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Jon (farmer)
Things to do
- Under-linking
- It's not necessary to repeat species/sex between the beginning of the Bio and P/T, particularly for an article this short. The article would be best served by just picking one of the two to go with
- Possibly a minor intro expansion? It just seems kind of short in relation to the length of the Bio
- 3956 BBY is exclusive to the intro
- An Equipment section
- Format image captions correctly
- Format quote captions correctly
- I don't understand how or why this is correct/relevant: "...and was created by David Falkner, Steve Gilmour, Casey Hudson, Drew Karpyshyn, James Ohlen, Preston Watamaniuk, and Derek Watts." What do all of these many people have to do with the character's creation, and how is this verifiable from just citing the game?
- This can just be removed from the BTS: "Knights of the Old Republic is the only source in which Jon appears,[1] but he has been mentioned in the game's strategy guide[3] and in 2008's The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia.[2]"
- Ref 2 needs to use CSWECite
Removal of FA status
- Article put on probation at Meeting 103. Supreme Emperor (talk) 22:51, May 22, 2019 (UTC)
- FA status removed at Meeting 104. Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:55, June 18, 2019 (UTC)