Wookieepedia:AC/Meeting 133

The 133rd AgriCorps Star Cruise will be held at 7:00 PM UTC / 3:00 PM ET on Saturday, October 10, and its destination will be the Core Worlds. Please leave notes if you are unable to attend.

The Core? Sure...

...you have your Coruscants...

• Ralltiir (diff • review)
• Dreadnought-class heavy cruiser (diff • review)
• Unidentified species (Imperial torching) (diff • review)
• The Hand of Thrawn (diff • review)
• Combined Clans Center Building (diff • review)
• Unidentified Resolute naval officer (Battle of Ryloth) (diff • review)
• Nebo (diff • review)
• Droxine (diff • review)
• Ordo Skirata (diff • review)
• Booba Fett (diff • review)
• Luuuke Skywalker (diff • review)
• Conduit worm (diff • review)
• C2-B5 (diff • review)
• Chief gunnery officer/Legends (diff • review)

...and your Alderaans and Corellias...

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Confederacy of Corporate Systems — Unnecessary context in the body, should be cut down to focus just on the Confederacy. Per New Separatist Union, this will almost definitely bring it below GA length. Zed42 (talk) 23:49, September 15, 2020 (UTC)
• Dor Gal-ram
  • The intro is humongous and needs to be rewritten/cut down significantly
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • BBY date(s) can't be sourced straight to TOTJ comics
  • General underlinking throughout
  • The image caption in the article is body is very dull. There has to be something about this character more significant to highlight than the fact that he wears a helmet.
  • Could use Equipment section
  • BTS unsourced, needs full publication dates for comic issues
  • CSWE sentence in BTS should be removed
  • Ref 2 needs CSWECite
  • A recent edit added the Sith Councilors category to this article -- why? He's never stated to be one in the article. This needs to be examined. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:57, September 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Rum Sleg
  • From examining the page history of his Legends version to check on when the uncited sentence about how his being named after Dan Bojanowski's RPG character was added, I saw upon finding it that it was added by Chuck Kallenbach. The article needs to be updated to reflect that name origin. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:42, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
    • The problem with this lies in the difficulty of properly verifying this information. This whole thing hinges on a Wookieepedia user who claims that he's Chuck Kallenbach on his userpage. While I don't doubt this is true, that's not nearly enough to reliably attribute this information. Someone would need to actually get Kallenbach to personally verify this information outside of Wookieepedia's setting, and in my opinion that's an unfair burden to place on this article in terms of maintaining its Good status. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:21, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Quiyyen
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • Can use a "Personality and traits" section and possibly an "Equipment" section.
  • Ref 1 needs to use {{CSWECite}}.
  • Unsourced BTS, which is also missing the full release date of the comic and hosts extraneous information about further mentions. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:15, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Ridge/Legends
  • Homeworld and physical traits require a separate note.
  • Is the double reference for the date in the infobox necessary?
  • Article can benefit from at least one image.
  • "Ridge was a loyal clone trooper and obeyed the orders given to him." I'm not sure this can be sourced to the film, given that he only has two words in the entire film. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:25, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
• T'chooka D'oon
  • Date note requires further elaboration.
  • Infobox exclusive information.
  • Should it be "an Nubian" or "a Nubian"? Is there a source that establishes the word beginning with a vowel sound?
  • Image formatting issues. Incorrect punctuation and too small a size for the Oasis skin.
  • Certain sentences can be rewritten to be more from D'oon's POV. Ex. "He was described as a skilled and courageous Jedi"
  • Needs an "Equipment" section.
  • Unsourced Bts.
  • Individual comic book issue requires a full release date, as well as information about the authors.
  • Bts is largely a regurgitation of the Appearances/Sources lists. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 14:00, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
• BAX-7 landspeeder
  • Main body is currently at 140 words, so intro and subsectioning needs to be removed, making it no longer eligible for the GA status.
  • Bts not sourced.
  • Last sentence of the Bts should probably just be removed. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 06:54, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified Duros (Ambush in Cloud City)
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • We don't need to specify "None" in the infobox if the character has no hair.
  • Article can benefit from the addition of at least one image. (Cloud City, Bossk, Lando etc.)
  • Can use both "Personality and traits" and "Equipment" sections.
  • "The survival of the character depends on the players' actions." Shouldn't this be elaborated upon? UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:46, September 29, 2020 (UTC)
• Noolan - 113 words. MasterFred(talk) 19:43, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
• Anno Wen-Chii
  • It's my opinion that the P/T and P/A in this article are unnecessary and should be removed
  • Can the BBY dates be sourced to the Bane novel? This should be checked, as it wasn't something that was focused on during the original nomination era.
  • Bio could use a paragraph break
  • There's no way the entire Bio can be sourced to both the Bane novel and CSWE. Something needs to be fixed there.
  • BTS is unsourced and can just remove the CSWE sentence
  • Ref 2 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:59, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Shettora's criminal faction
  • Word count in body is 153.
  • Unreferenced BTS.
  • BTS: "…and was a sequel of sorts to the previous publication, Pirates & Privateers, carrying on that book's theme by following the Far Orbit's adventures." This detail isn't really that necessary to note here.
  • The page for The Far Orbit Project indicates that the 0 ABY date cannot be directly referenced to the book. Zed42 (talk) 05:18, October 10, 2020 (UTC)

...and your Shawkens and Velusias...

Expand as needed.

• Membership discussion. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:13, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Redux paperwork instructions. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:44, October 6, 2020 (UTC)

...but then...

...you also have your Abregado-raes...

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:02, September 13, 2020 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:04, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
3. MasterFred(talk) 18:23, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
4. I shall be here in some capacity. Tommy-Macaroni 22:25, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:14, October 10, 2020 (UTC)

...and your Pollilluses...

1. 1358 ^(Talk) 10:54, October 10, 2020 (UTC)

...and how is "a poor, undeveloped Core World" not an oxymoron, anyway?

Ecks

• Kill all the old, except keep Chief gunnery officer/Legends. Probe all the new, except Rum Sleg. My thoughts on membership have been forwarded to those on IRC. Support redux paperwork changes. 1358 ^(Talk) 11:08, October 10, 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Ayrehead02
• Imperators II
• Master Fredcerique
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir

Articles stripped of Good article status

• Ralltiir
• Dreadnought-class heavy cruiser
• Unidentified species (Imperial torching)
• The Hand of Thrawn
• Combined Clans Center Building
• Unidentified Resolute naval officer (Battle of Ryloth)
• Nebo
• Droxine
• Ordo Skirata
• Booba Fett
• Luuuke Skywalker
• Conduit worm
• C2-B5

Articles placed on probation

• Confederacy of Corporate Systems
• Dor Gal-ram
• Quiyyen
• Ridge/Legends
• T'chooka D'oon
• BAX-7 landspeeder
• Unidentified Duros (Ambush in Cloud City)
• Noolan
• Anno Wen-Chii
• Shettora's criminal faction
• Gravcouch
• Rigosso

Articles spared from probation

• Rum Sleg

Articles sent to Redux

• Chief gunnery officer/Legends

Notes

• ecks does paperwork and schedules Meeting 134.
• Log
• AgriCorps voted to amend Redux instructions for instances where an article under probation is voted to undergo Redux.