Wookieepedia:AC/Meeting 134

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• Confederacy of Corporate Systems (diff • review)
• Dor Gal-ram (diff • review)
• Quiyyen (diff • review)
• Ridge/Legends (diff • review)
• T'chooka D'oon (diff • review)

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• BAX-7 landspeeder (diff • review)
• Unidentified Duros (Ambush in Cloud City) (diff • review)
• Noolan (diff • review)
• Anno Wen-Chii (diff • review)
• Shettora's criminal faction (diff • review)
• Gravcouch (diff • review)
• Rigosso (diff • review)

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• X1's Executor-class Star Dreadnought
  • Intro is excessively detailed. It is almost as long as the History section.
  • Using "this" in in-universe sections is discouraged.
  • Per recent precedent, generic starship information such as engines and general traits of the Executor-class can be included in the article.
  • Can the date be sourced directly to Battlefront: Elite Squadron?
  • Article must follow the Manual of Style in regards to linking.
  • Unsourced BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:24, October 14, 2020 (UTC)
• Wooley/Legends
  • Homeworld and height require a separate note.
  • With 4 paragraphs in the Biography, there is space for sub-sectioning and another image.
  • Article was recently updated with newly discovered BTS information. The corresponding appearance needs to use {{Del}} and {{Mo}} since deleted scenes are not canon, and the reference to the webisode should be formatted properly (example in Hobin Carsamba).
  • Redundant info about The Battle for Ryloth in BTS should be removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:29, October 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Thorgeld I
  • Duplicate link(s)
  • Per precedent with astrographical articles, the location of the Thorgeld system in the Northern Dependencies portion of the Core Worlds should be noted both in the infobox and categorization.
  • References may no longer employ page numbers.
  • A higher resolution image should be uploaded for the infobox.
  • Any information from Atlas historical maps that don't explicitly mention Thorgeld I must be removed as extrapolation, per the Layout Guide. The population map doesn't explicitly feature the planet, so the population figure applies to the system instead.
  • History should be split into several paragraphs.
  • The info on the planet's (system's) population and its cities don't really belong in the Description section.
  • Per precedent for Legends astrographical articles, the grid coordinates from the Atlas should be noted in the BTS. This should replace the unnecessary bit about Thorgeld being in the Core, and in addition, the authors of the Atlas (wrong in the article...) should not be mentioned for that bit, per precedent.
  • Sources should utilize {{1stID}}.
  • The Mandel family mansion should be noted in the infobox.
  • Per precedent with astrographical articles, the use of preposition "on" with the planet's name in a source is enough to treat it as a terrestrial planet. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:08, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Gree/Legends
  • Per precedent for Legends astrographical articles, the grid coordinates from the Atlas should be noted in the BTS.
  • The title of the Adventure Journal 8 article needs to be formatted consistently.
  • The BTS must be fully sourced and purged of any info that's redundant to the Sources list.
  • The Online Companion reference must be expanded with a comment that says the info within applies to the Gree system.
  • Ref 4 needs to utilize {{TORcite}}.
  • Refs 5 and 6 need to be cleaned up - fully linked, checked for grammar errors, utilize {{TORcite}}.
  • As a relic from the Monobook days, the Description and Inhabitants sections have rather large paragraphs that should be split up, and too small image thumbnails.
  • Surely a more interesting and informative caption than "A Gree" can be used for the image.
  • All the dates in the article need to be properly referenced. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:19, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • 1,288 words by my count. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:24, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Nigel VI
  • Intro: "The planet was somewhat cold" — where does this qualifier even come from?
  • The adventure's title and author should be mentioned in BTS. The adventure's title should avoid italicizing within quotes.
  • Parentheses should be avoided.
  • Linking issues between the infobox and Description.
  • References may no longer employ page numbers.
  • Atlas and Online Companion references must specify that the information applies to the respective system.
  • The entire Kira sector also lies in the Trailing Sectors portion of the Expansion Region.
  • No point in having a single subsection for Locations.
  • BTS must be fully sourced.
  • Instead of the useless second BTS sentence, there should be one noting Nigel VI's grid coordinates. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:17, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Obas
  • Redirect.
  • Linking inconsistency between infobox and Description.
  • Infobox-exclusive info. Quite a lot of it, actually.
  • Second paragraph of Description doesn't belong in that section.
  • Parentheses should be avoided.
  • The adventure's title should be formatted consistently.
  • The adventure's author should be noted in BTS.
  • All the sentences in BTS that merely repeat what the Sources section says should be cut.
  • References may no longer employ page numbers.
  • Atlas and Online Companion references must specify that the information applies to the respective system. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:24, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Kalandis Seven
  • The grid square N-14 in its entirety lies within the Trailing Sectors portion of the Inner Rim.
  • The atmosphere should not be described as "Type I" in the infobox (infobox-exclusive info, BTW) unless the source explicitly does that.
  • The fact that Kalandis Seven was terrestrial should be noted in infobox and categorization.
  • Per the BTS, the name of Kalandis Seven can't be sourced to TERC in Description.
  • Category:Low-gravity planets applies.
  • The date can't be sourced to the story.
  • Author of TERC should be noted.
  • BTS needs to be fully sourced.
  • Separate referencing for the full publication dates needed.
  • The title of the story should be formatted consistently.
  • Grid coordinates should be noted in BTS. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:34, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified Quarren (Ambush in Cloud City)
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • Species should be specified before the gender.
  • "None" doesn't need to be specified in the infobox if the character has no hair.
  • Article can use at least one image. (Cloud City, Bossk, Lando etc.)
  • Can use both "Personality and traits" and "Equipment" sections.
  • "The survival of the character depends on the players' actions." This could use some elaboration. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:49, October 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified Twi'lek 1 (Ambush in Cloud City)
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • Species should be specified before the gender.
  • "None" doesn't need to be specified in the infobox if the character has no hair.
  • Article can use at least one image. (Cloud City, Bossk, Lando etc.)
  • Can use both "Personality and traits" and "Equipment" sections.
  • "The survival of the character depends on the players' actions." This can use some elaboration. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:50, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified Twi'lek 2 (Ambush in Cloud City)
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • Species comes before the gender in the intro and body.
  • "None" not required in infobox if the character has no hair.
  • At least one image can be added to the article. (Cloud City, Bossk, Lando etc.)
  • Can use both "Personality and traits" and "Equipment" sections.
  • "The survival of the character depends on the players' actions." Elaboration here would be helpful. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:54, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
• Cha'nagh - Article body 130 words long. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:38, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
• OS-72-10 - Article body less than 165 words. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:13, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
• Ressa - Article body is 143 words long. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:53, 12 November 2020 (UTC)

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1. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:53, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
2. Tommy-Macaroni 23:42, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:12, 13 November 2020 (UTC)
4. MasterFred(talk) 17:59, 14 November 2020 (UTC)

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1. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:53, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

GDPR requests

Imp

• Kill everything old, probe everything new, give Tope my vote for anything else. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:53, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Ecks

• Per Imp, except Tommy gets my vote. 1358 ^(Talk) 23:09, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Ayrehead02
• Master Fredcerique
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir

GA status removed

• Confederacy of Corporate Systems
• Dor Gal-ram
• Quiyyen
• Ridge/Legends
• T'chooka D'oon
• BAX-7 landspeeder
• Unidentified Duros (Ambush in Cloud City)
• Noolan
• Anno Wen-Chii
• Shettora's criminal faction
• Gravcouch
• Rigosso

Probed

• X1's Executor-class Star Dreadnought
• Wooley/Legends
• Thorgeld I
• Gree/Legends
• Nigel VI
• Obas
• Kalandis Seven
• Unidentified Quarren (Ambush in Cloud City)
• Unidentified Twi'lek 1 (Ambush in Cloud City)
• Unidentified Twi'lek 2 (Ambush in Cloud City)
• Cha'nagh
• OS-72-10
• Ressa

Notes

• Ayrehead02 does paperwork and schedules Meeting 135.
• Log