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Talon Karrde

Things to do

  • Most, if not all, of the BBY/ABY dates are not sourced properly
  • The original author of this article had a strong inclination toward the use of tacking multiple references onto the ends of sentences; example: "Karrde was able to make many contacts throughout the underworld, including such figures as Billey, Samuel Tomas Gillespee, Jett and Fenig Nabon, Par'tah, Lando Calrissian, and Booster Terrik.[1][3][5][15][16]" This is a practice we've really moved away from in the 10+ years since this article was originally written. Instead, it's now customary to reference specific points within the sentence
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Significant under-linking throughout
  • Two-speaker quotes get Quote template, not Dialogue
  • Digitize all comic images
  • There are quite a few paragraphs that look like they could be broken up into smaller portions to avoid the walls of text
  • Many of the images are oddly placed and of insufficient thumbnail size. There are also places where it looks like more images could be included for a more uniform presentation as one scrolls down the page
  • The P/T just seems skimpy. This is a character whose personality is probably his most defining quality, and probably one of the most personality-rich characters of the entire EU
  • Certainly could use a good-sized Equipment section
  • Fix all redirects
  • Format SW.com Databank names correctly
  • Ref 38 needs to use CSWECite
  • Refs 41 and 43 need to use Shortstory template
  • Ref 57 needs to use CCG citation template and reference the specific card
  • Refs 60 and 61 need to use Citeweb
  • BTS is skimpy. I'd like to see it expanded and modernized

Removal of FA status

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