Dlarit estate

Things to do

  • General underlinking throughout. Of particular relevance is the Dlarit family, which doesn't have an article but probably should.
  • 7 ABY date not referenced correctly throughout
  • There's no real reason why this article shouldn't adhere to the general layout precedent for location articles, which is reflected in the Planet entry in the Layout Guide. Namely, moving "Occupants" and renaming it to "Inhabitants."
  • Adding onto the previous objection, there's a lot of really extraneous detail in this "Occupants" section about Erisi Dlarit. This article doesn't need a summary of her life and career. It only needs any relevant details pertaining to her and this estate.
  • BTS wording needs to be updated
  • Might not be a bad idea to check Essential Guide to Warfare just to make sure this isn't mentioned in there.

Removal of FA status

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