Wookieepedia:Inq/Voren Na'al/Legends

Voren Na'al/Legends

Things to do

• Unsourced BTS information.
  • I believe I've sourced it all. jSarek (talk) 05:03, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
• "Skills and abilities" and "Equipment" sections required per Layout Guide.
  • Both added. jSarek (talk) 05:03, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
• No dates provided for A New Hope and Clone Wars.
  • Dates provided for both. jSarek (talk) 05:03, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
• There is filming information for the medal scene available (including interviews with Derek Lyons), which is currently missing from the article.
  • Filming information added. jSarek (talk) 05:03, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
• Duplicate links. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • I think I fixed them all. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Throughout the article, one-sentence paragraphs should be combined/integrated into larger paragraphs. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • All one-sentence paragraphs have either been combined or expanded. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Conversely, some of the paragraphs (especially in the BTS) are too long and should be split into smaller ones. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • All paragraphs that couldn't be read without scrolling in Preview (at my resolution, anyway) have been split. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• In addition, "Historian for the Rebellion" and "After Endor" subsections need to be further subsectioned. This may possibly open up more room for additional quotes and/or images if available, which also applies to the "Early life" subsection. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Article has been re-subsectioned, with each subsection getting a quote. Alas, all images of Voren that I'm aware of (short of trying to squeeze more screenshots out of ANH) are currently in the article. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• The BTS image thumbnail should be resized for Oasis skin. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • I set it to 250px, which is the size the Bakura thumbnail is set to, which has a similar aspect ratio. If I've overlooked more specific guidelines regarding Oasis image size, please point me towards them. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Looks like there's space in the Appearances section where the image category can be brought up per the Layout Guide. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Notes and references section must implement a scrollbox. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 13 and ref 35 need to implement the appropriate citation templates. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 16 must be formatted properly. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 18 needs to be fully linked and generally written like a tiny stand-alone article. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Reference split into citation and date note; date note fully linked and verbiage clarified. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
• Ref 24 needs verification. Wikipedia won't do. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:01, July 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Unfortunately, the Wikipedia article is uncited, and I can't find a citation elsewhere for "Academician" being a functional title in some usages rather than a mere honorific, despite my anecdotal understanding that it's accurate (at least from watching old Soviet B-movies). I've reworded the footnote and cited Lexico, Oxford University Press's collaboration with Dictionary.com. jSarek (talk) 10:40, August 24, 2020 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

• Article put on probation at Meeting 115. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:27, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Article extended at Meeting 116. Tommy-Macaroni 10:33, July 5, 2020 (UTC)
• FA status kept at Meeting 117. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:31, August 31, 2020 (UTC)

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