Wookieepedia:Inq/Meeting 122

Inquisitorius Meeting 122 will be held at 7:00 PM UTC / 2:00 PM ET on January 17, 2021 . Please leave notes if you are unable to attend.

Agenda

Old items

• Gand/Legends (diff • review)
• Sebastian Shaw (diff • review)
• Tan Divo/Legends (diff • review)
• Alkhara/Legends (diff • review)
• Krytos virus (diff • review)
• Dlarit estate (diff • review)
• Het Nkik/Legends (diff • review)
• Ugor/Legends (diff • review)
• Malakili (diff • review)
• Mission to Vetine (diff • review)

New items

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Unidentified 501st stormtrooper
  • as it appears not confirmed whether this one's enlisted or an officer, he shouldn't be 100% confirmed as a Jango Fett clone as opposed to possibly a clone from another template (in the hypothetical scenario he's an officer, since it's confirmed in ANH alone that 501st officers aren't 100% Jango clones). Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:26, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Remove chapter and page numbers from references.
  • "Trooper" story must be formatted with {{Tales}}.
  • Infobox date doesn't need a double reference.
  • Height needs a separate note.
  • Body can benefit from more images.
  • Can use an Equipment section.
  • BTS is missing full comic release date.
  • BTS can use paragraph breaks to fit the Oasis skin.
  • Grizz Frix/Legends
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
    • Fixed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 14:10, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Remove page number and section from Ref 3.
    • Fixed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 14:10, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Date not sourced properly.
    • Fixed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 14:10, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Article has plenty of space for more images.
    • I'll dig out the Blu-ray and see what I can do, but it won't be before the meeting. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 14:10, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Unsourced BTS information. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:18, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 14:10, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
• Generis/Legends
  • Per precedent, grid coordinates should be noted in the BTS.
  • Page numbers not required in references.
  • Ref 15 should be fully linked and specify the source that provides Jinn's birth year.
  • Unsourced BTS information.
  • Audiobooks of novels listed in Appearances should be checked for mentions. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:54, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
• Rugosa/Legends
  • Remove page numbers from references.
  • Ref 19 needs to be formatted with {{WebCite}} and a backup link.
  • Opening section of History could use a subheading.
  • That section can also use an image (e.g. Toydarians).
  • "See also" template should be removed since subject is already linked in the body.
  • Redirect.
  • "Clone Wars" can be subsectioned further.
  • Unsourced BTS information.
  • The Clone Wars: Widevision card can be formatted with {{Topps}} with a link to the card and a backup link.
  • The Official Starships & Vehicles Collection 76 should specify section(s) where the subject is mentioned. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:36, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
• Rango Tel
  • None of the BBY/GrS dates are sourced properly
  • General underlinking and redirects
  • Fix bold formatting on his nickname in the intro
  • Sernpidal being an Outer Rim planet is not referenced correctly
  • The first and fifth Biography paragraphs could use breaks
  • Could definitely use an Equipment section
  • Starships & Vehicles issue in Sources should specify section. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:39, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
• Duron Qel-Droma
  • Digitize all comic images
  • Not all of the BBY dates appear to be referenced correctly
  • The article is just full of really massive paragraphs that could be reduced in size with breaks
  • The implementation of a greater number of smaller paragraphs will allow for additional images
  • I think the intro is probably way longer than it needs to be. The article body isn't that big. Three Bio subsections probably doesn't warrant an intro of this size.
  • Could probably use an Equipment section
  • BTS should include the author of "Shadows and Light" and can just remove sentences regurgitating the Sources list. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:14, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
• Oron Kira
  • General underlinking throughout
  • Remove links to disambiguation pages
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Likely none of the BBY dates are sourced correctly
  • Could probably use an Equipment section
  • The article is just full of really massive paragraphs that could be reduced in size with breaks
  • The implementation of a greater number of smaller paragraphs will allow for additional images
  • I think the intro is probably way longer than it needs to be. The article body isn't that big. Three Bio subsections probably doesn't warrant an intro of this size.
  • BTS should detail the elements of the character's first appearance, including specific comic issue, author, illustrator, publisher, and publication date
  • BTS can just remove sentences regurgitating the Sources list. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:14, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
• Buick
  • None of the BBY dates are sourced correctly
  • General underlinking
  • The Description section might be able to hold three images, but not in the article's current formatting. Some major readjustment will need to be made to make these thumbnail images look good. Otherwise, one of the images may need to be removed.
  • Reference 5 is not self-sourcing. That claim needs to be attributed to something.
  • The claim being sourced to reference 8 is pure speculation
  • Refs 7 and 9 need to use citeweb and provide backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:27, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
• Yam'rii/Legends
  • Image issues:
    • The infobox image can and should be uploaded at higher quality and a minimum of 400px in width
    • "The Huk War" section image needs to provide a backup link for its URL on its file page
    • The "Yam'rii in the galaxy" image needs to use the appropriate citation template and link to whatever specific action figure pack this image is coming from on its file page
    • BTS image needs to use citation template and provide backup link on its file page
  • Article needs to overhaul referencing to remove page and chapter numbers
  • Second intro paragraph could use a break
  • Article should sweep for incorrectly ordered ref notes (examples: [3][1]) and remove any redundant, unnecessary referencing, as was common to this article's original author; additionally, the article should revise any instances where references were just lopped onto the ends of sentences rather than sourcing individual claims mid-sentence.
  • Not all of the BBY/ABY dates are referenced correctly. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:27, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
• Han Solo's sky house
  • I'd like to verify that one of the listed sources actually refers to this subject by name as "Han Solo's sky house" to confirm that this article title isn't conjectural, as I figure this is something that was probably overlooked given the era of its original nomination
  • The infobox image is particularly poor quality. A higher-resolution scan should be able to be obtained fairly easily, and there's no reason why this image needs to weirdly crop off half of the house.
  • The 5 ABY date is not referenced correctly
  • General underlinking throughout and redirects
  • Article would do better to follow our layout precedent for other location articles (which is basically the Layout Guide's Planet-article layout)
  • BTS needs to be referenced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:27, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
• Dusty Duck – I don't want this to seem petty picking on one little thing like this, but the BTS sentence about the Star Wars Outsider thing doesn't belong in this article. That's a wholly fan-related/fanon topic that Wookieepedia has no business covering. Whatever the author chooses to do with his creation outside of the realm of official Star Wars canon is irrelevant here. Consequently, the removal of that sentence would drop this article below the 1000-word threshold, leaving it at 984 words. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:08, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Discussion

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Attendance

Positive

1. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:59, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
2. Tommy-Macaroni 18:29, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:57, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
4. MasterFred(talk) 19:00, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:12, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Negative

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:37, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Notes

Imp

• Kill the old stuff, probe the new stuff, give Tommy my vote for anything else. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:37, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

SE

• Seems there is a chance I may be stuck at work later than expected tomorrow, I'll leave some notes just in case. Kill the old things, probe the new things. For anything else, I pass my vote to Tope. Supreme Emperor (talk) 23:54, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Master Fredcerique
• Supreme Emperor
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles stripped of Featured article status

• Gand/Legends
• Sebastian Shaw
• Tan Divo
• Alkhara/Legends
• Krytos virus
• Dlarit estate
• Het Nkik/Legends
• Ugor/Legends
• Malakili
• Mission to Vetine
• Imperial Sentinel

Articles placed on probation

• Unidentified 501st stormtrooper
• Generis/Legends
• Rugosa/Legends
• Rango Tel
• Duron Qel-Droma
• Oron Kira
• Buick
• Yam'rii/Legends
• Han Solo's sky house
• Dusty Duck
• TIE/sh VIP shuttle

Notes

• Tommy-Macaroni does paperwork and schedules Meeting 123.
• Log