Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tarn Mison (second nomination)

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Tarn Mison

• Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:45, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Warfare and Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Fantasy Flight Games

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:27, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:20, 9 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:20, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 18:48, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
5. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:20, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• Biography could use some subsectioning and another image.
• {{Shortstory}} should be implemented, and short works should use quotes, not italics.
• Ref 10 needs {{cite web}}.
• The Art of Harrison Ellenshaw was republished in an Insider special edition, which should be listed in sources.
• Context for Farbinda III.
• The bit about his skill as a pilot/marksman should go in a "Skills and abilities" section. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:19, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
  • All fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:31, 3 August 2021 (UTC)
• Bts should mention where the short story was published.
• Does the manga need {{Ret}} in the app section?
• For the bts quote, does the quoted source use "[sic]"? If not, then you should put italics around the [sic] so that the reader knows the source didn't write it like that. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:00, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
  • All addressed. I considered adding the retcon tag to the manga a gray area, but it's been added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:28, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Link to Tarn disambiguation page.
• Investigate Star Wars: Behind the Magic for any potential info.
• I'm seeing that the people on board the Bright Hope were rescued on its article, so I think that's worth mentioning here.
• BTS needs publication date for Tales of the Bounty Hunters and context and authors for The Essential Guide to Warfare.
• It's worth checking ESB adaptations for any appearances of Mison's scene. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:40, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
• It appears the Atlas itself cannot be used to put Las Lagon in the Inner Rim, a note is required. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:24, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Behind the Magic was made before Mison was named, so no new info for him. Adaptations and sources were already verified. Author for Warfare done, although not sure what context is to be given. It's pretty much self-sourcing as one of the Star Wars: Essential Guides just from title alone. Other objections addressed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:00, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Just the year is sufficient for Tales. As for Warfare, an example of what I'm looking for. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:03, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Tales already had year, so reverted back. Fixed Warfare objection. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:06, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
        • I must've missed that. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:08, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
• Context for Rogue Five.
• I removed the details of Mison's scene from the BTS since our film status articles don't really do that. Hope you're fine with it. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:22, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
  • That's fine for the details. As for Rogue 5, already explained Rogue Group, not sure what else there is to say. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:24, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
    • "Mison was partnered with Tycho Celchu in Rogue Five" A reader won't know what Rogue Five is. A ship? A team? UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:31, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:34, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
        • Rogue Five is a ship? The linked article is about a callsign. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:37, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
          • You're right, fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:39, 9 August 2021 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Based on page 420 of The Making of "The Empire Strikes Back", I'm pretty certain the cameos in Echo Base were all filmed on February 9, 1980 during pickups at ILM. Johnston also talks about it on page 412. I've just updated the Pharl McQuarrie page with this info if you want to check. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:01, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:00, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
• If he joined the Alliance following the Battle of Yavin and served at the Great Temple I think it's worth mentioning that the temple was evacuated six months after the battle. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
• Thon's Orchard/Legends states that Bright Hope left with Dutyfree and Thon's Orchard which were collectively escorted by Mison and the other five pilots. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed both. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:02, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
    • You can mention that the other two transports did manage to escape with the escort. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:12, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:17, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
• I think there's now room for another image in the body and I'd probably split that last paragraph and subsection since both are getting a bit long. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:33, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:49, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• "For his formally being established as part of Rogue Group by that source,[1] Mison was also established to indirectly appear in the ..." I'm not sure if this sentence is grammatically correct, but I've read it like five times and I still don't understand it, so I definitely think it could be reworded for clarity. 1358 ^(Talk) 17:47, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Hope that rewording helps. In short, the Manga depicts all 12 of Rogue Group's snowspeeders. As EGTW confirms Mison was in Rogue Group, it retroactively links him to appearing in one of those snowspeeders from the manga. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:25, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Much better. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:21, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:20, 20 August 2021 (UTC)