Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Dynba Tesc

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Dynba Tesc

• Nominated by: Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:49, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:34, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:33, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
3. — Samonic 13:02, 27 April 2022 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 04:33, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 08:20, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
6. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:16, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
7. Great work --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:38, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• This audiobook needs to be investigated for a mention.
  • Already checked. Nothing. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:25, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
• Does the source really have a space before the ellipsis like this? "Transfer? I know nothing of …"
  • Yes. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:25, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
• I think you can mention a little more about her legacy in the bio, perhaps a brief mention of Horn's later thoughts on the escape.
  • Done. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:21, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
• The section titled Escape is a little bare without any images--maybe you can add one of Garqi or something? Same goes for P+T. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:49, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
  • There's a shortage of ideal images, but I've added a couple. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:42, 9 March 2022 (UTC)
• Lastly, can you specify that Xeno organized the students over the comnet? On my first reading I assumed it was in-person until the reveal about Whistler. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:15, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
  • How's that? Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 21:33, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Great. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:34, 15 March 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Since Reader's Companion doesn't appear to mention Tesc, the 6 ABY ref needs elaboration.
  • It mentions her in main characters ("Dynba Tesc, university student (human female)") and in the summary. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 09:42, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
• Does the source for the quote under "Flight of the Star's Delight" leave a space between the ellipses and the preceding word? UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:25, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Would it be appropriate to add Garqi Agricultural University under the affiliations entry in the infobox? Students and graduates such as Chelli Lona Aphra, Detta Yao, Sana Starros and others list schools/universities in their infobox, although none of these are status articles which is why I'm leaving a comment rather than an objection. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 04:36, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Looks pretty mixed in status articles. But Ansibella Dellu, Kalandra and Yoshi are all recent ones with it listed, so added. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 10:27, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Perfect, thank you --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 15:38, 1 May 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:40, 1 May 2022 (UTC)