Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 72

EduCorps Meeting 72 will be held at 8:00 PM UTC / 3:00 PM ET on November 8, 2020. We will be launching an attack to destroy those Comprehensive articles once and for all.

Attack plan

Ongoing skirmishes

• Tel Trevura (diff • review)
• Amden vor Keioidian (diff • review)
• An Examination and Exploration of a Most Dangerous and Resilient Organism (diff • review)
• Hardex (diff • review)
• Hasslo (diff • review)
• Holoplaque (diff • review)
• Impoundment transmitter (diff • review)
• Nafjan T'dell (diff • review)
• Quermia (diff • review)
• Sadow (diff • review)
• Stoker (diff • review)
• Tree of Life (diff • review)

New targets

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Fneeb
  • Date doesn't appear to be sourced properly.
  • Context for locations needed (including planet).
  • Unsourced BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:05, October 7, 2020 (UTC)
• Semako Thalien
  • BtS requires citing.
  • It's worth it to note they share their name with Jervo Thalien, a fellow executive who lived in the same time period. Fan26 (Talk) 06:00, October 8, 2020 (UTC)
• Esus Mesa
  • Date ref requires expansion
  • Full release date for TOR unnecessary
  • BtS uncited. Fan26 (Talk) 16:23, October 13, 2020 (UTC)
• Quell
  • Ref 3 should specify gallery and slide(s) within episode guide.
  • Air date cannot be sourced to the new episode guide.
  • New source was added, currently points to a redlink. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:55, October 15, 2020 (UTC)
    • Corellian Premier has taken care of the redlink. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:45, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
  • BTS is missing info about 1stID. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:42, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
• Giant algae-bed
  • Per precedent set by articles such as Briala, Lifters, and Magé's aide, the Appearances should include all publications in which the story was included.
  • The story also isn't formatted properly in Ref 1.
  • Date doesn't appear to be sourced properly.
  • Unsourced BTS.
  • Last two sentences of the BTS are unnecessary and should be removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:30, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Jastaal
  • Date isn't sourced properly.
  • Remove chapter number from Ref 1.
  • Ref 2 has to use CSWECite.
  • Unsourced BTS.
  • Last sentence of BTS is unnecessary. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:35, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Han Solo Adventures audiobook should presumably be added to Appearances. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:51, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
• Sapir tea
  • The year in which the novel's events took place should be added.
  • The BTS should be amended to reflect the designation of the EU as Legends. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:45, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Ugroth's sector
  • The date needs to be properly referenced. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:46, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • Audiobook should presumably be added to Appearances. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:49, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Bars Barka
  • Quotes must not contain links.
  • Ref 3 should just be replaced with ref 1.
  • Per astrographical article precedent, this should be worded as "in the New Territories portion of the Mid Rim": " "of the galaxy's Mid Rim[1] and New Territories.[2]"
  • Per MOS, [[hyperspace]] [[Hyperlane|route]] should just become [[Hyperlane|hyperspace route]].
  • I'd like to see the article specify the world the Ubese species originated on.
  • No need to specify that a source is Legends in a Legends article.
  • Since the book doesn't illustrate Bars Barka, there's no point in mentioning the book's illustrator.
  • Erroneous grammar in the Atlas sentence.
  • We don't credit Fry and Wallace in sentences that note the grid coordinates of astro bodies.
  • The Atlas reference needs to contain the same comment as the Online Companion one. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:04, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Nigel III
  • 118 words in the body.
  • References may no longer employ page numbers.
  • Ref 1 needs to contain a comment that the info applies to the respective system.
  • Unsourced BTS.
  • Grid coordinates should be noted in BTS.
  • Kira sector also lies in the Trailing Sectors portion of the Expansion Region.
  • The fact that Nigel III is terrestrial should be noted in infobox and categorization.
  • The source doesn't establish Nigel III to be a planet.
  • Nigel III's existence can't be sourced to the Online Companion. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:10, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Apple slug
  • 165 words in the body and a total word count of 386 make this ineligible for CA, and make it GA-only territory. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:34, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
• Battle of Zehava (Nield's cousin's death)
  • Individual page numbers do not need to be referenced.
  • BTS doesn't need to mention CSWE, and "Neither source indicates the outcome of the battle" is unnecessary. Zed42 (talk) 09:04, 3 November 2020 (UTC)

Negotiations

Expand as needed.

• Membership discussion. Tommy-Macaroni 19:55, October 14, 2020 (UTC)
• Redux paperwork instructions. Tommy-Macaroni 19:55, October 14, 2020 (UTC)

The battlefield

Combatants

1. Tommy-Macaroni 19:56, October 14, 2020 (UTC)
2. Pew-pew. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:24, October 15, 2020 (UTC)
3. Don't foresee anything cropping up. Fan26 (Talk) 19:32, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:54, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
5. Zed42 (talk) 09:40, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Killed in action

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:58, 7 November 2020 (UTC)

Excuses for desertion

Imp

• Kill everything old, probe everything new, support Redux instructions item, give Tommy my vote for anything else. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:58, 7 November 2020 (UTC)

Fan

• Something last minute has come up and there's a more-than-slim possibility I can't make it today, so kill all old, probe all new, support the Redux item, Shay gets my vote should any other stuff crop up. Fan26 (Talk) 18:21, 8 November 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Fan26
• QuiGonJinn
• UberSoldat93
• Spookywilloww
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Zed42

Articles stripped of Comprehensive article status

• Amden vor Keioidian
• An Examination and Exploration of a Most Dangerous and Resilient Organism
• Hardex
• Hasslo
• Holoplaque
• Impoundment transmitter
• Nafjan T'dell
• Quermia
• Sadow
• Stoker
• Tel Trevura
• Tree of Life

Articles placed on probation

• Apple slug
• Bars Barka
• Battle of Zehava (Nield's cousin's death)
• Esus Mesa
• Fneeb
• Giant algae-bed
• Jastaal
• Nigel III
• Quell
• Sapir tea
• Semako Thalien
• Ugroth's sector

Notes

• EduCorps voted 5-0 to implement a link to an article's probation probation page on {{Tl|CAredux}} and update the instructions on Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/instructions.
• Tommy-Macaroni does paperwork and schedules Meeting 73.
• Log