Wookieepedia:Inq/Meeting 116

Inqmoot 116 will be held at 6:00 PM UTC / 2:00 PM ET on Saturday, July 4, 2020. Please leave notes if you are busy marching in a parade with red, white, and blue-colored outfits and are unable to attend.

Agenda

Colonials from the last meeting

• Toby Philpott (diff • review)
• Barton Coburn (diff • review)
• George Roubicek (diff • review)
• Horton Salm/Legends (diff • review)
• Voren Na'al/Legends (diff • review)
• Separatist supply ship (diff • review)
• Hoggon (diff • review)
• Venan civil war (diff • review)
• Gobee (diff • review)
• Darth Cognus (diff • review)

Free and independent

Expand as needed. Maintenance bin.

• Llerd
  • The article has some large Monobook-era paragraphs that would benefit from breaks in Wikia skin. The intro looks like it could use one, as does the second, and maybe even the first, paragraph of "Mission to Phaegon III."
  • BTS is unsourced and needs to be updated
  • Referencing needs to eliminate use of chapters. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 08:22, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
  • The Crosscurrent audiobook presumably needs to be added to the Appearances list and should be checked for any kind of update that may be therein, such as vocal/speech traits, etc., or anything else. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 08:27, June 12, 2020 (UTC)
• Krudar
  • Update needed.
  • An in-universe date for the article's events should be mentioned, or at least pipelinked, in the article.
  • The BTS should be fully referenced.
  • The BTS should provide a publication date.
  • The BTS should mention the book which featured Krudar's first proper appearance.
  • Image category should be added.
  • Second subsection of Bio, and perhaps even the entire P&T, should be further subsectioned. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:19, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Green Wing
  • 4 ABY date is not referenced correctly in infobox or article body
  • There is a lot of tangentially related fluff in this article that can be significantly reduced or otherwise removed entirely. We know very little about what Green Wing did in this battle other than the small bits that we're given in the ROTJ novelization, but this article is attempting to give a sweeping summary of the events leading up to the battle. The second and third Bio paragraphs, for example, have nothing to do with Green Wing, nor can any of that actually be verified with relation to this character. Case in point, those two paragraphs are entirely sourced to the ROTJ film, which Green Wing does not appear in, so statements like "Green Wing and the Alliance Fleet emerged from hyperspace" to try and tie in Green Wing can't actually be supported by source material. I'm not sure if this article
  • Depending on how much content is actually removed pursuant to the previous objection, the Bio definitely needs some subsectioning.
  • BTS is unsourced and needs full publication data for first-appearance purposes. Nothing other than the first sentence in the first BTS paragraph is actually worth keeping. The rest is just Sources list regurgitation.
  • Fix stray italics in ref 2
  • Ref 3 needs CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 13:44, June 28, 2020 (UTC)
• Zelka Forn
  • This Monobook-era article has quite a few large paragraphs that could be broken up. The intro and the last three Bio paragraphs could all use breaks.
  • Are there really no other images of this character to show in the article body?
  • General underlinking throughout
  • Appears it could use an Equipment section
  • The date ref needs to be updated/revised, as it can't explicitly be sourced directly to the Campaign Guide
  • The BTS can remove the sentence about being mentioned in CSWE
  • Acting credit can't be sourced to IMDb. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:31, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Darth Reave — The article is 1,015 words, by my count. And I'm going to say that the last two sentences of the BTS are unnecessary and should be removed, which would bring the article to 968 words. That being said, it would certainly appear that this article could use an Equipment section, which would very possibly bring the article back above 1000 words. In the event someone tries to fix these things, this article has additional issues that would be raised. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:31, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Tetsubal — The intro is enormous compared to the rest of the article body and just doesn't need to be that big. I'd estimate it could be reduced by a third a more. The article currently stands at 1,066 words, and I just don't see it maintaining the 1000-word limit after the intro is revised. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:52, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Telosian Jedi Academy
  • Article should follow site precedent and use "Description" as section title opposed to "Layout"
  • None of the BBY dates are referenced correctly. They can't be sourced to the video games, for one. And neither of the double refs being used to cite "At some point between 3643 and 3641 BBY" statement mention those years at all. Whatever math is being used to arrive at these dates needs to be clearly explained.
  • Article could afford to hold more images in better formatted placements, such as not running into section quotes
  • BTS needs to include full publication data
  • Ref 3 is poor and needs to be cleaned up/modernized. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 15:52, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Secret mission to Geonosis
  • Requires an update.
  • "Duel in Ben Kenobi's home" reference in infobox needs a rework to conform to the Manual of Style.
  • "The mission" section could use some subsections.
  • BTS needs a rework; sourcing issues, unnecessary information. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:04, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
• CT-6734
  • Missing "Equipment" and "Skills and abilities" sections.
  • Unsourced BTS.
  • Release date required for Reversal of Fortune.
  • Homeworld and physical traits require a separate note. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:21, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • Could introduce some BBY dates
  • Two-speaker quotes get Quote template, not Dialogue
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Infobox Affiliation field should not run three bullets deep. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:34, July 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Wynssa Fel
  • Infobox image is not sourced properly
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • General underlinking throughout
  • Very few, possibly none, of the ABY dates appear to be referenced correctly
  • Correct end punctuation in image captions
  • Format image placement so they're not running into section headers
  • Fix redirect link
  • Publication data needed in BTS
  • BTS wording needs to be updated
  • Ref 11 needs to implement CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:34, July 1, 2020 (UTC)

Commonwealth realms

Expand as needed.

• The procedure of changing the categorisation of probation pages depending of whether the article is kept or stripped of status. Tommy-Macaroni 20:56, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Kinda related to the above: the usefulness of [[Wookieepedia:Inquisitorius/Archives]]. Tommy-Macaroni 11:19, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
• Renaming/deleting some of the contents of Wookieepedia:Featured article tutorials. Tommy-Macaroni 20:56, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Deleting [[:Category:Wookieepedia Inquisitorius review requests]]. Tommy-Macaroni 10:01, June 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Update to Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations. Tommy-Macaroni 09:23, June 21, 2020 (UTC)

Attendance

Ready the fireworks and barbecues

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:51, June 6, 2020 (UTC)
2. Tommy-Macaroni 20:56, June 6, 2020 (UTC)

   Imperators II^(Talk) 21:04, June 6, 2020 (UTC)

3. Sweet, I'm on holidays and can actually make this one. Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:11, June 28, 2020 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:19, July 3, 2020 (UTC)
5. Lo and behold, a free Saturday night. 1358 ^(Talk) 13:30, July 4, 2020 (UTC)

I'm loyal to His Majesty the King

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:13, July 4, 2020 (UTC)

Declaration of the absentees

Imp

• Extend Voren Na'al, kill the rest of the old stuff. Probe all the new stuff. Support all Tommy's stuff, and give the man my vote on anything else. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:02, July 4, 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• AnilSerifoglu
• Supreme Emperor
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles stripped of Featured article status

• Toby Philpott
• Coburn
• George Roubicek
• Horton Salm/Legends
• Separatist supply ship
• Hoggon
• Venan civil war
• Gobee
• Darth Cognus

Articles extended

• Voren Na'al/Legends

Articles placed on probation

• Llerd
• Krudar
• Green Wing
• Zelka Forn
• Darth Reave
• Tetsubal
• Telosian Jedi Academy
• Secret mission to Geonosis
• CT-6734
• Wynssa Fel

Notes

• The Inquisitorius voted 5-0 to update Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations.
• The Inquisitorius voted 5-0 to move Wookieepedia:Featured article tutorials to Wookieepedia:Status article tutorials, and delete [[Wookieepedia:Ataru's Address on Organization FAs]], [[Wookieepedia:Four Dot's Character Article Tutorial]], [[Wookieepedia:University of Eyrezer Guide to Intelligent Species FANs]], and Wookieepedia:What is a featured article?.
• The Inquisitorius voted 5-0 to delete [[:Category:Wookieepedia Inquisitorius review requests]] and its contents.
• The Inquisitorius voted 5-0 to modify the categorisation of probation page archives. All archived probation pages will now be categorised under Category:Wookieepedia Featured article probation pages archive.
• The Inquisitorius voted 5-0 to delete [[Wookieepedia:Inquisitorius/Archives]].
• Tommy-Macaroni does paperwork and schedules Meeting 117.
• Log