Oct 10 21:29:54 <Imperators> alright, lads and laddies, welcome to AC Meeting One Three Three
Oct 10 21:37:21 <Toprawa> Ok, paperwork thing
Oct 10 21:37:25 <Toprawa> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:Good_article_nominations/instructions#Reduxing_GAs
Oct 10 21:37:29 <Toprawa> Add {{GAredux}} to the top of the reduxed GA. If the article is already under probation, replace {{GAcleanup}} with {{GAredux}}, changing the link to the probation page to the link to the article's Redux entry. If the article has already undergone Redux one or more times, add the number of the Redux as a parameter, i.e. {{GAredux|second}}.
Oct 10 21:37:32 <Toprawa> This makes no sense
Oct 10 21:37:36 <Toprawa> This needs to be changed to this:
Oct 10 21:38:22 <Toprawa> Add {{GAredux}} to the top of the reduxed GA. If the article is already under probation, add {{GAredux}} and remove {{GAcleanup}}. If the article has already undergone Redux one or more times, add the number of the Redux as a parameter, i.e. {{GAredux|second}}.
Oct 10 21:38:47 <Toprawa> That's all
Oct 10 21:38:52 <Imperators> thank you
Oct 10 21:38:58 <Imperators> looks straightforward
Oct 10 21:39:27 <Ayrehead> Support
Oct 10 21:39:31 <Toprawa> Though, FWIW, once we do that, there is no existing link to the currently ongoing probation page
Oct 10 21:39:33 <Toprawa> Correct me if I'm wrong
Oct 10 21:39:47 <Toprawa> So once the Redux is finished either way, someone has to go hunting for that link to complete the paperwork
Oct 10 21:39:58 <Toprawa> It's kind of inconvenient
Oct 10 21:40:14 <MasterFred> Wouldn't the link be on the talk page?
Oct 10 21:40:18 <Imperators> I don't mind it tbh
Oct 10 21:40:19 <Toprawa> No
Oct 10 21:40:30 <Toprawa> That doesn't get added to the talk page until after the probation is completed
Oct 10 21:40:47 <MasterFred> Oh wait
Oct 10 21:40:51 <MasterFred> idk what I was thinking
Oct 10 21:41:12 <MasterFred> Wouldn't it only be reduxed at a meeting, which would be the meeting where the probation would end?
Oct 10 21:41:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> Sorry, was doing washing up
Oct 10 21:41:46 <MasterFred> I support this nonetheless.
Oct 10 21:41:47 <Toprawa> Fred> No
Oct 10 21:42:02 <Toprawa> Redux is an extension of article probation
Oct 10 21:42:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> I have your full attention
Oct 10 21:42:26 <Toprawa> Probation can't really end before the Redux process is completed
Oct 10 21:42:40 <Imperators> but we've been doing this already, haven't we?
Oct 10 21:42:55 <Toprawa> Yes, but I'm saying it's not completely helpful
Oct 10 21:43:11 <Toprawa> I actually don't really see the advantage to removing {{GAcleanup}}
Oct 10 21:43:24 <Toprawa> If it's on probation, it's on probation -- why are we removing this template just because it's on Redux?
Oct 10 21:43:29 <Toprawa> Redux is part of the probation process
Oct 10 21:43:52 <Imperators> maybe so that people don't start leaving objections on the probation page during Redux?
Oct 10 21:43:55 <MasterFred> I for some reason thought we closed the GAR page when an article got reduxed. I don't see why we'd redux an article if it still had outstanding objections on its GAR.
Oct 10 21:43:59 <Tommy-Macaroni> I’m fine with having both templates when it’s on Redux
Oct 10 21:44:17 <Tommy-Macaroni> Nah redux is part of probation
Oct 10 21:44:22 <Toprawa> Imperators> I'm not sure that was really the original rationale. Either way, I don't see that as much of a problem.
Oct 10 21:44:23 <MasterFred> Wouldn't we just kill it?
Oct 10 21:44:26 <Tommy-Macaroni> So the probation only ends when the redux does
Oct 10 21:44:51 <Toprawa> Fred> Because Redux is for probation issues that are too complex to spend meeting time on
Oct 10 21:45:03 <Toprawa> Redux is the process of probation that we don't have time for at meetings
Oct 10 21:45:18 <MasterFred> Ah
Oct 10 21:45:24 <MasterFred> That does clarify it
Oct 10 21:45:43 <MasterFred> I suppose I never saw it that way, but that makes things fit together better.
Oct 10 21:46:07 <Toprawa> So to look at this proposal again...
Oct 10 21:46:19 <Toprawa> This is the current wording on the instructions page:
Oct 10 21:46:20 <Toprawa> Add {{GAredux}} to the top of the reduxed GA. If the article is already under probation, replace {{GAcleanup}} with {{GAredux}}, changing the link to the probation page to the link to the article's Redux entry. If the article has already undergone Redux one or more times, add the number of the Redux as a parameter, i.e. {{GAredux|second}}.
Oct 10 21:46:32 <Toprawa> I think we should just remove that second sentence.
Oct 10 21:46:46 <Imperators> I suppose it wouldn't bother me to have the two templates on at the same time, either
Oct 10 21:47:08 <Toprawa> The other alternative is to add a link to the probation page from the Redux page itself
Oct 10 21:47:17 <MasterFred> I was thinking that.
Oct 10 21:47:19 <Toprawa> I just think that probation page link needs to be accessible
Oct 10 21:47:34 <MasterFred> A "see objections from the recent AC meeting here"
Oct 10 21:47:36 <MasterFred> or something
Oct 10 21:47:49 <Toprawa> Just "See probation page" would work
Oct 10 21:47:53 <MasterFred> Yeah
Oct 10 21:47:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> Yeah I like that
Oct 10 21:48:01 <Ayrehead> Makes sense to me
Oct 10 21:48:03 <Toprawa> The Redux format is built in, so we can add that pretty easily, I think
Oct 10 21:48:34 <Toprawa> Ok, so proposal:
Oct 10 21:48:43 <Toprawa> Remove the second sentence from the instructions, and add link to built-in Redux template
Oct 10 21:49:02 <Toprawa> Actually
Oct 10 21:49:16 <Toprawa> Replace second sentence with sentence explaining to add link to Redux template
Oct 10 21:49:23 <Toprawa> I don't know how automated we can make it
Oct 10 21:49:25 <Toprawa> But I think you get the idea
Oct 10 21:49:33 <MasterFred> Yeah
Oct 10 21:49:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> I’ll look into automating it when I get a chance
Oct 10 21:49:42 <MasterFred> I gotta go switch my laundry before the meeting starts. :P
Oct 10 21:49:49 <MasterFred> Let's vote
Oct 10 21:50:28 <Imperators> alright, gentlemen, your votes, please. Proposal: Remove the second sentence from the relevant instructions passage, and add link to built-in Redux template. Say Support or Oppose
Oct 10 21:50:35 <Imperators> support
Oct 10 21:50:36 <MasterFred> Support
Oct 10 21:50:37 <Toprawa> Support
Oct 10 21:50:39 <Ayrehead> support
Oct 10 21:50:43 <Tommy-Macaroni> Support
Oct 10 21:50:53 <Imperators> Motion passes, code monkeys.
Oct 10 21:50:58 <Toprawa> heh
Oct 10 22:04:22 <Imperators> in the spirit of good old tradition, let's begin with old items
Oct 10 22:04:27 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ralltiir
Oct 10 22:04:27 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396577
Oct 10 22:04:27 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Ralltiir
Oct 10 22:04:27 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:04:30 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:04:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:04:33 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:04:34 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:04:49 <Imperators> ecks votes kill for anything other than Chief gunnery officer
Oct 10 22:05:03 <Imperators> Tope, you killed
Oct 10 22:05:05 <Imperators> er, Ralltiir
Oct 10 22:05:08 <Imperators> Ralltiir killed
Oct 10 22:05:10 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dreadnought-class_heavy_cruiser
Oct 10 22:05:10 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396578
Oct 10 22:05:10 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Dreadnought-class_heavy_cruiser
Oct 10 22:05:10 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:05:15 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:05:16 <Toprawa> The fake Ralltiir
Oct 10 22:05:16 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:17 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:19 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:30 <Imperators> Dreadnought killed
Oct 10 22:05:32 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_species_(Imperial_torching)
Oct 10 22:05:32 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396580
Oct 10 22:05:32 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Unidentified_species_(Imperial_torching)
Oct 10 22:05:32 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:05:35 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:35 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:05:41 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:51 <Imperators> unidentified species (AC torching) torched
Oct 10 22:05:52 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/The_Hand_of_Thrawn
Oct 10 22:05:52 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396581
Oct 10 22:05:52 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/The_Hand_of_Thrawn
Oct 10 22:05:52 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:05:55 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:57 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:05:59 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:06:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:12 <Imperators> The Hand of Thrawn killed
Oct 10 22:06:13 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Combined_Clans_Center_Building
Oct 10 22:06:13 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396582
Oct 10 22:06:13 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Combined_Clans_Center_Building_(third_review)
Oct 10 22:06:13 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:06:14 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:18 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:06:18 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:29 <Imperators> Combined Clans Center Building killed
Oct 10 22:06:30 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Resolute_naval_officer_(Battle_of_Ryloth)
Oct 10 22:06:30 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396583
Oct 10 22:06:30 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Unidentified_Resolute_naval_officer_(Battle_of_Ryloth)
Oct 10 22:06:30 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:06:37 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:40 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:06:40 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:50 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:52 <Imperators> unidentified Resolute naval officer killed
Oct 10 22:06:53 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Nebo
Oct 10 22:06:53 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396585
Oct 10 22:06:53 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Nebo
Oct 10 22:06:53 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:06:56 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:06:57 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:06:58 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:14 <Imperators> Nebo killed
Oct 10 22:07:14 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Droxine
Oct 10 22:07:14 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396586
Oct 10 22:07:14 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Droxine
Oct 10 22:07:14 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:07:22 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:07:25 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:26 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:34 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:38 <Imperators> Droxine killed
Oct 10 22:07:39 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ordo_Skirata
Oct 10 22:07:39 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396587
Oct 10 22:07:39 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Ordo_Skirata
Oct 10 22:07:39 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:07:41 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:43 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:07:45 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:52 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:56 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:07:58 <Toprawa> oops
Oct 10 22:07:59 <Toprawa> sorry
Oct 10 22:08:02 <Imperators> easy, Tope :P
Oct 10 22:08:04 <Imperators> Ordo killed
Oct 10 22:08:06 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Booba_Fett
Oct 10 22:08:06 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396588
Oct 10 22:08:06 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Booba_Fett
Oct 10 22:08:06 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:08:10 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:08:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:08:10 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:08:15 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:08:16 <Imperators> is funny cause his name contains boob
Oct 10 22:08:17 <MasterFred> That was Ralltiir sneaking through for revenge
Oct 10 22:08:21 <Tommy-Macaroni> Tope very eager to kill the last one
Oct 10 22:08:21 <Toprawa> :D
Oct 10 22:08:38 <Imperators> Boob Fett killed
Oct 10 22:08:39 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Luuuke_Skywalker
Oct 10 22:08:39 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396589
Oct 10 22:08:39 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Luuuke_Skywalker
Oct 10 22:08:39 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:08:42 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:08:47 <Toprawa> :D
Oct 10 22:08:51 <Toprawa> oops
Oct 10 22:08:52 <MasterFred> That was Ralltiir sneaking through for revenge
Oct 10 22:08:53 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:08:56 <Toprawa> XD
Oct 10 22:08:56 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:08:57 <Imperators> :D
Oct 10 22:08:58 <Tommy-Macaroni> Uh
Oct 10 22:08:59 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:09:01 <MasterFred> oop
Oct 10 22:09:03 <Tommy-Macaroni> Damn you got me
Oct 10 22:09:05 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ayhhh
Oct 10 22:09:19 <Imperators> Luuuuuke killed. I think; there's too much fun in there.
Oct 10 22:09:20 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Conduit_worm
Oct 10 22:09:20 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396590
Oct 10 22:09:20 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Conduit_worm
Oct 10 22:09:20 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:09:24 <Imperators> AV's stuff
Oct 10 22:09:25 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:09:25 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:09:25 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:09:31 <Imperators> conduit worm killed
Oct 10 22:09:33 <Toprawa> Stop the fun now. There will be none of that.
Oct 10 22:09:34 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:09:43 <Imperators> we voted that shit out
Oct 10 22:09:46 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/C2-B5
Oct 10 22:09:46 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396591
Oct 10 22:09:46 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/C2-B5
Oct 10 22:09:46 <Imperators> No change; kill
Oct 10 22:09:49 <Tommy-Macaroni> Kill
Oct 10 22:09:51 <Ayrehead> Kill
Oct 10 22:09:52 <Toprawa> Kill
Oct 10 22:09:58 <MasterFred> kill
Oct 10 22:10:11 <Imperators> man, Anil's stuff falls by the dozens
Oct 10 22:10:15 <Imperators> C2-B5 killed
Oct 10 22:10:16 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Chief_gunnery_officer/Legends
Oct 10 22:10:16 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/index.php?diff=cur&oldid=9396592
Oct 10 22:10:16 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Wookieepedia:AC/Chief_gunnery_officer/Legends
Oct 10 22:10:16 <Imperators> Hanzo has put enough work in this by now that I recommend Redux
Oct 10 22:10:25 <Ayrehead> Redux
Oct 10 22:10:25 <Toprawa> A well-earned Redux
Oct 10 22:10:27 <Tommy-Macaroni> Redux
Oct 10 22:10:32 <MasterFred> Redux
Oct 10 22:10:33 <Imperators> Redux
Oct 10 22:10:42 <Imperators> Chief gunnery officer Reduxed
Oct 10 22:10:49 <Imperators> alright, take a few breaths
Oct 10 22:10:58 <Imperators> and onto the new stuff
Oct 10 22:11:00 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Confederacy_of_Corporate_Systems
Oct 10 22:11:00 <Imperators> *Unnecessary context in the body, should be cut down to focus just on the Confederacy. Per New Separatist Union, this will almost definitely bring it below GA length. Zed42 (talk) 23:49, September 15, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:11:07 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:11:11 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:11:12 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:11:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:11:13 <Ayrehead> Didn't this get past like 5 minutes ago?
Oct 10 22:11:15 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:11:17 <Toprawa> Yes
Oct 10 22:11:27 <Imperators> easy come easy go
Oct 10 22:11:30 <Toprawa> The he nominated New Separatist Union with the exact same text
Oct 10 22:11:38 <Imperators> Confederacy probed
Oct 10 22:11:38 <Toprawa> I objected to like all of it on the grounds of being unnecessary fluff
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Dor_Gal-ram
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *The intro is humongous and needs to be rewritten/cut down significantly
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *Infobox-exclusive information
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *BBY date(s) can't be sourced straight to TOTJ comics
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *General underlinking throughout
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *The image caption in the article is body is very dull. There has to be something about this character more significant to highlight than the fact that he wears a helmet.
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *Could use Equipment section
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *BTS unsourced, needs full publication dates for comic issues
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *CSWE sentence in BTS should be removed
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *Ref 2 needs CSWECite
Oct 10 22:11:41 <Imperators> *A recent edit added the Sith Councilors category to this article -- why? He's never stated to be one in the article. This needs to be examined. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:57, September 17, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:11:45 <Toprawa> It got knocked down below 165 words
Oct 10 22:11:48 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:11:57 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:11:59 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:12:01 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:12:01 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:12:08 <Imperators> Dor Gal-ram probed
Oct 10 22:12:09 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rum_Sleg
Oct 10 22:12:09 <Imperators> From examining the page history of his Legends version to check on when the uncited sentence about how his being named after Dan Bojanowski's RPG character was added, I saw upon finding it that it was added by Chuck Kallenbach. The article needs to be updated to reflect that name origin. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:42, September 19, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:12:12 <Imperators> "upon finding it" linked to: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rum_Sleg/Legends?diff=2655063&oldid=2645291
Oct 10 22:12:16 <Imperators> Comment by Tope: The problem with this lies in the difficulty of properly verifying this information. This whole thing hinges on a Wookieepedia user who claims that he's Chuck Kallenbach on his userpage. While I don't doubt this is true, that's not nearly enough to reliably attribute this information. Someone would need to actually get Kallenbach to personally verify this information outside of Wookieepedia's
Oct 10 22:12:16 <Imperators> setting, and in my opinion that's an unfair burden to place on this article in terms of maintaining its Good status. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:21, October 1, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:12:24 <Imperators> spare
Oct 10 22:12:28 <Toprawa> I mean, it's something that ideally should be done
Oct 10 22:12:35 <Toprawa> But I'm not going to penalize an article for not doing it
Oct 10 22:12:39 <Ayrehead> Ah what the fuck
Oct 10 22:12:44 <Ayrehead> How did I miss this
Oct 10 22:12:47 <Imperators> lol
Oct 10 22:13:00 <Toprawa> Spare
Oct 10 22:13:01 <Imperators> visit the meeting page more often :P
Oct 10 22:13:07 <Tommy-Macaroni> Ugh
Oct 10 22:13:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Spare the
Oct 10 22:13:10 <MasterFred> Yeah spare
Oct 10 22:13:13 <Tommy-Macaroni> *n
Oct 10 22:13:17 <Imperators> Rum you spared
Oct 10 22:13:21 <Ayrehead> Spare
Oct 10 22:13:24 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Quiyyen
Oct 10 22:13:24 <Imperators> *Infobox-exclusive information.
Oct 10 22:13:24 <Imperators> *Can use a "Personality and traits" section and possibly an "Equipment" section.
Oct 10 22:13:24 <Imperators> *Ref 1 needs to use {{CSWECite}}.
Oct 10 22:13:24 <Imperators> *Unsourced BTS, which is also missing the full release date of the comic and hosts extraneous information about further mentions. Shayanomer (talk) 19:15, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:13:29 <Ayrehead> I can ask Kallenbach on Twitter
Oct 10 22:13:39 <MasterFred> That'd be great
Oct 10 22:13:39 <Toprawa> I think he gave you his email address too on your talk page or something
Oct 10 22:13:40 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:13:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:13:45 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:13:47 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:13:47 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:14:18 <Imperators> Quiyyen "Star Wars just isn't the same without double y" probed
Oct 10 22:14:21 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Ridge/Legends
Oct 10 22:14:21 <Imperators> *Homeworld and physical traits require a separate note.
Oct 10 22:14:21 <Imperators> *Is the double reference for the date in the infobox necessary?
Oct 10 22:14:21 <Imperators> *Article can benefit from at least one image.
Oct 10 22:14:21 <Imperators> *"Ridge was a loyal clone trooper and obeyed the orders given to him." I'm not sure this can be sourced to the film, given that he only has two words in the entire film. Shayanomer (talk) 19:25, September 21, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:14:27 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:14:28 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:14:29 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:14:36 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:14:42 <Tommy-Macaroni> Prove
Oct 10 22:14:44 <Tommy-Macaroni> *b
Oct 10 22:14:52 <Imperators> Ridge proved
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/T%27chooka_D%27oon
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Date note requires further elaboration.
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Infobox exclusive information.
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Should it be "an Nubian" or "a Nubian"? Is there a source that establishes the word beginning with a vowel sound?
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Image formatting issues. Incorrect punctuation and too small a size for the Oasis skin.
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Certain sentences can be rewritten to be more from D'oon's POV. Ex. "He was described as a skilled and courageous Jedi"
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Needs an "Equipment" section.
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Unsourced Bts.
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Individual comic book issue requires a full release date, as well as information about the authors.
Oct 10 22:14:53 <Imperators> *Bts is largely a regurgitation of the Appearances/Sources lists. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 14:00, September 23, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:14:57 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:15:12 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:13 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:22 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:23 <Imperators> T'chooka probed
Oct 10 22:15:24 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/BAX-7_landspeeder
Oct 10 22:15:24 <Imperators> *Main body is currently at 140 words, so intro and subsectioning needs to be removed, making it no longer eligible for the GA status.
Oct 10 22:15:24 <Imperators> *Bts not sourced.
Oct 10 22:15:24 <Imperators> *Last sentence of the Bts should probably just be removed. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 06:54, September 24, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:15:27 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:15:28 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:30 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:35 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:36 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:38 <Imperators> BAX-7 probed
Oct 10 22:15:39 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Unidentified_Duros_(Ambush_in_Cloud_City)
Oct 10 22:15:39 <Imperators> *Infobox-exclusive information.
Oct 10 22:15:39 <Imperators> *We don't need to specify "None" in the infobox if the character has no hair.
Oct 10 22:15:39 <Imperators> *Article can benefit from the addition of at least one image. (Cloud City, Bossk, Lando etc.)
Oct 10 22:15:39 <Imperators> *Can use both "Personality and traits" and "Equipment" sections.
Oct 10 22:15:39 <Imperators> *"The survival of the character depends on the players' actions." Shouldn't this be elaborated upon? Shayanomer (talk) 14:46, September 29, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:15:41 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:15:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:49 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:15:49 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:05 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:07 <Imperators> Unidentified Duros probed
Oct 10 22:16:07 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Noolan
Oct 10 22:16:07 <Imperators> *113 words. MasterFred(talk) 19:43, September 30, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:16:09 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:16:10 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:13 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:13 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:14 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:17 <Imperators> Noolan probed
Oct 10 22:16:18 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Anno_Wen-Chii
Oct 10 22:16:18 <Imperators> *It's my opinion that the P/T and P/A in this article are unnecessary and should be removed
Oct 10 22:16:18 <Imperators> *Can the BBY dates be sourced to the Bane novel? This should be checked, as it wasn't something that was focused on during the original nomination era.
Oct 10 22:16:18 <Imperators> *Bio could use a paragraph break
Oct 10 22:16:18 <Imperators> *There's no way the entire Bio can be sourced to both the Bane novel and CSWE. Something needs to be fixed there.
Oct 10 22:16:18 <Imperators> *BTS is unsourced and can just remove the CSWE sentence
Oct 10 22:16:18 <Imperators> *Ref 2 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:59, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:16:22 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:16:31 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:36 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:37 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:16:40 <Toprawa> Can we just clarify that Noolan was for 113 words in the article body?
Oct 10 22:16:45 <Toprawa> You're kind of moving a little quick here
Oct 10 22:16:55 <Toprawa> Someone looking at that might not understand
Oct 10 22:17:05 <Imperators> it should be clarified on the review page, yes :P
Oct 10 22:17:07 <Toprawa> Whoever is doing paperwork
Oct 10 22:17:09 <Toprawa> Thanks
Oct 10 22:17:11 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:17:21 <Imperators> Anno probed
Oct 10 22:17:24 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Shettora%27s_criminal_faction
Oct 10 22:17:24 <Imperators> *Word count in body is 153.
Oct 10 22:17:24 <Imperators> *Unreferenced BTS.
Oct 10 22:17:24 <Imperators> *BTS: "…and was a sequel of sorts to the previous publication, Pirates & Privateers, carrying on that book's theme by following the Far Orbit's adventures." This detail isn't really that necessary to note here.
Oct 10 22:17:24 <Imperators> *The page for The Far Orbit Project indicates that the 0 ABY date cannot be directly referenced to the book. Zed42 (talk) 05:18, October 10, 2020 (UTC)
Oct 10 22:17:27 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:17:32 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:17:33 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:17:35 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:17:36 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:17:45 <Imperators> Shettora's gang probed
Oct 10 22:17:49 <Imperators> alright, that's it
Oct 10 22:17:54 <Imperators> anyone bring anything else?
Oct 10 22:17:58 <Toprawa> No :P
Oct 10 22:18:02 <Tommy-Macaroni> Nothing from me
Oct 10 22:18:04 <MasterFred> Negatory
Oct 10 22:18:07 <Ayrehead> Nothing from me
Oct 10 22:18:21 <Imperators> the bin...
Oct 10 22:18:38 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Gravcouch
Oct 10 22:18:43 <Imperators> update from WEG stuff needed
Oct 10 22:18:49 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:18:55 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:19:10 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:19:12 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:19:25 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:19:27 <Imperators> gravcouch probed
Oct 10 22:19:28 <Imperators> https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Rigosso
Oct 10 22:19:35 <Imperators> update from a source more than a month old
Oct 10 22:19:37 <Imperators> probe
Oct 10 22:19:38 <Toprawa> Probe
Oct 10 22:19:40 <Ayrehead> Probe
Oct 10 22:19:45 <MasterFred> Probe
Oct 10 22:19:47 <Tommy-Macaroni> Probe
Oct 10 22:19:56 <Imperators> Rigosso probed
Oct 10 22:20:04 <Imperators> and Trandosha gets a pass because that's from Squadrons
Oct 10 22:20:16 <Imperators> (Oct 2)
Oct 10 22:20:26 <Imperators> okay, ecks is on paperwork
Oct 10 22:20:30 <Imperators> and I believe that's it
Oct 10 22:20:35 <Imperators> A+ for effort, gentlemen