink 09:31, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
    • I'd say yes, as he never even talked to that clone. Mauser^Comlink 09:38, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Thanks

No problem Lee. JangFett ^Talk 19:56, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Niner

If the GA list, random GA list doesn't show Niner then I can't do anything about that Lee. You should ask an AC member and I'm sure they will add him in. :) JangFett ^Talk 15:20, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Battle of Gwori

Im still working on it but i need all the help i can get --Jedijake123 18:07, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Picture from graphic novels

Ill upload a image for the prelude and battle. As for Tracer, I'll upload an image of him as well. JangFett ^Talk 15:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Wooley

I will give him another review when I have the time. As for the Unidentified Senate Commando, it was most likely because whoever was archiving it forgot again. Also, unless you cannot read the notice second from the top on my talk page, please stop leaving me messages regarding ongoing nominations. That's what the GAN page is for. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:31, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

• If I get to him later, I will. If not, then no. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:43, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: The Gauntlet of Death

The image which I used in the article was taken from a scan of the comic. If you need any images from it, I can upload them too. As for Gwarrk, here are my initial concerns:

1. • First of all, split both the intro and the biography into at least two paragraphs. Such giant blocks of texts look unsightly.
   • Intro:When Geonosian forces invaded Rishi in order to get the exonium on the planet to power their sonic weapons. What happened when they invaded Rishi? Without the second part, this sentence doesn't make a lot of sense.
   • You need to contexify exonium. Say that it was a mineral.
   • The clones were ordered not to attack until their Jedi General arrived, but Gwarrk ordered the clone commander to attack.
     • What clones? The previous sentence doesn't mention any clones, only a task force, which doesn't necessarily consist of clone troopers.
     • "Ordered to attack" is repetitive.
   • As far as I know, "delibered" is not a word. Please change it.
   • You can't just link Cooker as "the sharpshooter", you need to spell his name. Try something like "the sharpshooter called 2242"
   • Fisto ordered the sharpshooter to aim at his shoulder, because he could not deflect the shoots of the Geonosian sonic weapons and he could deflect the clones shoots at them. This one really needs rewording. It reads awkwardly and is not clear as to who you are talking about in the second part of the sentence.
   • So, Fisto managed to weaken the Geonosian defenses. "So" is rather colloquial here. Change it to "eventually" or something else.
   • Currently, the flow of events in the intro is very unclear. You say that Fisto ordered Cooker to aim for his shoulder and then you say that Fisto managed to weaken the Geonosian defenses. What happened in between those events?
   • Biography. A male Rishii, Gwarrk was a chieftain during the Clone Wars. Whose chieftain?
   • Geonosian forces allied with the Confederacy of Independent Systems invaded Rishi to power their sonic weapons with the exonium.... The Geonosians invaded Rishi to capture the exonium, so they could use it to power sonic weapons. Your wording is a bit unclear.
   • ...the Jedi Council dispatched a company of clones... Again, don't link Green Company as company. If the company's name is known, you should use it.
   • Gwarrk stated that the Jedi had created the army for warfare and he did the clones in her purpose. The second part doesn't make sense.
   • The whole biography is too play by play. Reword it so that it was more from Gwarrk's point of view.
   • He caused the failure of the attack that the clone trooper were not good enough... This one is awkward. I'm quite sure that "caused" is not an appropriate word here.
   • Probably more to follow once you take care of these. Some tips: First. Don't use the word "cause" as a substitute for "because". "Cause" means "a reason". In the colloquial writing language, however, the short form " 'cause " is sometimes used, but it is written with an apostrophe and, as I already said, is colloquial. Second. Don't use the shortened forms of verbs in the articles, i.e. "could not" should be spelled fully and not to be shortened to "couldn't". It is OK to use the latter in conversation, but not in an encyclopedia article. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 13:06, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
2. Second look
   • You should use "circa" or "around" 22 BBY, since the comic gives only the approximate date.
   • Do we really need a redlink for "task force"? I'd suggest replacing it with Green Company.
   • Now the second paragraph of the intro is too play by play. I understand that I asked you to give more context, but this is too much. All you need to say is that Fisto formulated a plan, reached the canyon and used his lightsaber to deflect Cooker's shots. Currently, it has some unnecessary detail and can be cut at least in half.
   • ...the Jedi Council dispatched Green Company, a unit of clones, to retake the mines.... You haven't mentioned any mines prior to this. All you say is that Geonosians invaded the planet.
   • The Genosians, however, had prepared an ingenious defense and the attack was beaten back and the troopers recalled by the arriving Nautolan Jedi Kit Fisto. You establish here that it was Fisto who recalled the troops, and later talk about Gwarrk asking who did it. This is quite confusing, as the reader does not know that Fisto's arrival was a surprise for Gwarrk. I would suggest you to describe these events as they were seen from Gwarrk's point of view, i.e. remove the mention of Fisto from this sentence and introduce him when Gwarrk asks who gave the order.
   • The second paragraph of the bio has the same amount of unnecessary detail as the second paragraph of the intro. Don't talk about what Fisto ordered or planned, just describe what he did in 1-2 sentences. For example, the whole stuff about LR1K cannon can be removed entirely.
   • The introduction and the biography both end with the same sentence. Reword one of them so that they not looked identical.
   • I'll take a final look once you fix these. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 20:45, 19 August 2009 (UTC)
3. Final round
   • Fisto then went to the entrance of the mines and Gwarrk asked the commander where the Jedi was. This doesn't flow very well. It is not clear that Fisto left without noticing Gwarrk.
   • Fisto's plan included that the sharpshooter, 2242 nicknamed Cooker, should aim at his shoulder and fire continuously and Fisto would deflect the shots at the Geonosians with his lightsaber. 2242 began to fire and Fisto deflected the shots at the Geonosians. I'd suggest to merge these sentences together and reword them a little. Again, don't tell what Fisto planned, just describe what he did.
   • He accounted the failure of the attack that the clone trooper were not good enough, instead of the better position of the enemy troops. "That the clone troopers were not good enough" doesn't quite work here.
   • The article looks much better now. In the future, pay more attention to the amount of detail not related to the character. Even if said character doesn't do much during the events you talk about, you still need try to keep the focus of the article on him as much as possible. Also, be sure to check the flow of each sentence. If one part of the sentence ends with the words "the exonium mines", the second part should talk about the mines and not about the exonium. As for Cooker, I'll upload a picture and review him later. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 11:58, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Boost

Sure, I'll take a look at Boost Lee. JangFett ^Talk 17:50, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

• All right Lee, before I continue, please lessen the pbp in that large paragraph that beings with "In the pod, Wolffe..." I added more information regarding the Battle of Abregado in the previous paragraph, also I rewrote the second paragraph of the intro. Please go back and fix up that large paragraph. I'll continue once you have done that. JangFett ^Talk 20:47, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Battle of Orto Plutonia

Yes I do. The current article is in bad shape, and I'm rewriting it in my sandbox. JangFett ^Talk 15:19, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Cutup

I have seen it but that was a long time ago. I don't exactly remember that line from the Decoded episode, and if you cannot source it, then remove it. Also Lee, for Tucker, go back and rewrite a few sentences within the battle. I am seeing an resemblance to Axe, and it is not professional to copy and paste others work into articles. You may have used Axe as a guidance, but copying word-from-word isn't going to help the Tucker article. I gave the article a first copyedit. I went back and linked a lot of unlinked subjects. JangFett ^Talk 15:26, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

• I gave Cutup a copyedit, and I have a few suggestions for you Lee. Remember to identify any clone by its serial number, i.e., CC-2224. If the clone doesn't have one, then you can use its nickname. In the intro, per the Ultimate Battles visual guide, many of the listed clones have serial numbers. You should identify them first, then after you introduce them, add an em dash and write "nicknamed "Blah" and "Blah", respectively." If you only have one clone then you can add commas. i.e, CC-7567, nicknamed "Rex". However, if you have a smaller article like "Cutup, then you don't have to worry about introducing their nicknames. Hopes this helps Lee. JangFett ^Talk 15:39, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Cooker

Ok, here goes. This time, I went ahead and corrected the mistakes that I've already noted with Gwarrk, particularly giant paragraphs, the uses of "cause" and "couldn't".

1. Here are my objections:
   • ...Green Company was dispatched to the planet and ordered not to attack until their Jedi General arrived... Why were they dispatched.
   • ...and he took position vis-a-vis the canyon... "vis-a-vis" is not really an appropriate word here.
   • Currently, the intro is too big compared to the rest of the article. I'd suggest you to remove the part about the LRK cannon.
   • In around 22 BBY, Geonosian forces invaded the planet Rishi and took control over the exonium mines on the planet, needed by the Geonosians to power their sonic weapons. This is one of the flow problems I've noted in the Gwarrk review. The way the sentence is written makes it sound as if Geonosians needed the planet itself to power their weapons.
   • The second paragraph of the biography is too play by play. Could you lessen the amount of "Fisto said this", "Cooker told that".
   • The last two sentences of the intro and the bio are identical.
   • In the P&T, mention that he liked to watch droids burn.
   • And that's it. Frankly, this article is in much better shape than Gwarrk initially was. However, please watch your grammar and spelling; I've corrected quite a few errors. Overall though, after you fix these objections, Cooker should be ready to go. Oh, and images are on the way, I did not forget about them. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 16:21, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Re: Cutup

You're going to have to find someone else for both. I do not have access to either, and I did not watch the Decoded episode. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:03, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Tucker

I'm sorry to not get to Tucker. I have a busy schedule and I was trying to get to it last night, however, I couldn't. Although, I did take a quick glance at the article and I must say it still has a slight resemblance to Axe. The entire intro needs to be written. Not just a few sentences, the entire intro. His biography is good, I just have to point out a few specific sentences that need changing. Other than that, hopefully later on in the day, I'll give it another copyedit before I begin addressing objections (if necessary). JangFett ^Talk 11:31, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

• Thank you Lee, I know it's a good intro. However, it's the same exact intro as Axe, although you replaced "Axe" with "Tucker." Please rewrite the entire into. It's quite simple, due to Tucker having a minor role. JangFett ^Talk 19:56, 27 August 2009 (UTC)
  • After you rewrite the entire intro, I'll give Tucker a second review. JangFett ^Talk 20:05, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Battle of Gwori

I need ur help on the page. It all looks good exept for the behind the scences section --Jedijake123 04:47, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

• I understand what u and Fett r saying, and im ready to work on the page (Fett can help too, if he wants).—Unsigned comment by Jedijake123 (talk • contribs)
  • Lee, if you have time and/or if IRC works for you, please login into channel #WP:TCW. JangFett ^Talk 19:10, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
  • I see IRC finally works for you, Lee :) Please, if you have time, I like to talk to you regarding your current GANs and Gwori. JangFett ^Talk 19:14, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
    • "CloneCommanderLe (n=5493bef7@gateway/web/cgi-irc/irc.wikia.com/x-tgxwgdzgncwkrgwa) has joined #WP:TCW" Are you sure it does not work? Try again. JangFett ^Talk 19:15, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
      • You can't understand English wording on IRC? I'm sure if you check wikia, there will be a German version. JangFett ^Talk 19:17, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
        • If you have Firefox, you can use ChatZilla as a free client to login into IRC. If not, you can always use Wikia's gateway IRC web client. :) JangFett ^Talk 19:20, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
        • You were on Lee, try again. It doesn't matter if you use IE or FireFox to login to IRC. :) JangFett ^Talk 19:24, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
        • Try FireFox. Go to FireFox.com and download the new browser. IRC should work fine with it. JangFett ^Talk 19:29, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
        • Their is also a German version of FireFox that you can try and use. I'm curious to why neither FireFox or IE won't let you connect, however, I see you. JangFett ^Talk 19:44, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
• Okay. You can always read my conversation with Jake. I'm discussing about your Gwori project. JangFett ^Talk 19:51, 29 August 2009 (UTC)
  • I'm sorry that IRC doesn't work for you, Lee. You don't have to keep relogging in if it doesn't work. I'll send you the chat log. JangFett ^Talk 19:55, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Re:Some things

Not a problem, Lee. Also, you can always see the list of AC members. Just politely ask, and I'm sure they can help you out. Also, I am going to give Tucker another review. I just finished my copyedit for Ridge. Good work Lee, however, I fixed a lot of issues and added another reference that you missed. JangFett ^Talk 18:09, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

• Also, Lee, you cannot reference clone troopers hair and eye color to the databank. If they weren't featured or shown, then it is best if you remove the information in the infobox. JangFett ^Talk 18:14, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Broadside

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Broadside (clone trooper) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 20:01, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Broadside

According to Word, it's at 952 words. JangFett ^Talk 19:10, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

Barb Mentir

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Barb Mentir has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Graestan(Talk) 17:24, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Rishi moon clones

Yes, I have seen the decoded episode. While I don't remember why the clone was given the name "Cutup," because I saw the episode back in May, I did, however, took notes regarding Fives, Hevy, and Echo. JangFett ^Talk 14:58, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Ridge and Taquito

While Ridge did not appear in the TCW novel, he was in the film with Torrent Company. As for Taquito, yes, I'll give it a copyedit. JangFett ^Talk 19:27, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

• Lee, for Taquito's bio, the Rodian did say something before his ship exploded. Double check the episode. :) JangFett ^Talk 19:49, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
  • I'll be checking this when I get home for ya Lee. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 19:52, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Sinker

Meh, I don't really have much time or desire to work on him. If you need help, however, I can add info from the comic (there isn't much, since Sinker appears very briefly) and you can do the rest. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 20:19, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

• Yep, Boost appears too. He and Sinker both appear briefly in one panel. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 12:02, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

So you know

Sorry to say this but "Bomb squad trooper" is not the first non-TCW character/battle/or OOU article. Back in October 2008, Rugosa was the first. :) JangFett ^Talk 21:57, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Ridge

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Ridge has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 22:20, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Re: CT-9932

Most likely not. If you're planning on writing his article, I suggest obtaining the book yourself, because you're not going to be able to do it otherwise. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

• Yes, it could be, but going into that is still speculation. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:45, September 18, 2009 (UTC)
  • By reading and copying the template at the bottom of the page. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:04, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Re: Zak

During the nomination process, I asked you to check the Ambush book for information, and you explicitly said that you had "checked" it; yet there's a major piece of info missing from the article. I do not know whether you didn't have the book in your possession and lied about checking it or simply didn't understand the objection and automatically responded that you had checked the book to satisfy it, but neither is an excuse for this improper source coverage. Without this information, Zak shouldn't have been GAed in the first place. Don't expect help from me if you're going to act this way. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:44, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

• When I said "I was under the impression that you had found one, since the bio already states that he's a captain. In any case, I can't seem to find any source that states it, but please check the Ambush book, as I don't own it. CC7567 (talk) 20:14, 24 June 2009 (UTC)", you responded "Checked. He is no captain." The fact of the matter is that it still requires an update, and you still should have had access to it in the first place. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:54, September 20, 2009 (UTC)
  • I know the info is missing because I've read it. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:29, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

wow

you've got a really nice user page!!! --Clone-Commander-Echo 19:16, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Rishii Commander

Lee, I'm seeing a striking resemblance to Gwarrk. You have to be careful. I can see that you just copied/paste information from Gwarrk to the Unidentified Rishii Commander, which isn't the way to go. You must rephrase the entire article to have it around the commander's poi, not the general battle or Gwarrk. Replacing "Gwarkk" with the commander, isn't professional-like and is frowned upon. You did the same with Tucker as well. JangFett ^Talk 20:40, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Re: Gauntlet of Death Part 3

1. This clone commander was a clone trooper commander. Clone commander is repetitive.
2. Give context for Green Company in the intro.
3. Overall, the intro feels a little too long. Try to remove some details not directly related to the commander, such as this sentence: After the battle, Gwarrk stated that Fisto was very powerful and the Jedi said that the power of mind and the help of Cooker had made the victory possible.
4. While Gwarrk stated that the clone troopers were not good enough to win the battle, the clone commander informed Fisto that the Geonosians had dug deep inside the canyon leading to the entrance of the mines, Gwarrk said that his people needed the exonium to prepare their food in the frost time and that the clones must attack again. This one is a run-on. Split/reword.
5. P&T. When Fisto arrived, the commander gave him a small resume of the situation and as he saw Fisto fighting, ralied his troops and went to help him. Is this really necessary? It just retells the biography.
6. You might also want to consider removing the first sentence describing the clone's origin, per this precedent.

That's all I could find. Not bad; your writing is improving. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 15:07, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

New articles

Lee, when creating new articles, please don't forget to add not only the info and the source, but the categories, the era template, the stub template, the bullets in the Appearances section etc. You should already know this by now. Mauser^Comlink 15:53, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Re:User talk:Graestan

1. Did you read the notice at the top of my talk page? Please do not bother me on it about the GAN; I check the GAN periodically.
2. The objections on Wooley are not addressed. Graestan^(Talk) 16:55, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Re:

You're better off consulting the GAN requirements than asking me. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:28, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Your new projects for WP:TCW

While it is frowned upon, please do not start grabbing characters that will be in season two and in Republic Heroes. It is recommended that you wait until the episode or product is released. "Calling dibs" on a project isn't the way to go, Lee. JangFett ^Talk 18:52, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Sinker and Boost

Hey. I've updated Sinker and Boost, placing the new info after the Malevolence part. However, since Sinker's hair is depicted black in the comic (as you can see in the picture I uploaded), it is possible that the events on Khorm actually took place before Sinker bleached his hair, and therefore before "Rising Malevolence". On the other hand, he could've just dyed it black again; I'll leave it up to you to decide. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 20:44, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Zak, again

Let me reiterate what I stated in the edit summary: the Visual Guide is not a source for naval officers. In no way is that word even in the book. Please either find the correct source or remove it as speculation. CC7567 ^(talk) 16:33, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Green leader

Thank you, Lee. If you don't mind me asking, but could I have that quote? Also, is there any new information about him specifically? JangFett ^(Talk) 19:16, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

• Those two quotes are actually in the episode; also, they are mentioned in the article as well. :) JangFett ^(Talk) 19:10, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Re:Republic Heroes

You're asking the wrong guy, Lee. ;) I have Republic Heroes; however, my video card in my PC is incompatible with the game. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:34, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

• No, I haven't encountered any problems with the generators. Did you hold the button which activates the Force or just pressed it once? I think you have to hold the button a little to activate the generators; at least I did. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 19:28, October 11, 2009 (UTC)
  • I've replayed that level; actually, you have to press the button several times. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 12:58, October 12, 2009 (UTC)
    • Sorry, I don't remember what to do in that moment. Try searching the Internet for a walkthrough or something. You might also want to purchase the Prima Guide. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 18:15, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

GANs

Lee, the quality of your grammar is starting to reach the point of ridiculousness and intolerance. It doesn't matter if you aren't a native English speaker; although the ACs do not expect perfection, we expect you to learn from your previous nominations instead of displaying the same issues of lacking proper context, grammar, and even spelling over and over. Even after your nominations are copyedited, they always eventually revert back to their poor state. The GAN is not an English school; you are expected to be able to write well on your own or at least learn how to in your first few nominations. It's not the AC's job to rewrite your articles for you. If you cannot learn to write well even through the review process, your nominations will not be accepted on the GAN page and will continuously be rejected for failing to meet Rule 1 of the nomination rules: "An article must be well-written and detailed." CC7567 ^(talk) 03:57, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Re:GANs

You should be able to do this yourself, Lee. However, yes, I will give Bait another copyedit soon. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:06, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

• If that helps you. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:20, October 17, 2009 (UTC)
  • Lee, don't give up just because you cannot correct your grammar. It's fairly simple, and it requires you to read your entire article sentence-by-sentence. If something doesn't sound right, or maybe improper English, then fix it. Reading your article out loud does help a lot, and I recommend that you at least try it. You may also search on google for helpful guides on how to improve your grammar. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:29, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Gwarrk

Lee, I would address your remaining objections for Gwarrk. Currently, the ACs are voting to remove it from the page due to it being inactive for weeks. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:17, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

• All right. Make you addres my final objection for "Bomb Squad troopers". I told you to double check a source. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:21, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Bait

Lee, are you going to address the remaining objections for Bait? I see the ACs are beginning a removal vote for your nom. If you like, I can take over the nom if you're busy with other things. JangFett ^(Talk) 00:03, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

WP:TCW

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Hello everyone, this is CC7567 from WookieeProject The Clone Wars. It is currently six months after the project was started, and the number of individual projects is steadily growing. While I am happy that so many of you are writing for the WookieeProject, the majority of articles there have been sitting there for months. Several users even have ten projects or more at the moment, and I am frankly just disappointed at the level of inactivity that is befalling our articles. I understand that many of you have other obligations, and while I respect that, the responsibility falls to you to judge whether or not you're still capable of writing all of these articles, whether in time or in energy. For this reason, I once again urge you to reconsider your current projects. The criteria should be that you have the unrelenting intent to finish all of your projects within the next month. I myself have had to reconsider my own projects on account of real-life time constraints. I do not want to have to set a limit to the number of projects per user, but if it comes down to that, I will, because I do not want to see the project deteriorate and hope that you do not want to either. Thank you. CC7567 (talk) 19:19, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

• Lee, the amount of projects you have reserved on the project page is becoming rather unsightly. The fact that you do not intend to "begin work until your other GANs are improved" does not change much; they're still sitting there without any activity on your part and are collecting dust while other members could be writing them. Please reconsider your approach to you projects. I will assume that you still have no intention of working on them (as is the mindset that you're currently showing) if you do not respond within two weeks and will take action accordingly. Thank you. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:14, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfon

There was a very good image of Jayfon in full armor from The Art of Star Wars: The Clone Wars that I've added to his article. I know it was your GAN so check it out and make sure you approve. - JMAS ^{20px Hey, it's me!} 17:52, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Re: Bait

Hey Lee. First, several grammar issues still remain (mostly things such as words being left out occasionally or simply awkward phrasing). Also, I'm still seeing some phrasing that appears directly in the comic. Use some synonyms for words; do not simply copy what is in the comic. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 18:43, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

• I'm still seeing a lot of grammar mistakes. And Lee, I simply don't have much free time right now, so I can't make any promises to look over other articles at this time. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 21:13, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Lock

Well, if there's a difference between a Grand Army trooper serving on board a Star Destroyer and a Navy captain serving on a Star Destroyer, then the choice is relatively easy. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Kagi

Whether or not I nominate Kagi really depends on my real-life schedule. Right now, I hope to do some more work on the article and nominate it eventually, but if that changes, I'll let you know. Grand Moff Tranner 20px ^(Comlink) 20:46, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Clone officer GAN

Hey, Lee. I would keep the article to "Unidentified clone trooper officer" and not "clone stormtrooper". There is no source indicating that he's a stormtrooper. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Flanker

257 words. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:25, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Taquito

I saw you were requesting a copy-edit from Jedi Kasra. Master Jonathan is also a real good copy-editor, so he might be an option. Cheers. :) --Xd 18:30, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

• And I second XD's suggestion, he's better at that stuff than me. I appreciate the fact that you asked, and will give you a review.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:36, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
  • Hey, I'm Xd, not XD. :P Xd 19:38, March 7, 2010 (UTC)
  • I'm sorry, I have a total of 0 reference books. You could use Special:WhatLinksHere to track users who have it :) --Xd 18:48, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Taquito GAN

I'll tell you something: there isn't actually any new info on him from Ultimate Battles. However, the point of my request for you to check the book was to show you that GANs failing to meet Rule 3 will not be tolerated. I'm not going to press the issue, so the related objection on the GAN is now moot, but you would do well to make sure that your nominations do not fall flat in the future because of a lack of proper source coverage. Ignorance is no excuse, especially during the nomination process—if you're uncertain if there's info from a certain source, ask around before you decide to nominate the article or just check with someone who does know the material. Aside from Ultimate Battles, I'd recommend that you check The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia to see if there's any info on him there. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:22, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Taquito

There's not much info in the Visual Guide: Ultimate Battles, actually. It only says:

TAQUITO'S FATE Anakin and Obi-Wan don't believe in curses, but what should they make of the hologram showing the last moments of the Rodian star pilot Taquito? Something destroyed his ship!

So, it doesn't really contribute anything to the article, so I suggest you remove Star Wars: The Clone Wars: Visual Guide Ultimate Battles from the sources section. Good luck with the article and your GAN! :-) —Jawaman ^{No, I did NOT steal your droid!} 19:06, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Lunker

No information beyond what is in the episode and its guide is available. His homeworld is not confirmed. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:04, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

RE:Clone Officer

Yes, technically its a title, but it still functions as a rank and is known as the individual's rank in the Stormtrooper Corps.

Btw, you can source that he was a clone stormtrooper to this sentence from the Declaration of a New Order:

• The article cannot sit in such a sad state. If citing external links is beyond your abilities, please ask for help on the nomination and I'm sure someone would be willing to assist you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:54, March 29, 2010 (UTC)
  • Please stop hounding me about your nomination. I leave the talk page note asking people to not bug me about FAN and GAN objections for a reason. Believe it or not, I do follow the progress of these pages, and I'm perfectly aware of the state of each GAN at the moment, including your own. And contrary to your popular belief, the state of my outstanding objections isn't holding up the status of your nomination. Regardless whether I strike my objections or not, you still need two more Inq/AC votes, or your nomination is going nowhere. So I'm far from your biggest problem right now. Please have some patience and consideration. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:27, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Neebo

If it's not confirmed? No, we can't. She could have been presumed dead, left for dead, or a thousand other things that have yet to be specified. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:33, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Flanker

Lee, I know you've been told this before, and it has not changed. We are not an English school. It is not the job of the AC to teach you how to write with proper English grammar. This is the very first rule of nominating good articles: the article must be well-written. Basic English skills are expected of you as the nominator of a good article. Jonjedigrandmaster 20px ^{(We seed the stars)} 19:50, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

• There are way more than just "two errors." Jonjedigrandmaster 20px ^{(We seed the stars)} 16:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)
  • Lee, you should address your remaining objections for "Flanker," before the ACs remove it. JangFett ^(Talk) 15:25, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re: GAN review

I'll try to get to it when I get the chance. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:33, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Just so you know…

Jastus Farr is actually a good article. I helped promote him there, and am trying to get as many Purge Jedi as I can to good or features status. Reason I left this here rather than on the nom page is because I hate bullet points in the support section.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 19:21, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Na'daz

Yessir. Let me know if you need any assistance.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 23:34, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Jurokk

May I ask why Jurokk's quote doesn't use a proper quote template? -- 1358 ^(Talk) 16:32, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

• The source code looks like this:

[...]
|era=[[Rise of the Empire era]]{{Ref|<ref name="Revenge of the Sith novel" />}}
|affiliation=*[[Jedi Order/Legends|Jedi Order]]{{Ref|<ref name="Revenge of the Sith novel" />}}
*[[Galactic Republic/Legends|Galactic Republic]]{{Ref|<ref name="Revenge of the Sith novel" />}}
}}
<div class="quote">
:'''Jurokk''': "''Anakin, what's going on? Something's happened. Something horrible. How bad is it—?''"
:'''Vader''': [stabs Jurokk in the head] "''You've got no idea...''"
:―Jurokk and Darth Vader, shortly before the former is killed<sup class="noprint">[[Star Wars: Episode III Revenge of the Sith (novelization)|[src]]]</sup>
</div>
'''Jurokk''' was a [[Sexes/Legends|male]]...

-- 1358 ^(Talk) 17:42, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re: 2242

Yes, I plan to give it another review when I get the chance. Jonjedigrandmaster 20px ^{(We seed the stars)} 18:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Unidentified clone stormtrooper

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified clone stormtrooper has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Cylka-talk- 15:48, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

2242

I left an objection on 2242. If you resolve it quickly, I will do what I can to ensure the nomination moves more quickly. It is nearly ready for archiving except for needed votes. Graestan^(Talk) 18:25, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Flanker

Yes, many grammar issues remain. Jonjedigrandmaster 20px ^{(We seed the stars)} 19:19, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Gwarrk

It has definitely improved, but some grammar issues still remain throughout the article. Jonjedigrandmaster 20px ^{(We seed the stars)} 19:06, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Review

I will if I get the chance. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:54, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Death Watch saboteur

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified Death Watch saboteur has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster 20px (We seed the stars) 19:12, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re:GAN objections

Lee, I'll get to them when I have time. JangFett ^(Talk) 15:37, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Kilian

Thank you for your information, but if it isn't a confirmed connection, it's still OR and doesn't belong in the article. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Request

I'll add it when I get home, though I must honestly agree with Jon that you should have access to it already if you're writing CT-9/85's article. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:04, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

• Since it's a rather long quote and I don't know where you intend to split it off, I'm leaving it here so that you can implement it yourself. Hope that helps. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:31, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
  • If I get to it, I will, but please note that when I review I try to prioritize older nominations. I just want you to know that I'm not going to be able to review every single one of your articles for you, as I will not be here as much in the next few weeks, so asking help from the other ACs will probably be better for you. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:49, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

CT-9/85

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" CT-9/85 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster 20px (We seed the stars) 18:42, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Review

Could you please review Dendro for me?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 13:54, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

New Sith Wars vs. Great Galactic War

Hi Lee, I just wanted to advise you that the events of most Star Wars: The Old Republic tie-in material occurs during the [{Great Galactic War]]. I say this because your new article, Unidentified Republic Soldier (Foundry Uprising) stated that he existed during the New Sith Wars, which was a separate conflict entirely. Just FYI. Taral, Dark Lord of the Sith ^{-Just shy, not antisocial: You can talk to me!-} 19:01, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Blood

I wouldn't say it "belongs" to WP:TOR, but it does fall within the scope of our project, yes. Feel free to add your name to the participants list. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 00:14, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm still fairly new and I have a question...

How do I edit my talk page so I can "clean it up?"--Cc-7567 lover 17:35, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

CT-3423

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" CT-3423 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 21:48, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Komm Karsh

Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I fixed a couple little things n the Komm Karsh page. I know I'm not really supposed to, but I didn't think you'd be mad. It was a small spelling fix is all. Thanks for your time.--Dr. Kermit^(Complain.) 19:44, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Request

Sure thing, I'll give it a go later today. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 19:38, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Na'daz

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Na'daz has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:21, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Congrats

Hey, Commander Lee,

I just wanted to congratulate you on the successful promotion of your first WP:NSW nomination. As project lead, I would like thank you on behalf of our members and hope that you would consider contributing to our project again in the near future. Thanks again,—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 00:37, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Polus

There is no planet overview, since it's a minor planet. But I managed to find some information: its coordinates are M-6, and it's located between the Braxant Run and Celanon Spur. JangFett ^(Talk) 18:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

• Hey Commander Lee, I'll get on those quotes for you asap. Also, Nalia Adollu is within the scope of NSW; everything from each of the Darth Bane books falls under the NSW umbrella, so there is quite a bit to choose from without stepping on someone else's toes. Let me know if you need anything else, and I look forward to seeing your finished product.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹

Lunker

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Lunker has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:47, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Query

Hey, Lee. Would you mind if I write this guy? Seeing that you have reserved it on WP:TCW's current projects list, I thought I'd ask you first. Thanks in advance! -- 1358 ^(Talk) 13:26, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks. If you ever need something reviewed, let me know. :) -- 1358 ^(Talk) 17:58, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

CC-1010

Lee, please do not remove 501st Legion from the infobox in CC-1010. The CSWE confirmed that he is part of the 501st. Cheers, JangFett ^(Talk) 17:22, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Saras Loorne

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Saras Loorne has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 18:21, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Nalia Adollu

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Nalia Adollu has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:58, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Komm Karsh

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Komm Karsh has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:33, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Wikis

Could you help me with my wiki? here is the web adress: http://clonewar.wikia.com/wiki/Clonipedia_Wiki. --Capt.Scout^{20px Officers Report.} 11:20, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Advice

Lee, I would like to know why you didn't strike your objections after I properly addressed them. I see no reason why you thought they were wrong, when clearly they're right. The only objection that I keep shaking my head to is "Death in the infobox?". If you read a character article, and it said the character died on some planet, that should be an easy {{SoFixIt}}. There's no need to object to it if you read the article. I do not understand your reasoning of: "But I see it too often." That should not make you not want to fix it yourself, Lee. Hope this makes sense to you. JangFett ^(Talk) 23:23, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Info

I've been planing on writing Jag for a while now. Also, I have the CSWE info. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Broadside

Sure; I'll get the info to you ASAP. If I don't get the chance, you might be able to ask Jang for the info, as I believe he has the book too. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:53, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

• Here's your info:

Broadside: Y-Wing Bomber

• A confident, experienced fighter pilot, Broadside flies alongside his good friend Matchstick during the Republic attack on Grievous's giant warship, the Malevolence. Eager Broadside welcomes the chance to be one of the first Republic pilots to fly a Y-wing fighter.
• Talents: fighter pilot, training in military tactics
• Note: while the rest of his statistics (homeworld, species, height, etc.) are basically repeated from the clone troopers Databank entry, I would recommend using the Character Encyclopedia as a reference for them in the infobox instead, as this source is more specific to him than the general Databank entry.
• For Luck: Pilots are superstitious and most have rituals they follow to make sure they return to base safely. For Broadside and his friend Matchstick, the good luck charm is to take turns agreeing to buy the drinks when they make it through each new Republic mission.

That's basically all the new/relevant info there is. Let me know if you need anything else. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:17, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Malinth

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Malinth has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:58, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Can you help me?

Okay. Okay. I know things have been kinda rough with my bad edits and sending you out to fix 'em, but can you please help me with my wikia, www.lavasquad.wikia.com? I'm trying to delete all of the images on it except for the logo. It's about clones and stuff, so it may be a good place for you to hang out...better than this place. So, please consider. Your biggest admirer, KopakaMata97

Look at the bts

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" CT-65/91-6210 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 19:58, July 14, 2010 (UTC)

• Also, Lee, one more thing: please properly source this "Deviss was a veteran of many battles and a capable leader." It's not in the GAR guide, yet you source it to it. If it's your own assumption, please remove it. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:03, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • Does a source actually says that or you're just assuming? JangFett ^(Talk) 16:36, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
    • If a source says he's a capable leader, that's fine. Just make sure you properly source it. As for the veteran issue, if you remember what I told you about Broadside, if a source doesn't say he's a veteran, then he's not a veteran. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:05, July 15, 2010 (UTC)

Gwarrk

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Gwarrk has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Grunny (Talk) 01:13, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

• If this page speaks the truth, then congrats on writing the 100^th GA of WP:TCW! -- 1358 ^(Talk) 16:54, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pyn'gani

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Pyn'gani has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — CC7567 (talk) 22:27, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

CA template

Actually, it was decided not to create a CA template in the main namespace. If you want to use a userbox on your page, I can't stop you, but please don't create one in the main namespace. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 18:12, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

GAN/FAN objection

Hello,
please use =====headers===== when you are objecting, like this:

=====Lee attacks=====
*Objection1.
....

Thanks. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 18:05, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Skaa

Sure, since I'm working on Kungurama, I see no reason not to.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 03:38, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Just a little question

Sorry about the delay in getting back to you. Kep-She is not mentioned at all in the TCWCE, but the closest mention in the UK Comic is one of a "Jedi-led force;" basically it's only an indirect mention of the character like the one in Cat and Mouse. Also, following a quick glance at the article, you make Kep-She out to be female when the character's gender hasn't even been confirmed by the episode guide—something that you're going to want to fix. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:32, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Edit summary

Hey, Lee, when nominating an article for CA/GA/FA, please remember to add "CA/GA/FAnom" in the edit summary. When archiving the nomination, the EC/AC/Inq needs to find the nomination revision ID, and it's not easy to find it in the page history if you don't specify "nom" in the summary. Thanks. :) -- 1358 ^(Talk) 11:14, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 11:19, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lanchu Skaa

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Lanchu Skaa has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — -- 1358 (Talk) 17:25, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Wieler

Alright, here are my objections:

• "After some time a Separatist ship broke the blockade and was able to reach the surface" After some time doesn't sound very good. Maybe change it to "some time later".
• "Later the Jedi were able to destroy the weather-control station, which supervised the storm," I'm not sure "supervised" is the appropriate word here.
• In the intro, specify that the ship was piloted by Ventress.
• "When the Clone Wars broke out, Wieler served in the Republic Navy" That gives the impression that Wieler already served in the navy when the war broke out, which might not be the case. Change it to something like "During the Clone Wars, bla bla bla"
• "Wieler contacted Koon via a hologram and told the Jedi Master that the storm had recovered to full strength and that the atmospheric distortion was close to the Jedi's primary objective." What was their primary objective?
• In the P&T, you say that the reinforcements saved the Republic troops, but this is not mentioned in the bio.
• You don't have to pipelink something that is lowercase. Just make it a regular link, it'll still work fine.
• Watch out for grammar and punctuation errors. I've corrected a couple.
• Looks good otherwise. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 16:53, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Nack Movers

Hey Lee, could you check Jugs' comment to your Nack Movers nomination? It seems to be the only thing that keeps it from being archived. Thanks. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 10:21, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

• Ah, I see, but could you verify that the edit he linked is approved? -- 1358 ^(Talk) 10:25, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Broadside

Although Broadside has a relatively minor role in the episode, and although I would be willing to help you update the article, you really should be the one doing it as the article's nominator. StarWars.com usually posts the episodes the week after they air, so I would recommend that you watch the episode that way and directly use the source to update the article. If you need further help or if SW.com doesn't end up posting the episodes, then contact me and I'd be happy to help you update the article, but I'd prefer if you could handle it yourself. I'm sure that there are third-party websites that have the episodes somewhere, so you might consider looking for the episode there. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:36, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

• Hey, Lee. I saw you have problems watching the two new season three episodes. It's kinda bad they're not visible on Starwars.com to us non-US people, but I found a place to view the episodes online for free. Here's the link; that video contains both Clone Cadets and ARC Troopers. Cheers. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:41, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
  • No problem. I discovered the site from which I found that video today, so I'm happy too. :D 1358 ^(Talk) 16:56, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
• I took the liberty of briefly looking over the article in its current state, and I have two things for you: we don't know for sure that "ARC Troopers" takes place after "Shadow of Malevolence"—so we cannot specifically say that in articles—and I'm also noticing a rather disappointing wording resemblance to the work I put into my Rex project. In addition, I'd recommend that you double-check your grammar and linking. I can proofread your work after you're done with the update, but please make sure that you pay close attention to what you put into the article. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:07, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
  • I've touched up the article, but looking at all of the typographical errors, please try to be a bit more careful next time. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:17, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

GAN

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified clone trooper commander (Rishi) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:59, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Also, Lee, could I bother you to remember to specify "added GAnom" or something when you do add the GAnom tag to a nominated article? It makes it easier for us when we're archiving the nomination and trying to find that specific edit. Thanks so much. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:59, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Buzz

Hey, Lee. I saw that you have reserved Buzz as your project, however, you seem to have some articles on your to-do list before that. So, I'm asking, would you be willing to give Buzz to me? :) (I was actually going to do Gearshift, but guess who has reserved that... :P). Cheers. 1358 ^(Talk) 12:55, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks. :) 1358 ^(Talk) 17:51, September 20, 2010 (UTC)
  • Sure; I'll get to it asap. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:03, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

swtor

TOR Wiki has been nominated to become an Official Friends of Wookieepedia, and has received support votes from several users including an administrator and a bureaucrat. As a member of the TOR WookieeProject I am messaging you to ask if you would consider voting. Thanks. Alexsau1991 ^{(talk page)} 17:34, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Request

Hey, Lee. I saw Star Wars: Complete Cross-Sections listed in your collection, and I was wondering if you could help me a bit. Could you check what the book has to say regarding Venator-class Star Destroyers' place of construction? Were they all built at Kuat Drive Yards? QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 17:42, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 18:08, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Unger Gout

Hey. I couldn't help but notice you have placed Unger Gout as one of your "future projects", though I have already improved it very much (before I discovered your interest in the page--sorry!)and I'm preparing to put it up for GA once my other nomination is done. Would you like to work on it with me, or at least pre-nom review it? You can take your time to answer; I see you have alot going on right now. Sincerely, Bonslywizard20px^{(Send a transmission)} 21:53, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

• Also, I see you ahve other pages from In Service of the Republic ready to be worked on too (including Wieler), and I've been working on those too, so again, would you like to do it together?Bonslywizard20px^{(Send a transmission)} 21:58, September 22, 2010 (UTC)
• Well, obviously the sourcing is something I'll have to do in the near future (those are usually the last things I do in an article) and I'm sure you could find things that need to be done too. Like I said, its not ready yet, but hopefully will be eventually :P Bonslywizard20px^{(Send a transmission)} 23:03, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Kep-She

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Kep-She has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 03:31, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Lock

The new info is this: "A captain in Horn Company, CC-4142 fights alongside Eeth Koth. When Grievous attacks the Steadfast near Arda, Lock leads the Jedi Cruiser's defense before obeying Koth's order to evacuate in an escape pod." For the Arda issue, I would recommend reading this. The book also says that "Koth's task force is patrolling near" Arda before the battle. Let me know if you need anything else. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:14, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Villpu Nagg

• "When the Clone Wars broke out, Nagg joined the Confederacy of Independent Systems." As the Confederacy was established in 24 BBY, it is quite possible that he joined it prior to the Clone Wars. Reword.
• The way you link Fixer is not very good. Just spell his name.
• "Nagg was trusted enough by Gout to control Khorm's best defensive structure." Do we really know this was the case? Maybe it was Dooku who placed Nagg in charge of the station.
• Add Scott Hepburn as the illustrator to the Bts.
• Since he had four eyes, you may want to add that he belonged to the Ualaq race. I believe the Aqualish races are discussed in Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary, so you could probably use it as a reference, but ask around our species gurus just in case. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 19:44, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re: TCW episodes

Supply Lines and Sphere of Influence. Cheers. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:05, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

Flanker

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Flanker has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 12:30, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Flak (clone trooper)

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Flak (clone trooper) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Cylka-talk- 19:10, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

Changing the dates

Lee, while I appreciate you correcting the 22 BBY dates to 21 BBY dates in my GAs, I would like for you to not continue to do so. I had to go back and clean up some of your edits, which were correct before you edited them. Thanks, JangFett ^(Talk) 20:50, October 12, 2010 (UTC)

• While I do appreciate your efforts, Lee, as I currently don't have the time to update the dates myself, I have to echo Jang's sentiments. Please make sure to be careful when changing a multitude of articles at a time, as it's extremely easy for a horde of errors, however minor they are, to slip through. It's better to take more time and care than to hurry to change too many articles at once. Thank you. CC7567 ^(talk) 08:29, October 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • I apologize, as I wasn't referring to any specific error, but I was just giving you a general tip about being careful when zipping through edits to multiple articles. I myself experience the same problem of frequently overlooking errors, so I was just trying to prevent you from doing the same thing; apologies if it came across as overtly direct. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:37, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
    • I'm aware of that, Lee. I have ordered that young reader novel a few days ago. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:30, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
      • No need to apologize. :P I just have a lot of updates to complete. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:37, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
• Just noticed that you did it to my GAs as well. Thanks. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Dorrs and Vulf

Sure thing, but since we don't have articles for them yet, I don't recall either of them, and I don't have a ton of time on my hands right now to browse through the whole book myself, could you let me know where exactly they appear and what they are so that I can expediate my search? Thanks. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:51, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

• Ah, you meant Dorss and Vult. I'll get right on it. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:53, October 16, 2010 (UTC)
  • Okay, Dorss is the only one with any actual lines, but one does at least relate to Vult. Here's all of the dialogue for them:

• Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:05, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Image

Done. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 18:32, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re: Shura

That's the only one relating to Shura. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 18:53, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Anno Wen-Chii

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Anno Wen-Chii has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Cylka-talk- 22:36, October 18, 2010 (UTC)

Vult

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Vult has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 19:53, November 2, 2010 (UTC)

TX-20

I know it's been over a month since this happened, but why did you revert my edit of TX-20 for Supply Lines? 75.11.46.106 23:44, November 3, 2010 (UTC)

Shura

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Shura has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 18:15, November 9, 2010 (UTC)

That's Wookieepedia's 999th GA. :D 1358 ^(Talk) 18:15, November 9, 2010 (UTC)

GAN reviews

Hello, Lee. I was wondering if I could trade one review for two. :P Do you think you could review Arena Theme and General Grievous' Theme? Also, being an American, my native language is English. However, we're forced to take a foreign language (I enjoy it), so I took French. I also just decided to learn both Chinese languages on my own yesterday and can now write "Jesus" and "hello" and am learning "goodbye". I said that to say that I know how you feel with English being your second (or whatever number) language. If you ever need any help with grammar or spelling or need me to check an article for those, feel free to ask. Anyway, nice talking to ya. MasterFred20px^(Whatever) 22:01, November 17, 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations, Wookieepedian of the Month!

Congrats, Lee! You're well deserving of this honor. You have an excellent work ethic on the GAN page and an exemplary attitude in handling objections from other users. Well done! Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:32, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

• Congrats! OLIOSTER ^(talk) 05:33, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
  • Congrats Lee, keep up the hard work. :) Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 05:36, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
    • Congratulations. :) 1358 ^(Talk) 12:53, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
• Congratulations, Lee! You really deserve it. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 22:17, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
• Just thought I say congrats on your recent win. So...Congratulations! Bonslywizard20px^{(Send a transmission)} 00:09, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Tucker

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Tucker has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 13:42, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Another Broadside heading

Added an image of Broadside at the Third Battle of Kamino, and also linked to that battle in that section of his article. Take a look to make sure you don't object. - JMAS ^{20px Hey, it's me!} 19:19, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lumpy

Lee! I'm wondering if you can help me out. I noticed that you have Star Wars: The Complete Visual Dictionary, and I'm wondering if there's any chance you could look through it and let me know any and all information it has on Lumpy. I'm currently gathering sources for a User:Menkooroo/Workbench|project of mine, and any help at all would be greatly appreciated. If so, you are amazing, and if not, you are still amazing! Thank you. Menkooroo 19:06, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

• I don't know where in the book it would be, but my guess would be Chewie's entry in either the Episode III section or the classic trilogy section. Menkooroo 19:08, December 3, 2010 (UTC)
  • That's amazing! Thank you so much. :D Out of curiosity, was that from the Episode III section? The only reason I ask is because if it was, it means it was copied verbatim from Star Wars: Revenge of the Sith: The Visual Dictionary, which I would then need to add to his Sources list. Menkooroo 03:57, December 4, 2010 (UTC)
    • Merci. :) Menkooroo 11:25, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Tracer

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Tracer has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 19:45, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Help

Where is the deletion log??72.229.183.70 05:18, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

WP:TCW

Hey Clone Commander Lee. As a holder of a reserved project (or projects) for WP:TCW, I'd like to notify you that all reserved projects that have not seen any recent activity are being removed in an attempt to do some "cleaning" for the new year. You are welcome to reclaim any projects by re-entering them on the list; this is just an attempt to clear out those projects that may never see any work at all. Please contact me with any questions you may have, and have a happy new year. :) CC7567 ^(talk) 23:15, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

WP:NSW check-in

A look to the future… Hello Lee, happy new year! This is a friendly check-in from your new project head of WookieeProject New Sith Wars. Our activity has been lagging a bit of late, with only one new Featured article and one new Good article in the last three months, and no Comprehensive articles at all since their creation back in June. If you're still interested in participating in the project, I'd like to encourage you to pick an article or two to write and mark it down on our current projects listing when you have the chance. Also, if you have any questions/suggestions regarding WP:NSW, don't hesitate to ask/let me know. Let's see if we can't get this project up and running! Cheers! Your project head, Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 07:00, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Jurokk

Well, I do own it, but I don't have access to it atm. I don't recall anything about him in it but it's been years; I could easily be mistaken. Sorry about that. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:53, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

• Sure. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 20:45, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

RC-5093

Hey Lee, I believe your old CA RC-5093 is in need for some expansion. In fact, if my ideas are correct, you could make it long enough for you to GA. I wanted to give a chance to work on it so we don't have to go through the hassle of the CA redux page. Could we coordinate a time we can meet on the IRC to talk over these ideas? Thanks man. Kilson 22:43, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

• Well, first you had some reference issues, but I already fixed those for you. Second, you need to mention in the body that he was from Kamino (no infobox only stuff), and finally and most importantly, if you look at his quote in Hard Contact you will notice that when the clone retired he was 22 standard years old, but his biological age was 60 due to the advanced aging process of clones. Also, an intro and P&a could be added the Bts expanded. Kilson 17:36, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
  • I was able to expand the article to well beyond the 250 mark, and I think I could still add some to the P&t and Bts section. You could easily GA this if you want. If you are too busy, I could do it. Kilson 21:22, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • A co-nom would be great. Unfortunately, I already have four noms already on the GA page, so we can't put up anything until one of those noms passes. Until then, we can continue to work on it. Kilson Likes PIE^{(The Bakery)} 19:39, April 6, 2011 (UTC)
      • OK, I nomed it. Feel free to add anything to the nomination comments section or to address any of the objections. Kilson Likes PIE^{(The Bakery)} 23:45, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Oki

Hey Lee, there really isn't too much info—after Ahsoka, O-Mer, and Jinx are rescued from Trandoshan hunters on Wasskah by a band of Wookiees, they are taken to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant. Oki is on the landing platform with Windu, Yoda, Koon, and Skywalker to greet them when they arrive (ferried there by Sugi in the Halo). Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 16:36, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

RC-5093

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" RC-5093 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Congrats man. Thanks for letting me work on it. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 03:53, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Match Master

Thanks for the info. I just need a few more things. What was the context of the game Bralor presided over and did the book establish that all Match Masters had those assistants? NaruHina ^Talk 14px 23:44, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfon

Yes, I own it, and it's great. Jayfon doesn't do anything in particular, he's just a purchasable Free Play character called "Senate Commando (Captain)" who you can buy after completing the "Hostage Crisis" mission. I don't think he actually appears in the mission, or otherwise he's just one of many generic Senate Commandos. Just mentioning "He is available for purchase for Free Play in the game" or simply leaving it as is would be fine IMO; there are other FAs and GAs like Katuunko that just mention the character's appearance in the game in the BTS section, or just list it as an appearance.

Hope that helps.--ID-21 Dolphin 20px^(Talk) 19:55, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified dark-skinned Sith Saber

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Gaarn

May I ask why do you keep removing detail from Gaarn's BTS? It is not too lengthy, yet contains sufficient information, and I don't see a reason to remove parts of that. Of course, there might be other factors I am unaware of.—TK-999 20px^{(Rise of the Empire)} 18:15, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

• Oh, I see. Thanks for the explanation.—TK-999 20px^{(Rise of the Empire)} 17:32, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified male Sith Saber (Kesh)

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified male Sith Saber (Kesh) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Grunny (Talk) 04:17, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Kae Kwaad TC

Hey Lee, just letting you know that a new voting option has been created on the Kae Kwaad TC per general demand. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:37, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Dao

Well, Lee, personally I would advice you to concentrate on your current noms before you nominate other articles. You currently have 10ish CANs and 1 GAN currently active. Unless, of course, you can handle all those without prostrating, then it would be different. I just remember when you last nominated Dao, you left unaddressed objections for several weeks and completely avoided the nom. However, if I have time, I'll give Dao another look. JangFett ^(Talk) 20:36, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Chankar Kim

Hey Lee, I'm afraid that my brother (who lives in a different State) actually has my copy right now, so I can't be of much help. Apologies, Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 17:23, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Chankar Kim

Hey CC Lee. Are you still looking for quotes on Chankar? I might be able to help. ToRsO bOy 21:44, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

• Here you go. This is the only one for both of them. --ToRsO bOy 21:12, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dorss

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Dorss has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 19:06, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Jet

Sure thing. It might take me a few days, though, so please remind me if you don't hear back from me soon. Off the top of my head, I do remember that he has a purchasable outfit set in the Clone Wars Adventures video game Shop, so I'll get you that too. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:55, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

• I don't have the Hasbro set for Jet (CW38), so you're probably going to have to do some Googling (try "Hasbro Commander Jet") to see what the description of the set says, which will be what you can use as source material. You can check the rest of the Hasbro sets listed under the Second Battle of Geonosis article's Sources; the links are to rebelscum.com, which has descriptions for the linked sets. The CWA Shop set says that Jet specifically customized his clone armor for the Second Battle of Geonosis, though I still have to access the Shop and see exactly what it says; I'll pass it on to you when I get the chance. The Official Episode Guide Series 1 & 2 says this: "Formally known as CC-1993, Jet serves under Ki-Adi-Mundi, and leads his flame troopers into battle against the winged warriors of the Geonosian hives." I still need to check the UK Comics and The Complete Season Two for potential info, but I'll leave you with these for now. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:53, June 15, 2011 (UTC)
  • I'm aware of that, but since it's going to be published around this time, you should be able to find a description of the set. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Bomber

No problem. I've archived the CAnom for you. As soon as the inuse tag is off the article and you're finished updating it, I'll be more than happy to give 'er a prenommer. Let me know! Menkooroo 06:08, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Politrix

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Politrix has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — CC7567 (talk) 01:37, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Jurokk

That quote preceded the one in the article. ToRsO bOy 00:53, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Coruscant NIghts I

Hi :). I checked that and Zippa is mentioned, but Bilk is not. I often use Amazon to search inside books :). Sorry for my English and have a nice day :D. ShaakTi1138 07:41, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it's not much... It's chapter 46, page 337 in English version. "Jax looked at him. <<Memorabilia?>> <<It's the same holocron your father tried to buy from Zippa the Toydarian.>>, said I-Five." They are talking about Sith holocron marked SD41263.I. Hope that helps :). Sorry, buy I read CN long time ago and I don't remeber it well :) ShaakTi1138 09:13, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Movers

Unfortunately, no; he only gets mentioned as a friend of Ione Marcy who gets murdered. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:43, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Bomb

Ahh! I forgot to give it a prenom. Sorry. I guess I got caught up in the post-Inq-meeting paperwork on Sunday. :( I'm off to bed tomorrow, but I'll look at it tomorrow! I swear! Menkooroo 14:42, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Chankar Kim

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Chankar Kim has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:17, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

NTB-630 naval bomber

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" NTB-630 naval bomber has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 22:45, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Comprehensive Article Icon

Hello, I noticed on your CA Template that you have an image that has a shadow behind it. I uploaded the image below, that you can use to make your template look better. Here's what your CA Template looks like with the new image:

40px	This user helped to promote the article {{}} to Comprehensive status.

{{userbox|red|orange|[[:File:ComprehensiveIcon.png|40px]]|This user helped to promote the article '''{{}}''' to [[Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations|Comprehensive status.]]}}

Teff 22:08, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Plagiarism warning

Lee, I am issuing this notice to you as your formal administrative warning for plagiarism violation. It has been brought to my attention, not for the first time, that you have taken textual material from a Star Wars source and copied it word-for-word into a Wookieepedia article. This latest instance involves the Dao article.

Your text: His design closely resembles the side-burned British extras hired to play Imperial officers in the 1970s for the original trilogy of Star Wars films. Dao's animation model consists of Admiral Yularen's body and a recycled head from a Mandalorian citizen customized with a unique hair-do.
SW.com Episode Guide: Admiral Dao's design closely resembles the side-burn wearing British extras hired to play Imperial officers in the 1970s for Star Wars. His animation model consists of Admiral Yularen's body, and a recycled head from a Mandalorian citizen customized with a unique hair-do.

This is a glaring example of plagiarism, which is in violation of both our acting and effective Sourcing and Copyrights policies. This is far from the first time you have been guilty of this type of thing, and you have been warned about this multiple times from many users, myself included. It is your responsibility as a Wookieepedia editor to take official Star Wars text and reword it into your own writing. If I see this from you again, or if this is brought to my attention again from another user, you will be issued a temporary block from editing. Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:59, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

• Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:42, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Images

See here and here. I'll leave it up to you to add them to the articles. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:15, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re: The Cestus Deception quotes

For Baraka:

For Baraka and/or the Nexu:

For Squelsh (although part of this could also be used for Baraka):

For Nexu:

Those are all the relevant quotes I could find. Sorry it took so long. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:05, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dao

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Dao has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 03:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified clone trooper lieutenant

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified clone trooper lieutenant has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 03:21, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Essay

Hey Commander Lee,

In effort to continue the chronicling of our FA history, I am asking and encouraging you to record your personal FA statistics here please, when time permits. Any questions, don't hesitate to ask, and thanks.—Tommy 9281 Friday, July 22, 2011, 07:13 UTC

Unidentified 501st Legion clone trooper (Yoda's saber throw)

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified 501st Legion clone trooper (Yoda's saber throw) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 06:40, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Seha Dorvald

Hey Clone Commander Lee,

I see that you added an update tag on Seha Dorvald and said that it was missing minor info. Is it not something that you could add yourself? If not, please specify on the article's talk page what is required so that the necessary update can be performed. Thanks,—Tommy 9281 Monday, August 8, 2011, 19:51 UTC

Spoilers in summaries

Hey Lee, please avoid putting spoilers for recently-released material in edit summaries, as you did here. That way you avoid accidentally ruining plot points for people just looking at the recent changes feed. Thanks. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 17:56, August 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Jet

I'm unfortunately a little preoccupied right now, and I'm probably not the first person to ask for screenshots anyway; I'd recommend asking JMAS if you can. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:11, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Seha Dorvald

hey Lee,

Totally my fault. I misread who put the tag up & only now realized it was you. I'm sorry, no need to worry about any blockage because the oversight was all mine. Thank you for adding what was missing. I'll look it over & make adjustments if necessary. Again, I apologize.—Tommy 9281 Friday, October 28, 2011, 16:24 UTC

Jedi Heroes

Hey Lee. While Lock isn't directly mentioned in The Clone Wars: Jedi Heroes, there's some new info on the reason behind his assignments with Koth that can be added to his article. The info can be found here, since I already gave the info to Trayus. Let me know if I can help in any way. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:10, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

• I believe he is; I don't have it handy with me right now, but from what I remember he is. I'm not entirely sure about the UK Comics, so you'll have to give me a few days to get that info too. (Please remind me if I forget, though.) Also...to be honest, your current Sources list for Jet is nowhere near complete. He has a set in the Clone Wars Adventures Shop, for one. Besides those ones you already mentioned, I would recommend simply checking the source list for the Second Battle of Geonosis, which may or may not add new sources to your list. CC7567 ^(talk) 08:38, November 2, 2011 (UTC)
  • Also, if you just read through the Second Geonosis article, you'll pick up on some general pieces of info that you might have missed but are still relevant to Jet, including the fact that Point Rain now has a canonical significance. Try reading through the article and see what you can find. CC7567 ^(talk) 08:41, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Lego Star Wars III

I'm pretty sure Jet is not featured in the game at all, since the only episodes from the Geonosis arc that it adapts are "Weapons Factory" and "Legacy of Terror." QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 15:13, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Ringo and Oz

I'm not sure at the moment. The clone who said "so is Ringo," does look like Kix, because of his backpack, but his shoulder armor is not white. As for the other clone, the cloudiness/blurriness of the episode makes it too hard to tell. JangFett ^(Talk) 04:48, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Pursuit

Hey Lee,

No, unfortunately I don't. I can attempt to get it, but that may take a couple days, if you don't mind the wait. Let me know.—Tommy 9281 Thursday, November 10, 2011, 19:28 UTC

Re: Jet sources

He's not mentioned in any of the UK Comics I have access to. Here's what the Official Episode Guide Series 1 & 2: "Formally known as CC-1993, Jet serves under Ki-Adi-Mundi, and leads his flame troopers into battle against the winged warriors of the Geonosian hives." I can't find anything in The Complete Season Two. CC7567 ^(talk) 08:28, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

• Nope, no new info on either of them. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Clone CANs

Hey Lee, just wanted to let you know that I went through your nominated clone articles on the CAN page and moved some misplaced modifiers, as the way they were written made it sound like the dead clone commandos were mourning the individual in question. Hope you don't mind, and nice work on the articles!—Axinal ^{Convocation Chamber} 22:15, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Hardcase

No worries, Lee, and yes I'm glad that he died. :P JangFett ^(Talk) 17:31, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Waxer

First of all, if you watch the episode closely, you'll see that the message is clearly stated to have been fake, forged by Krell. And second, it's mentioned in the article. The 501st, via a fake transmission from Waxer engineered by Krell—who had fallen to the dark side—had been guided to the same location and warned about the disguised enemy. QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 14:11, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

• No worries. :) QuiGonJinn 20px^(Talk) 14:15, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sith Saber category

Hey Lee, please note that the Category:Sith Sabers includes the Category:Sith in the Lost Tribe of Sith as a subcat, so adding the latter to Sith Saber articles is unnecessary. Thank you. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:18, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sith Saber CAN

Okey-dokey. The CAN has been removed. Good luck with the GAN nom.--Cal Jedi8px ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:03, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Miller

Sorry, you must have conflicted with Wikia's last message thing. No, she hasn't written back to me yet. She was sick all this year and she's said her responses will be quite delayed. NaruHina ^Talk 14px 20:16, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Wild Space

If that's what the novel says, feel free to take whatever action is necessary. I must not have been reading carefully when I created that one. CC7567 ^(talk) 03:58, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Talia Moonseeker

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Talia Moonseeker has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 16:03, December 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ben Saber Victim

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified Sith Saber (Ben Skywalker victim) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 22:43, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Battle infoboxes

There's no harm with being thorough. Don't think of it as being stupid—think of it as leaving no room for error. It may look lengthy, but there's no reason to leave out battles just for the sake of making it "look better." CC7567 ^(talk) 21:24, December 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ringo

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Ringo has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 18:20, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Breha Organa's cousin

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Breha Organa's cousin has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — CC7567 (talk) 19:22, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified medic (Coruscant)

Please note that you have an unstricken objection for the Unidentified medic GAN, which is currently preventing the nomination from being archived. Please check it when you can. Thanks. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-nom

There's no rule about when one can re-nominate a failed candidate. I've done immediate re-noms of +8s or +9s before. It's more a strategic thing. "Will people be annoyed if I bring this back right away and vote against it?" sort of thing. Enochf 22:09, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Neebo CA review

Hello, I'm just here to inform you that your CA of Neebo is under review on the [[Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article review

CA review page]] due to it being over 250 words.--Exiled Jedi 20px (Greetings) 17:11, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re:TEA Cookie

Hey, Lee. Thank you very much for the Wookiee Cookie. :) I think you're doing a fine job working through all those CANs, and I hope to see you continue your hard work. I hope you had a happy new year!--Cal Jedi8px ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Plun Kil

Hi, thanks for helping me improve Plun Kil. I have put all of your suggestions into the article and was wondering if you could see if the article was any better. Thanks!--501st dogma 16:02, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

• Ok, thanks for telling me--501st dogma 16:13, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Review

Hey, Lee, I've been impressed with your reviews lately, mainly in the FAN and GAN page. Basically, I want to tell you something that I saw in your Sarkli review. As you're giving an article a copy-edit, you can correct minor linking, such as linking "killed." If you think the linking is an issue that the nominator has to take care of him/herself, then it's fine to state otherwise, as you did in your review. But be sure to thoroughly check an article to see if the linking isn't sporadic. Meaning, overlinking, underlinking at places, ect. As for color, it's not a requirement to link color in an article in a P&T, infobox, ect. If a nominator does link to one of our separate color articles, make sure it's not linking to a disambig page, as I mentioned in the Sarkli nom page. If there's no link at all, then you can link it yourself if you want too. Otherwise, keep up the good reviews on the FAN/GAN. You're helping the nomination process of these articles by reviewing. :) JangFett ^(Talk) 17:42, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

• No problem, Lee. I'll get to your clone FAN soon enough. :P btw I think it's time for you to archive this page. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:57, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

New talk page

Finally found some time to archive the old stuff. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 18:08, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re: MedStar II: Jedi Healer

Hey Lee, I'm afraid I don't currently have the Medstar duology with me; my brother has the books right now and it might be late February before I can get them back. Sorry that I can't help right now. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 21:15, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Coburn

Hey, Lee. Would you mind if I take Coburn on as a project? I planned to work on him for a while, and I completely understand if you'd like to write him yourself, but I'd like to tackle him if I can. Thanks. CC7567 ^(talk) 07:33, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

• Sure thing. Are you looking for any quotes at all that involve them? CC7567 ^(talk) 19:14, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • There's actually a text-searchable version of the book that can be found here. Might save us both some time, since it would take a while for me to get all of them. :P Hope that helps. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Oz

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Oz (clone trooper) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 04:29, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team)

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Unidentified Sith (Taalon's strike team) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 19:10, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Neebo

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Neebo has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 21:03, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Cookie

Cal Jedi has awarded you a Wookiee Cookie! For all your nominations and reviews on the CAN, GAN, and FAN pages.

• Keep up the good work!—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 23:13, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • I don't believe so. I'm using Monobook with Firefox on a Windows 7 and everything looks the same to me.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:11, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Sure thing. I'd suggest that you switch to Firefox, though. It works a whole lot better with Wookieepedia than IE. Cheers!—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:10, January 11, 2012 (UTC)
      • Yeah. Running Firefox with Monobook seems to work the best.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:15, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sarkli

I got around to fixing all of your issues with the article...DjMack 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Near Indosa

Would you mind looking over the Near Indosa article, and if there are no more objections that you can find, could you archive the pages so that I can put the article on GAN. ~501st Tup^{(Communications)} 21:06, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re:CC-1993

Lee, I'm aware of the objections, but I cannot look at them at this time because I'm busy. I'll try to take a look at them sometime next week. JangFett ^(Talk) 16:41, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

CR57

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" CR57 has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 23:26, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Haurgab trooper

Hi, since I'ce done some changes to the article I was wondering if you could check it over. The main things I've changed is I've deleted the homeworld note and changed his unit to the Haurgab garrison becasue as I reread the section both the 85th and 14th were part of the garrison, and the 14th did not join the 85th. This means he could have been from either unit. Thanks,---501st Dogma^(Comlink) 21:56, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hello

Nice to see you still at it now that I am back. graestan^(talk) 06:46, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sarkli (continued)

Just to let you know I got around to your final objection, but the user who keeps adding the "update" tag for the TCG material won't respond to my requests to help with the source material. DjMack 23:36, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Interest in new WP

I've been throwing around the idea of starting a WookieeProject based on Category:Entertainment. I'm asking around to see if there is enough interest to justify starting it. Would you be in any way interested? MasterFred^(Whatever) 17:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

• Since you showed interest in the project, I'm here to let you know that it is now official! MasterFred^(Whatever) 16:22, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Nap

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Nap Lagard has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — JangFett (Talk) 20:44, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Jet

No problem, Lee. One of the things you can do in the future is use the preview button and proofread your own work. It will definitely help you out. JangFett ^(Talk) 16:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Onca

Hey, could you give me some suggestions on how to get rid of "Sorry about the mess" on Onca. Thanks. ~501st Tup^{(Communications)} 18:42, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

CC-1993

"So—you've finally made it in the big leagues!" CC-1993 has been approved by the Inquisitorius and awarded Featured status. Please record your achievement here, and feel free to add the {{User featured}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The Inquisitorius thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:39, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Balith Civil War

On page 124, "Off to War: The Nu-Class attack shuttle is a standard transport for Jedi and clones on Clone Wars business for the Republic. When Anakin and Captain Rex (you can now source it to guide that Rex commanded it with Anakin) are ordered to war-torn Balith to take charge of the Third Legion, Ahsoka is unhappy to find herself left behind, but still sees them off from the landing pad at the Jedi Temple."

A box pointing to the shuttle confirmed that Torrent Company also joined Anakin and Rex. I haven't seen the episode for a while and don't plan on watching it, but it shows another clone next to Anakin and Rex onboard the shuttle. Here's what the box says: "As Anakin says farewell to his Padawan, Rex and another trooper of Torrent Company prepare to take their seats in the troop hold inside the shuttle's well-armored belly."

Basically see what you can do with the new information given, albeit fluffless :P. Hope this helps, JangFett ^(Talk) 01:55, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

• Sorry for the delay. Yeah, it says what Jang said above. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:26, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

CC-5869

You can see his article on the CWA wiki for the quote. In-game, he appears in the Training Room, just as a non-playable character and nothing else. The quote that he says to the Jedi Knight player character is on the CWA wiki page, so that should be all you need. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:48, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Near Indosa

mind archiving Near Indosa as a failed good article please so that I can put it back on CAN. Thanks. ~501st Tup^{(Communications)} 23:23, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Draa

Hi, since I am updating Draa to Good status, I was wondering something. Since his article is small due to the his brief appearence, should I add something in the BtS briefly saying that Hasbro made a figurine of Draa to sell? I know bigger articles such as CT-7567 will not have this due to the numerous figurines made, but I'm not sure about the less known clones. Thanks, 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 23:21, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

• I was wondering if you could look over Draa on my workbench and see if you can spot anything major, for example grammar, that needs to be fixed before I move it to GAN. Thanks, 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 23:48, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • Permission granted to edit the workbench. Thanks again. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 01:10, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks so much for thoroughly reviewing Draa. I really appreciate it. Thanks again, 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 15:27, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

WP:TOR

"Our time has come." Hello <insert name here>! So, it's been a little over three months since The Old Republic was released, and WookieeProject: The Old Republic, which was founded almost two years ago now, was in dire need of a revamp and update. Participation has slumped, but it's time to get back on the wagon and refocus our efforts. So here are some stats: currently, we have ten Featured Articles, thirty-one Good Articles, and thirty-four Comprehensive Articles. Cal Jedi and Coruscantfan have both been doing great work lately, but we need more users to start undertaking projects from the game and related materials. Comprehensive articles are a great way to get started, so take a leap, pick an article, and get crackin'. Beyond status articles, there are a few other ways you can help WP: TOR with it's primary goals. Those of you who have a current subscription to the game are welcome to visit our new guild page, where we're setting up in-game groups to help catalogue and confirm information here on Wookieepedia. Aside from that, our article lists can always use expansions. We have some fun new programs and challenges coming to WP:TOR in the future, so take a look at our news and discussion area for updates, and always remember to add any of your new status article successes to the news board. If you have any questions or comments, head on over to the forums or let me know on my talk page. Take a look around the updated project page, and happy hunting! Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 09:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Outbound Flight

Hi, I noticed that you own Outbound Flight. I know you said most of your books are in German and I was wondering if that was the case with this one? I need several quotes from it, but if it is in German I will have to find someone else who owns it. Thanks!- PrincessGLG 20:50, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

• Okay thanks, I'll wait and see what Omicron can come up with.- PrincessGLG 17:44, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Resolution

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Resolution (Venator-class) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 03:06, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

I want to ask you questions!

Hey, Lee,

You've written sixty-five Good articles. That's a lot! Since you've written so many --- may I ask you a few questions about Good articles and Good article writing? Since we'll be putting Good articles on the Main Page soon, I want to write a post on Wookieepedia NewsNet about it. My hope is to let casual readers of Wookieepedia know more about what Good articles are, and I want a few Wookieepedians to help tell them. Would it be OK if I asked you a few questions about your experiences writing Good articles? I'd include your answers in the NewsNet post. If so, let me know if I should ask you here, or if we should do it by e-mail. If you want to do it by e-mail, e-mail me at gradualferguson@hotmail.com . Cheers! Menkooroo 02:38, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks so much! I have two questions for you. They're both about your experiences on Wookieepedia, writing and reviewing GAs. Feel free to make the answers as long or as short as you'd like. I'll hopefully have the final post written in about a week. :)

1. Tell me about your experience writing GAs. Does writing more and more GAs make you a better writer?
2. Is reviewing important, too? Does reviewing other GAs also help improve your own writing?

Thanks again! :D Menkooroo 04:29, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

WC

SavageBob has awarded you a Wookiee Cookie! For writing the funniest edit conflict comment he's seen in a long time.

• :) ~Savage 14:12, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Bulduga

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Bulduga has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 02:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Kep-She

I'm sorry, I'm just about to turn in for the night, and I don't currently have access to it. I believe Jang has access to it, though; you could try asking him. CC7567 ^(talk) 08:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

• Here you go: "Page 91 - The Malastare crisis scaled after the [Corporate] Alliance hired Sikurdian pirates to seize Malastare's duel tankers. Trench then gathered a fleet of Alliance Fantail-class destroyers and Sikurdian privateers and blockaded the Malastare Narrows, seeking to force a settlement on the Alliance's terms. After attempts to find a diplomatic solution failed, Malastare appealed to Supreme Channcelor Valorum to intervene. Publicly, Valorum demurred. But he also feared that the Alliance might prevail in a shooting war, because the Dustig Sector Dorces were weakened by corruption and neglect. Behind the scenes, he cajoled the neighboring Tyus and Var Haden sectors to support Malastare, funneled credits to Dugs to hire privateers, and dispatched military "observers" to the scene—including the Jedi Kep-She and a capable officer named Wullf Yularen, who'd fought Skiyrd pirates with the Kwymar Sector Forces." JangFett ^(Talk) 12:51, April 9, 2012 (UTC)
  • Lee, there's some issues with the article that I like to point out if you don't mind. Mainly that Yularen was sent with Kep-She, as said above, and perhaps you could supply a date for the Christophsis battle. JangFett ^(Talk) 17:23, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Kesla Vein duel

Hey Lee, I saw you have First duel in Kesla Vein currently {{inuse}}. Would you mind adding the {{tl|Lost Tribe of Sith resurgence}} template to the bottom of the page? Thanks, Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 23:20, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

• No problem :P And yes, you're right: the first duel is up to the point that Tola blows up the speeder/runs away. We don't actually see the beginning of the second duel; all we know is that at some point she gets more Sith reinforcements, attack the Jedi again, and chase them until they flee with Nilitz. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • Haha, I'll certainly allow it. :P Here are all of the quotes from that scene:

Then the duel breaks out. When the Sith are killed, leaving just Tola:

Then as Tola uses a cable to climb the ravine, and Ben reaches out to use the Force:

Of course, feel free to separate these into smaller quotes as you see fit. I look forward to your nom; let me know if you have any more questions. :) Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 18:18, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

• A few things: there are a handful of missing links
  • Indeed, I found a lot.
• You should probably mention in the intro that Annax survived
  • Done.
• It's probably worth mentioning in the prelude why Vestara was outcast from the Sith, especially since the quote for the duel has Annax calling her a traitor. And in the interests of keeping the prelude short, you can probably remove the info about the alliance; it doesn't correspond directly to this duel, so probably isn't completely necessary.
  • Done.
    • Just a brief elaboration on why she killed a superior officer would be good here. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
      • Better?
• "Khai dispatched several Sith Sabers to the planet in order to find and capture Abeloth and his daughter as well as killing the Skywalkers." Bit of verb confusion ("killing" is incorrect); and IIRC, Operation: Shieldfall was supposed to capture/kill Abeloth, not Annax. I think Annax's team was just sent down ahead of time to kill the Skywalkers and locate Abeloth for the rest of the Sith in Shieldfall
  • Tweaked.
• After you mention Gavar Khai, make sure you specify which Khai you're referring to, instead of just saying "Khai" every time, or the reader may be confused
  • Done.
• Who's the "Keshiri Saber"? (I know; but the reader might not)
  • Adressed.
• Why is part of the duel not in chronological order? ("Seconds earlier"—why not mention what happened earlier first?)
  • Tweaked.
• "Led by the Sith Saber Tola Annax, a group consisting of four Sabers" makes it sound like it Annax was in command of four other Sabers.
  • Done.
• Their speeder actually exploded after the duel, to help cover Annax's escape
  • Done.
• The Grand Master didn't convince Kandra to meet with them; Kandra had to convince the Jedi.
  • Adressed.
• That's it; there are a couple of tiny wording tweaks to make, but nothing that isn't "sofixit"-worthy of me. (I didn't do a copy-edit since you still have the inuse tag up; do you have a preference of whether I do that now or after you nom it?) Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks.
• Oh, and for the infobox: the mission to Klatooine and Jedi Queen project are concurrent with this duel, and IIRC the Funeral of Kenth Hamner is the last event before this one, so should go in the "prev=" field. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:18, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done.
• Sorry to message again, but: Trial of Tahiri Veila was actually also concurrent. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)
  • np. Done.
• No problem :) Here's all I caught left: "Both sides were searching for the dark side entity Abeloth, which led to a duel between the two factions." I'm not entirely sure that's accurate; it was part of it, but there was also the fact that the Sith just wanted to kill the Skywalkers and capture Ves.
  • I agree but Annax's question about Abeloth makes me believe that finding her was at least a secondary goal. However, if you disagree I'm fine to change it.
    • Yeah, it was definitely a secondary goal, but it didn't lead to the duel. Her intent to kill the Skywalkers/capture Vestara led to the duel. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)
• It might be enough to just say that Tola ordered her surrender and Ves refused (you could probably remove the bit saying they "exchanged some words").
  • Done.
• Do we know for certain that the petty officer was only a former petty officer? Could Gavar not have just sent him down for this one mission without relieving him of his duty?
  • That's indeed false, it is only stated that he is a petty officer. Corrected.
• I think you could put a bit more in the aftermath from the Sith perspective: maybe just give a brief mention that they then pushed forward with Operation Shieldfall. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:23, April 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • Better?
    • Link for the confrontation please. :P And yep, a "one-against-one duel" works as a term (usually we say "one-on-one," but "one-against-one" works, too). Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 13:00, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Good article article

Hey, Lee. Thanks again for answering those questions I asked you a few weeks ago. The article that I wrote for Wookieepedia: NewsNet is now on the Main Page of Wookieepedia; check it out! Menkooroo 16:56, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

GAN Objections

Hey, Lee, just wanted to remind you that you have some objections on my GAN's for Ozurist, Galen Besk, and Vastil that are over three weeks old. I'd love it if you could take a look when you got a chance, and seeing as all three say "More to come", could you check if there are any other errors that catch your eye? Thanks. Cade Calrayn 03:41, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Updated Ultimate Guide

Hello there, I'm not sure if you have a copy of Star Wars: The Ultimate Visual Guide: Updated and Expanded, but I was flipping through it and noticed that 2242 appears in it. Since he was your GAN, I figured I would bring it to your attention. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 21:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Unidentified Jedi General (Altyr V)

I got the feeling this passed unnoticed, so since you worte this article, would you maybe take a look at my objections concerning the source? Greetings, Jedi-Meister ^»!?« 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

First Kesla Vein duel

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" First duel in Kesla Vein has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 21:56, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

Gungan bouillabaisse

Hello, I was just reading Coruscant Nights II: Street of Shadows and I came across the following mention of Gungan bouillabaisse: "Add to that the heavy, humid reek of open-air cooking, from Gungan bouillabaisse to Wookiee luau..." The soup was smelled by Den Dhur while he was in the Ploughtekal Market on Coruscant looking for a Compressed energy crystal for Jax Pavan to build a new lightsaber. The events of the book occur in 19 BBY. I guess it will probably still be a CA after the update, farewell.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:53, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Gavar Khai's petty officer

"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?" Gavar Khai's petty officer has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 01:35, June 1, 2012 (UTC)

Moonseeker is an Aargauun

I actually got a reply from Karen Miller just now (she's been sick) and she said that she was referencing old material, so Argauun was a misspelling of Aargauun. NaruHina ^Talk 20:52, June 30, 2012 (UTC)

All Stars Burn as One

Hello, I just thought I would tell you that I believe that "All Stars Burn as One" is mentioned in MedStar I: Battle Surgeons as the Republic Anthem. The passage it is mentioned in goes as follows:

• "Over the hypersound speakers came the martial strains of the Republic Anthem's first stanza—the music traditionally played whenever a ranking officer or visiting dignitary was present."

In the book, Den Dhur hears the anthem play when Admiral Tarnese Bleyd arrives for his inspection of Republic Mobile Surgical Unit 7. Thank you for your time.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:13, August 4, 2012 (UTC)

CC-5869 "Stone"

Instead of the somewhat plain closeup image of Stone with his blaster drawn, what do you think of the shot I replace it with? Still shows him with blaster drawn, but also add further depth by adding the Weequay element as to why he has his weapon drawn. Take a look and if you don't approve, just revert the change. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 02:21, September 25, 2012 (UTC)

RE: Jurokk

Hi. The picture comes from the issues rogue's gallery, called the last stand of the Jedi and showing the Jedi of Episode III. It just includes images and names so there's no additional information at all, so no need to update the article except for the new source. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:54, October 13, 2012 (UTC)

• Hi Lee, I saw that your update to Jurokk doesn't at all reflect his attending the film's briefing. Haven't watched the film for a long time, but wasn't he visible in the scene in question, or was he just intended to be in the film, but never made the final cut? If the former, than more updating needs to be done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:37, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
  • Before the retcon, when he existed separately as Unidentified bald Jedi, that's what it said. Also on the Dutch website, Sompeetalay wrote that he attended that briefing from the film. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:35, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tracer

Hello Lee, I see on CC's Warthog FAN, Tracer is considered dead, but in your article for the latter, he was just considered wounded. I think consistency should be shown for both, either you edit Tracer to reflect he is dead, or, if you feel like his death's not obvious, then convince CC so he can change Warthog too. Also, if you don't think his death is obvious, see if any articles linking to his page also say he's dead, and change them too (possibly the 21 BBY page, or whatever year that comic's supposed to take place?). Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:49, October 15, 2012 (UTC)

Omar Toggs

Hello Lee, last week the user Nightlily edited your CA Omar Toggs reflecting that he actually was first pictured in the Bounty episode instead of Revenge. Can you confirm if that's true? I know apparently the holographic bounty list appeared in that episode, but not sure if Omar Toggs was then displayed on it. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:48, November 10, 2012 (UTC)

Ando (star) in "The Clone Wars: Decide Your Destiny: The Lost Legion"

Hi Lee! I noticed you have access to The Clone Wars: Decide Your Destiny: The Lost Legion. Could you please tell me whether the star of Ando system is featured in the book (maybe it's mentioned indirectly as "sun" etc.)? Thanks! Imperators II^(Talk) 13:03, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

• Okay, so it was featured there. Did the sun appear in the skies (was visible there) or was it just mentioned in a conversation or in narration? And, if it did appear, was it during the Battle of Ando Prime? Thanks again! Imperators II^(Talk) 17:10, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
  • Hi Lee! I'm sorry to bother you again, but could you please look up the info on the Ando star for me? The things I asked you in the post above are all that's needed for me to nominate the article for GA status. Thanks again! Imperators II^(Talk) 11:36, December 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks! And two more questions: 1) was the sun shining during the Battle of Ando Prime, or was it before/after the battle? 2) in which chapter was it mentioned? Thank you! Imperators II^(Talk) 15:43, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
    • I got the info from Jinzler, but thanks anyway! Imperators II^(Talk) 18:36, December 22, 2012 (UTC)

Happy New Year!

Hey, I wanna wish you a happy new year! :) --XXLVenom998 (talk) 10:57, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re: Oz and Ringo

They don't have much dialogue (not any, if I remember right), but they're both featured in a significant part of the story. I might be able to get the information to you if you can't access it, but it would be better if you could access it yourself to make sure nothing gets missed. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:36, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

• I'll send you an email with the stuff within the next few days. Please remind me if a week passes and I haven't sent it yet; otherwise I might forget. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:39, February 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re: Bulduga

"Star Wars: The Clone Wars: The Complete Season Four: An Exclusive Tour of the DVD and Blu-ray Sets" — Star Wars Insider 136 stated that there was something regarding Bulduga's acquisition of Bane's hat in The Complete Season Four's bonus features, but it's in the Blu-ray version, which I don't have access to. CC7567 ^(talk) 14:16, March 29, 2013 (UTC)

RE: Bulduga

Hello there. Sorry, I only have the DVD set. Regards. Ressor (talk) 11:20, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re: Bulduga

Hello Lee! I'm sorry I can't help you much, I only have the DVD versions of The Clone Wars.--LennyF (talk) 12:49, March 31, 2013 (UTC)

Ringo and Oz

Hey Lee, I'll try to review Oz in the GAN redux as soon as I can. I completed Ringo's review. JangFett ^(Talk) 22:51, July 4, 2013 (UTC)