Wookieepedia:Inq/Meeting 104

The 104th Pokéathlon competition is taking place on Saturday June 15, at 2 PM ET / 6 PM UTC. Your available moves are Kill, Spare, Keep or Probe. The additional Z-Move Redux is also available. Please remember to save before entering IRC, and leave notes if you cannot attend.

Agenda

Getting killed more than challenging Whitney's Miltank

• Battle of the City of Bone (diff • review)
• Rokur Gepta (diff • review)
• Freedon Nadd (diff • review)
• Talon Karrde (diff • review)
• Armand Isard/Legends (diff • review)
• Orman Tagge (diff • review)
• Tott Doneeta (diff • review)
• Jon (farmer) (diff • review)
• Chik Apla (diff • review)
• Barpotomous Drebble/Legends (diff • review)
• Scourge (Sith) (diff • review)
• Lushros Dofine (diff • review)

7.8/10 too much water

Expand as needed. Maintenance bin.

• Kam Nale
  • Redlink.
  • The sentence about Emissaries to Malastare and Jedi Quest: The Dangerous Games only has one ref tag to the latter, and the same for the sentence about Podracing Tales and The Not-so Magnificent Seven.
  • Because Kam Nale only appears in 3 issues of the Jedi Quest: The Dangerous Games comic arc, should the behind the scenes sentence be reworded to only mention him appearing in a few comics? The sentence as is seems to make it sound like Kam Nale appears in all the issues of the comic. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:33, June 1, 2019 (UTC)
• Windo Nend
  • Update needed
  • I'm pretty certain the Republic comics can't be used as a straight source for 21 BBY. They simply say something like "fifteen months after the Battle of Geonosis."
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Intro could use a paragraph break
  • Last Bio image doesn't fit well there in Wikia skin view
  • Redlink
  • BTS is unsourced
  • Publication dates in BTS would be nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Duel in the Korriban Academy
  • 1000 BBY is exclusive to the infobox and intro
  • I'd like confirmation that 1000 BBY can indeed be sourced to the novel and doesn't need to be sourced to Essential Reader's Companion, for example
  • This event is not mentioned in Essential Reader's Companion?
  • Maybe some images?
  • BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Niai Fieso
  • Underlinking throughout
  • I feel like we could crop off a little bit from the top of the infobox image
  • Infobox-exclusive info
  • All Xexto are hairless, so it's not necessary to specify "None" for that infobox field
  • 32 BBY is not referenced correctly
  • The backup link in reference 4 needs to be modified to point to a working archive version
  • BTS is mostly unsourced. Sticking reference 5 onto the end of the first BTS paragraph doesn't work.
  • Format SW.com Databank names correctly
  • The link for the CCG card image isn't working. I think they moved around their URLs, so this will need to be updated for this link.
  • Missing backup link(s). Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Sirak
  • 1000 BBY is infobox-exclusive. I'd also like confirmation that this date can be sourced to the novel and doesn't need to be sourced to Essential Reader's Companion.
  • Some images?
  • Publication date for novel in BTS would be nice
  • Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Dannl Faytonni/Legends
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Underlinking throughout
  • 22 BBY date is not referenced correctly
  • I'd like to see a more balanced subsectioning of the Biography. Sticking one little paragraph into the first subsection and the remainder of the Bio in a second doesn't look great.
  • Quote in second subsection needs to use Quote template for two-speakers, not Dialogue
  • Article looks like it could probably use an Equipment section
  • BTS:
    • This section just isn't written well. I'd like to see a more natural organization and flow to the chronological development of the character. Mention his first source first, with appropriate author and publication credits, then go into his film appearance.
    • At least one paragraph break would also be nice to break up and organize the information better.
    • Just align the image right. That always looks better for the BTS.
  • The Clone Wars: Departure should use the SW.com template in the Appearances and referencing
  • Redirect in Sources
  • Format SW.com Databank names correctly. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Janus Greejatus/Legends
  • Reference 2 is going to need a little work. Firstly, I'd like to see it expanded to explain Greejatus's connection. The card says that the six Imperial Advisors who accompanied the Emperor to the Death Star were all killed. This reference needs to explain which source identifies Greejatus as one of these six Advisors, since he's not mentioned explicitly. Secondly, Endor is not mentioned on that card.
  • The Office of the Supreme Chancellor is exclusive to the infobox. The article should find a way to at least pipelink this into the Bio someplace.
  • With the exception of the Darth Plagueis references, none of the BBY or ABY dates are being sourced correctly in the article body or the succession box. This includes the 4 ABY pipelink.
  • I don't believe any of the article's instances of multiple referencing (i.e., [1][10][11]) are necessary. Move ref links into sentences to source appropriate portions as necessary.
  • There is at least one more image of the Imperial Advisors that could be worked into the article body
  • An Equipment section could probably be had, along with a Powers and abilities, considering his Force abilities
  • All of the Bio thumbnail images could be enlarged in Wikia skin
  • BTS:
    • Most of it isn't sourced correctly
    • The second paragraph could definitely use at least one paragraph break, which means the entire section could probably be organized into two subsections, possibly even with another image?
  • Add non-canon subsection to Appearances
  • Format SW.com Databank name correctly
  • Sources and Notes and references could probably use scroll boxes
  • Refs 11 and 13 need citation templates
  • Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Faro Argyus
  • 22 BBY cannot be sourced straight to Essential Reader's Companion for TCW stuff
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Underlinking
  • None of the article's body images are placed well, which is a relic of Monobook. All of them are running into section headers or quotes or bleeding into another section.
  • Some of the P/T info needs to be reorganized into an Equipment section, which could also be expanded to detail his weaponry
  • I'd like confirmation that 32 BBY can be sourced to Clone Wars Campaign Guide
  • All of the TCW webcomic stories should employ the SW.com citation template
  • Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Decimator (war machine)
  • If the craft has deflector shields, this should be specified explicitly and linked in the infobox
  • I don't know why reference 5 is at all necessary. Just source that straight to New Essential Chronology.
  • Images:
    • The "Role" image's caption is pretty weak
    • Both body image thumbnail sizes could be expanded
  • I'd like to see the History subsectioned, which creates enough room for another image and quote if available
  • Redlink
  • Publication date for first appearance in the BTS would be nice
  • Not everything in BTS is properly referenced
  • Ref 2 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• BesGas Three
  • 22 BBY isn't referenced correctly and is infobox-exclusive
  • If this thing's only appearances are ESB and Unseen Queen, I don't see how anything but the Rebellion and New Jedi Order eras can be presented in the Eras template
  • Publication date for first appearance would be nice in BTS
  • Missing backup links. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)
• Aarrba
  • 5000 BBY cannot be sourced straight to the TOTJ comics and is infobox-exclusive
  • Other infobox-exclusive info
  • Underlinking
  • Hutts don't naturally have hair, so specifying "None" in that infobox field is unnecessary
  • A Hutt wearing clothing is fairly unique and deserves to be detailed in the P/T or an Equipment section, depending on how it's being framed
  • Just because he resided on Koros Major doesn't mean that's his homeworld, as the infobox is saying
  • There's no reason for this double reference. Move ref notes into the sentence to cite individual portions as necessary: The Daragons were grateful, but the Hutt insisted that they keep his generosity a secret from the other customers.[4][3]
  • If all of this article's material comes from comics, I don't see why another image can't be had for "The younger Daragons" subsection
  • The Bio should be reorganized so the first paragraph is placed within a subsection
  • Many redirects
  • Articles need to be referenced by individual comic issue, not story arcs
  • BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:33, June 15, 2019 (UTC)

Prepare for trouble

Expand as needed.

Attendance

HM slaves

1. Ho-Oh, I choose you! Tommy Macaroni 21:25, May 18, 2019 (UTC)
2. I got some of these references. Just kidding, I didn't get any of these references. Imperators II^(Talk) 04:30, May 19, 2019 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (talk) 15:11, May 19, 2019 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:31, June 1, 2019 (UTC)

My grandson. What is his name again?

1. No can do, I work that evening. 1358 ^(Talk) 01:02, May 19, 2019 (UTC)
2. I'll be at a bbq all afternoon. Notes are below. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:52, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Notes from the distortion world

SE picks Cyndaquil

• Kill all the old things, probe all the new. If we have anything else, Tope has my vote. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:52, June 14, 2019 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Exiledjedi
• Imperators II
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir

Articles stripped of FA status

• Battle of the City of Bone
• Rokur Gepta
• Freedon Nadd
• Talon Karrde
• Armand Isard/Legends
• Orman Tagge
• Tott Doneeta
• Jon (farmer)
• Chik Apla
• Barpotomous Drebble/Legends
• Scourge
• Lushros Dofine

Articles placed on probation

• Kam Nale
• Windo Nend (already a Former FA)
• Duel in the Korriban Academy
• Niai Fieso
• Sirak
• Dannl Faytonni/Legends
• Janus Greejatus/Legends
• Faro Argyus
• Decimator (war machine)
• BesGas Three
• Aarrba

Notes

• Exiledjedi does paperwork; Supreme Emperor schedules Meeting 105
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