Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sami (Cantrosian) (second nomination)

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Sami (Cantrosian)

  • Nominated by: OtterSurf (talk) 09:57, July 22, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Missed the last objection, sorry. This kitty is going all the way!

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 13:34, September 6, 2020 (UTC)
  2. LordMominutiae (talk) 20:27, October 2, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Fixed my own objections after they've been unaddressed for over a month. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:59, 23 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 23:07, 27 May 2021 (UTC)
  5. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:31, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:40, 2 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Zed
  • {{Otheruses}} should be implemented.
  • Durne should be linked directly in the intro, rather than just being referred to indirectly.
  • The body images could be enlarged somewhat.
  • His generic traits (like his feline face and ears) don't need to be mentioned if they're something innate to his species.
  • The publication date issue raised here should also be addressed on this page. Zed42 (talk) 10:31, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
Imp
  • This article is related to the Minka article you've also nominated for status. Please address all of my objections on that GAN here, as well. Imperators II(Talk) 11:45, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Can you please tell me the page on which The New Essential Chronology states the Battle of Endor took place in the beginning of 4 ABY? Imperators II(Talk) 12:06, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Page 124. OtterSurf (talk) 12:32, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
      • Right. No, that won't do. Obviously NEC doesn't list every event of 4 ABY. So just because the events of ROTJ are the earliest 4 ABY events noted in the book technically doesn't mean they occur at the beginning of that year. Imperators II(Talk) 13:16, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
        • Corrected. OtterSurf (talk) 13:37, 15 April 2021 (UTC)
          • You still haven't provided evidence in the ref note for why "several weeks after" the Battle of Endor couldn't fall in 5 ABY. Imperators II(Talk) 07:15, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
            • Yes, I have. The Nagai and Tofs article states that part, while the Chronology states that several later events took place in 4.5 ABY. OtterSurf (talk) 08:32, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Does this Marvel Age thing have a distinct article devoted to Star Wars? Imperators II(Talk) 18:09, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Please clarify. OtterSurf (talk) 19:03, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Actually, never mind. Please create an article for the specific issue cited. Imperators II(Talk) 19:06, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Just want to confirm: does that source really use capitalized "Darling"?
    • I naturally assumed it was capitalized, but as I have no conclusive proof of that I've lowercased it.
  • Please create articles for the asteroid base and the planet where Niru's faction was based on. Imperators II(Talk) 17:21, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Bit unnecessary, seeing as there's less than nothing to say about them. OtterSurf (talk) 09:56, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
      • On the contrary, from this article alone it's evident that a significant portion of the comic's events take place on both of those objects. Imperators II(Talk) 09:59, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • I'd move the stuff about Durne's intelligence saying that the opposing faction was loyal to the Empire up to the first paragraph of the body and mention Minka left to search for the nearest rebel base, then in the second paragraph you can explain that she was saved by the heroes after being shot down and brought them back. The current order is slightly confusing. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:38, 18 April 2021 (UTC),
    • Marking this as done. OtterSurf (talk) 10:46, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
      • This hasn't been struck due to the outstanding followup objection below, which is still unaddressed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:52, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
  • In the last paragraph of the body I think you can go into more detail about Durne actually arriving at the base. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:38, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
  • You don't actually say anywhere in the body about Sami telling Minka to use stun. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:38, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
    • All done. OtterSurf (talk) 11:03, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
      • I think you can move more of the Durne's intelligence stuff and that he's on an asteroid base up to the first paragraph. I'd clarify that the faction was in conflict with an opposing Cantrosian faction that they believed to be loyal to the Empire based Durne's intelligence reports. Then in the second paragraph you can specify that Minka was on a mission to seek aid against this faction, who then attacked her. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
  • You now skip Minka and the rebels arriving on the asteroid and actually meeting Sami for the first time. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:24, 19 April 2021 (UTC)
    • That got lost in the shuffle. Fixed. OtterSurf (talk) 10:44, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
      • You still don't mention that the rebels inform them that there are no Imperials in the system. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:52, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:40, 2 June 2021 (UTC)