Wookieepedia:Inq/Meeting 124

The not-too-late Inquisitorius St. Patrick's Day Feast will be held at 6:00 PM UTC / 2:00 PM ET on March 20, 2021. Please attend or leave notes whether you're Irish or not.

Agenda

Old items

• Mantis Syndicate (diff • review)
• Darth Maladi (diff • review)
• Swokes Swokes/Legends (diff • review)
• CC-1119/Legends (diff • review)
• Gaeriel Captison (diff • review)
• Hindane Darcc/Legends (diff • review)
• Erisi Dlarit (diff • review)
• Onara Kuat (diff • review)
• Ottegru Grey (diff • review)
• Sic-Six/Legends (diff • review)

New items

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Proto One
  • {{Fact}} tag.
    • Probably accurate, but I can't find an official source so removed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
  • All these instances of multiple refs for one piece of info seems excessive.
    • Mostly gone. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:17, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Can 15 BBY be sourced to Polyhedron 170?
    • Technically it says 15 years before A New Hope. Fixed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
  • The use of "Star Wars canon" is a bit misleading.
    • Fixed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
  • The sourcebooks sentence in the BTS isn't really necessary.
    • Removed. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Possibly some subsectioning needed? Tommy-Macaroni 09:03, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Split up biography. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:17, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
• S-100 Stinger-class starfighter
  • Imagecat should be added.
  • Monobook-style paragraphs should be broken up.
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced.
    • Needs release dates.
    • Some unnecessary info.
    • It should clearly be stated which stats this article is going with. This should let us cut refs 3 and 4.
  • Infobox exclusive info.
  • Underlinking. Tommy-Macaroni 17:07, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
• Wam Lufba/Legends
  • Behind the scenes missing ref tags. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:38, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Height is infobox exclusive. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:18, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
• Dineé Ellberger/Legends
  • Article doesn't reflect that the Bravo 5 CCG card simultaneously also names her as Ellberger, which needs to have a template for both the sources, alongside an updated behind the scenes section to reflect such.
  • Source-regurgitation as well. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:35, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
• Endurance (Endurance-class)
  • Per precedent, manufacturer doesn't need to be specified for individual ships belonging to a ship class.
  • Generic starship traits need a separate note.
  • History can use subsectioning.
  • Image caption should connect with the article.
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced.
    • Has Sources regurgitation.
  • Add unabridged Before the Storm audiobook to Appearances and investigate abridged audiobook for a mention. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:15, 28 February 2021 (UTC)
• Ruescott Melshi - New source should be checked. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
  • Updated. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:36, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
• Celot Ratua Dil
  • The most glaring issue here is really the level of detail, which is simply inadequate. This is one of the main characters of this entire novel, so I guarantee the article could be expanded on the level of detail to get more than two Bio subsections. The intro, too, for that matter. It's hard to believe one of the main characters of the novel can only support a five-sentence intro paragraph.
  • None of the BBY dates are referenced properly.
  • General underlinking throughout
  • Avoid linking to disambig pages
  • Infobox-exclusive information, and more of the infobox fields can be filled in
  • Could probably use an Equipment section
  • BTS unsourced
  • Refs 2 and 3 need to use appropriate citation templates; ref 3 needs backup link. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:51, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
• Keir Santage/Legends
  • Article needs to reflect that the Red Squadron CCG card also synonymously established his name.
  • Behind the scenes isn't fully sourced.
  • 4 ABY citation to RotJ. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:36, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
• Gray Jedi
  • Some dates don't appear to be sourced properly.
  • Unsourced BTS information.
  • Appearances:
    • Investigate and add audiobooks to Appearances.
    • List individual comic issues instead of story arcs. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:23, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
• Garth Ezzar
  • Redlink
  • Dup link
  • Massive monobook era paragraphs should be broken down
  • Some of these sections should also be subsectioned.
  • The last two sentences of the first BTS paragraph are irrelevant.
  • Some underlinking.
  • I'd like to see some more context for Maul, given that Ezzar seems to be stealing his look. Tommy-Macaroni 08:54, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
• Inexpugnable-class tactical command ship
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • If there's a pressing need for double refs, they should be in ascending order
  • Article needs to refer to the linking section of the MoS
  • All these dates need to be checked to make sure they don't need their own ref notes
  • History can be subsectioned
  • A couple of big, monobook era paragraphs can probably be broken up
  • File links should use underscores, not spaces
  • Dup link
  • BTS:
    • Comic needs date, writer, and artist
    • Second sentence of the first paragraph seems overly speculative Tommy-Macaroni 08:54, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
  • {{CSWECite}} needs to be implemented Tommy-Macaroni 08:58, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
• Evir Derricote
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • Dates are not sourced properly.
  • Duplicate links.
  • General underlinking.
  • Avoid using "this," "these," and "now" in in-universe text.
  • Images can be enlarged.
  • Can use subsectioning.
  • "The Battle of Borleias" and "Developing the Krytos virus" image captions should be rewritten to connect with the article better.
  • Can use an Equipment section.
  • BTS:
    • Unsourced.
    • Should detail character's first visual depiction.
    • Last sentence is unnecessary.
  • Investigate and add audiobooks to Appearances. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:05, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Discussion

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Attendance

Positive

1. Tommy-Macaroni 22:04, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
2. MasterFred(talk) 18:19, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:59, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:20, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Negative

1. Per my usual schedule. Tommy has my vote for all other things. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:07, 20 March 2021 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:35, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Notes

SE

• Kill all the old, probe the new. Supreme Emperor (talk) 01:07, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• Kill the old stuff. Spare Proto One, probe the rest of the stuff. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:35, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Master Fredcerique
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles stripped of Featured article status

• Mantis Syndicate
• Darth Maladi
• Swokes Swokes/Legends
• CC-1119/Legends
• Gaeriel Captison
• Hindane Darcc/Legends
• Erisi Dlarit
• Onara Kuat
• Ottegru Grey
• Sic-Six/Legends

Articles placed on probation

• S-100 Stinger-class starfighter
• Dineé Ellberger/Legends
• Endurance (Endurance-class)
• Celot Ratua Dil
• Keir Santage/Legends
• Gray Jedi
• Garth Ezzar
• Inexpugnable-class tactical command ship
• Evir Derricote

Articles spared from probation

• Wam Lufba/Legends

Notes

• Xd1358 does paperwork and schedules Meeting 125.
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