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Aaph Koden
Things to do
- 1,030 words, above GAN word limit.
- Starsider can feel free to revert my edit, but it would appear that the entire last paragraph was unneeded. Not sure if the text about her being a level 8 vs 10 NPC is necessary, seems similar to the gameplay stats in CCG or other cards which is considered not. Likewise, the strategy guides mentioning her weapons not shown in the game would further not be necessary unless they're an apparent contradiction, and given how both are treated as in universe info in the equipment section, evidently they're not. I counted 80 words in that paragraph before I stopped counting any further, so article should be definitely under 1000 words now. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 06:58, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
- While much of it was certainly Sources list regurgitation fluff, any details mentioned about the character from the strategy guides needs to be incorporated into the article body. The article appeared to take the position that these details somehow don't count because they weren't represented in the game, which is nonsense. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:12, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
- From checking both before my edit, and then checking again after the above comment, all the behind the scenes information from strategy guides already is in the in universe sections. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:37, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
- Makes sense to me. Especially the stuff about her level stats, etc. It probably was information overkill.StarsiderSWG (talk) 02:51, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
- From checking both before my edit, and then checking again after the above comment, all the behind the scenes information from strategy guides already is in the in universe sections. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:37, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
- While much of it was certainly Sources list regurgitation fluff, any details mentioned about the character from the strategy guides needs to be incorporated into the article body. The article appeared to take the position that these details somehow don't count because they weren't represented in the game, which is nonsense. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:12, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
- Starsider can feel free to revert my edit, but it would appear that the entire last paragraph was unneeded. Not sure if the text about her being a level 8 vs 10 NPC is necessary, seems similar to the gameplay stats in CCG or other cards which is considered not. Likewise, the strategy guides mentioning her weapons not shown in the game would further not be necessary unless they're an apparent contradiction, and given how both are treated as in universe info in the equipment section, evidently they're not. I counted 80 words in that paragraph before I stopped counting any further, so article should be definitely under 1000 words now. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 06:58, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
- The infobox and categories suggest that Tatooine was Koden's homeworld; however, there is no such indication in the rest of the article. This needs to be checked.
- About the BTS section about Koden's insignia plaque, is the insignia actually identified "elsewhere in the game"? And how so? If the game explicitly says that Koden's insignia denoted the rank of lieutenant, or Koden was simply a lieutenant, then there is no need for such an explanation. If not, this should be explained in a reference note included in an in-universe section of the article.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:17, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
- I may be a little late here, but I've gone ahead to edit the article in a manner which I believe sufficiently satisfies these issues. For one, I removed the bit from the BtS regarding the lietenant rank, since it is redundant. Aaph Koden was not explicitly referred to as a lieutenant, but players could collect "Lieutenant insignias." As these were identical to the one worn by Koden, the "SWG" source should be sufficient to explain it. As for the Prima guide's mention of her being a townsperson who lived on Tatooine, I went ahead and included a brief mention of that in the biography. StarsiderSWG (talk) 02:13, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
Removal of GA status
- Placed on probation at Meeting 128. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:25, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
- Status removed at Meeting 129. Tommy-Macaroni 20:23, June 20, 2020 (UTC)