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Onara Kuat
Things to do
- Infobox-exclusive information
- I believe we can see her hair color reasonably enough to at least call it dark, if not brown
- Skin color can be specified in infobox and article body
- General underlinking
- Not all, and possibly none, of the BBY dates are referenced correctly
- Bio thumbnail image can be enlarged and needs to format its punctuation correctly
- I find both Bio subsection titles to be lacking. The first is simply unclear as to what it's intending to mean exactly. No one in the world is going to know what "Lenoan to Danu" means until they've read through the subection, when it should be the exact opposite. The subsection title should clearly introduce the reader to what they're about to read and draw them in. And "Trouble" is such a mundane and lame subsection title. Every Star Wars character ever has "trouble." Come up with something better.
- P/T says "During her tenure, Onara was seen as a prime example of the cutthroat and labyrinth nature of Kuati politics..." Who or what saw her as this? If this can't be qualified according to the source, it should be rewritten.
- Could use an Equipment section
- BTS unsourced
- Remove duplicate link in BTS quote caption
Removal of FA status
- Placed on probation at Meeting 123. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:55, 22 February 2021 (UTC)
- FA status removed at Meeting 124. 1358 (Talk) 17:12, 24 March 2021 (UTC)