Wookieepedia:AC/Meeting 129

AgriCorps Meeting 129 will be held at 3 PM ET / 7 PM UTC on Saturday, June 20, 2020. Please leave notes if you are unable to attend, otherwise you will be executed for treason against the Republic.

Enemies of the state

Jedi Generals

• Royal Crusader (diff • review)
• Imperial Oasis (diff • review)
• Aaph Koden (diff • review)
• EV-9D9 (diff • review)
• The Most Honourable Guild of Armourers (diff • review)
• Fedje (diff • review)
• Vo Lian (diff • review)
• Rokarn Vth'naar (diff • review)
• Veshta (diff • review)

Padawan learners

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Article that wasn't finished at Meeting 128:
  • Christya - significant changes to the behind the scenes surrounding gameplay alternatives since the article became a GA. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 06:50, May 7, 2020 (UTC)
    • I decided to give this a copy-edit while it's up for the agenda and have come up with the following objections:
      • To whom is the lead quote being addressed? Revan? This should be specified.
      • Grammatically, there should be a comma after "play your cards right" in the Bio quote. Do the game's captions omit this punctuation?
      • Again, the Bio quote should indicate the recipient. Presumably Revan?
      • Since the KOTORCG reference note is being used to cite a specific event and not just a single date, I feel like that ref note needs a little bit more to explain how/why it's being tied into the events of the game, and more specifically Christya's appearance.
      • Christya's Bio quote makes a pretty clear indication that she's inviting Revan into a romantic encounter. This should be detailed in the article somehow, especially since she then leaves with someone else for what be interpreted to be for the same reasons.
      • The article says, "Revan handed her the money eagerly, and Christya began to move to the bar, telling him not to take too long." Which I find kind of unclear. Take long doing what? What is Revan doing instead of following her to the bar?
      • BTS should detail video game's release date and developer. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:19, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
• Hewett
  • 145 words in the body.
  • The BBY date can't be referenced directly to the book, therefore it needs citation. Imperators II^(Talk) 23:01, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
• Gektl
  • 1,194 words by my count.
  • Unsourced BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:48, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Old Republic: Fatal Alliance audiobook presumably needs to be added to the Appearances list. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:02, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Frontier Justice - 140 words in article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:42, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
• Labansat - 143 words in article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:35, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Menndo - 123 words in article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:37, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Villar - 140 words in article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:39, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Mala Tinero - for a few years, has had an unsourced sentence in BTS. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 06:59, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • Also lacks an Equipment section. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:08, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • Both addressed. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:50, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified WED-15 Treadwell (Lars homestead) - overlooked at meeting 125 was the article only being 128 words in body. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 06:59, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Squawk - 1,089 words, had a failed FAN over 6 years ago. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:55, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • No "Skills and abilities" section.
  • Unsourced BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:16, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
  • Per precedent in Crag, Squawk's homeworld and physical features as a clone need a separate note. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:22, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Aura of uneasiness - Update needed. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:20, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • The abridged Dark Apprentice audiobook needs to be checked for a possible appearance of the subject, and the unabridged one presumably needs to be added to the Appearances list. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:02, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Hewett - Citation needed for ABY date. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 06:22, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified clone trooper pilot (Bothawui)
  • Homeworld and physical traits require an explanation per precedent (Crag, TX-828).
  • No "Personality and traits" section.
  • No "Equipment" section.
  • "...the clone was voiced by Dee Bradley Baker, who voices all other clone troopers in the show as well." This cannot be sourced to the episode guide and should be reworded. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:24, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
    • All fixed. There's not really enough information on his Equipment to warrant a separate section so I've integrated it into the bio. 1358 ^(Talk) 10:41, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
      • Striking this from the agenda per AC IRC consensus. 1358 ^(Talk) 10:45, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
• Shylar
  • The date referencing in this article is a mess.
    • Firstly, there's little reason why the death date needs three ref notes in the infobox. All of that can and should be combined into a single explanatory ref note.
    • NEC in ref 3 can't really be used like that since that source does not make mention of Shylar's involvement in these events. There's a better and more relevant way to source this information using the sources that Shylar appears in.
    • The intro claims that Shylar's actions take place in 22 BBY (as does the infobox), but the Bio really doesn't cover this. It just introduces her events as taking placing six months after the start of the war in 22 BBY; the article needs to establish how/why this is in 22 BBY as opposed to 21 BBY.
  • I'm sure this could support an Equipment section.
  • BTS is unsourced and should mention publisher. The last sentence is also filler and should just be removed. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:50, June 13, 2020 (UTC)
• Odin Nesloor/Legends - Article body is 143 words, by my count. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:40, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• B1 grapple droid - 111 words in article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:14, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

Children of the Force

Expand as needed.

• Ceasing randomisation of paperwork and scheduling duties. Tommy-Macaroni 11:18, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
• /Hopefully/ presenting some changes to the GAN to make it, the CAN, and the FAN uniform. Tommy-Macaroni 11:18, June 6, 2020 (UTC)

Boys in White

Good soldiers follow orders

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:10, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
2. Tommy-Macaroni 21:12, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:26, June 19, 2020 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 15:29, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:58, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
6. MasterFredcerique 18:02, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

I had my control chip removed

1. Work. 1358 ^(Talk) 10:19, June 6, 2020 (UTC)

Examination report

Ecks

Sorry but it's impossible to try to leave decent notes on mobile, so I have to give Anil my vote. Support both proposals. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:16, June 20, 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• AnilSerifoglu
• Ayrehead02
• Imperators II
• Master Fredcerique
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles stripped of Good Article status

• Royal Crusader
• Imperial Oasis
• Aaph Koden
• EV-9D9
• The Most Honourable Guild of Armourers
• Fedje
• Vo Lian
• Rokarn Vth'naar
• Veshta

Articles placed on probation

• Christya
• Hewett
• Gektl
• Frontier Justice
• Labansat
• Menndo
• Unidentified WED-15 Treadwell (Lars homestead)
• Squawk
• Aura of uneasiness
• Shylar
• Odin Nesloor/Legends
• B1 grapple droid
• Mala Tinero

Notes

• The AgriCorps voted 6-0 to stop randomization of paperwork duties. The current schedule will run until finished (at Meeting 133), after which a permanent list of duties in alphabetical order will be created, which will loop back to the start once complete.
• The AgriCorps voted 6-0 to implement updated wording throughout Wookieepedia:Good article nominations.
• Tommy-Macaroni does paperwork and schedules Meeting 130.
• Log