Wookieepedia:EduCorps/Meeting 80

EduCorps Meeting 80 will be held at 6:30 PM UTC / 2:30 PM ET on July 10, 2021. Please leave notes if you are unable to attend.

Agenda

Old items

• Team Fondor (diff • review)
• Lio (diff • review)
• Graekus Shubelle (diff • review)
• Unidentified minelayer (diff • review)
• Graffam (diff • review)
• Hand of Justice (diff • review)
• Neimoidia (diff • review)
• 41st Ranger Platoon (diff • review)
• Refresher Booth (diff • review)
• Manaan (diff • review)
• Enrichment Dome (diff • review)
• Unidentified Tsyklen forger (diff • review)

New items

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Steadfast (Imperial-class Star Destroyer) — Tommy has had long enough, update needed. :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:52, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
  • The article has been updated. Tommy-Macaroni 13:09, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
• 128th Flight — 69 words in body, needs sectioning removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:36, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:54, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
• Orchis 2 — Update required. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:45, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
• Iridonia — Update required. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:45, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
• Dybrin 12 — Update required. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:45, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
• Vuras
  • Date doesn't appear to be sourced properly.
  • BTS is unsourced and missing publication date. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:24, 20 June 2021 (UTC)
• Battle of Yn
  • BTS sourcing
    • Done. And in the process I actually found that it was first mentioned on the original version of the Holonet page; that's the trouble with those shifting webpages.
  • Should provide a rough timeframe.
    • There actually isn't one. Tulak Hord's place in the timeline is the subject of a ton of confusion; he's supposed to be a lightsaber master (i.e. post-Great Hyperspace War), but other sources say he's from the first Sith Empire. Cade Calrayn 19:53, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Does TOR confirm that Yn is a planet? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:06, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Cited to CSWE.
  • Date ref needs to establish that the ritual was used at the battle for it to make sense independent of the article. It's also missing some links.
    • Clarified.
  • {{Quotetrans}} should be used instead. Finally, the BTS wording should be tweaked in accordance with this precedent. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 18:04, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Switched to Quotetrans and added BioWare. Cade Calrayn 18:28, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• Utility vibroblade — A social media post like that cannot be used to cite in-universe information. The reference needs to be rewritten with a new source, preferably Galactic Atlas. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:22, 1 July 2021 (UTC)
• Canary
  • Per precedent, article should document when this subject was mentioned in-universe.
  • Unsourced BTS.
  • Could include a Wikipedia link for the canary in the article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:04, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Should all be done. VergenceScatter (talk) 22:18, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
  • I don't believe any degree of sentience can be assumed. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:48, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
  • The quote could be significantly trimmed down to keep better focus on the subject.
  • Linking in attributions needs to remove the links used in the article body. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:52, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
    • All done. VergenceScatter (talk) 21:12, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
  • This seems obvious and redundant from a real-world point of view, but can the canary be assumed to be a bird from that quote alone? Similarly delicate physiology to an avian species doesn't necessarily imply they're both birds, IMO. Zed42 (talk) 06:26, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
• 631 — Update required from Star Wars: Build the Millennium Falcon 56. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 19:25, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
• Ku Chusar
  • Date needs a note.
  • Context for Coruscant.
  • Add audiobooks to Appearances. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:31, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
• Shao to Gok
  • Dates not formatted correctly in BTS.
  • Last sentence of BTS is unnecessary. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:33, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, along with other issues OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 14:49, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
• Tarron Neb
  • Dates not formatted correctly in BTS.
  • Last sentence of BTS is unnecessary. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:35, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Fixed, along with other issues OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 14:49, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
• TuskBlaster
  • Holonet News post needs to be formatted correctly with the template.
  • BTS is missing writer(s) and publication date. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:00, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
• Adler Roty
  • Format Ref 1 with {{CSWECite}}.
  • Holonet News post needs to be formatted correctly with the template.
  • Dates are not sourced correctly. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:00, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Discussion

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Attendance

Positive

1. As it turns out, we get to come home for the weekends, so a tentative and hopeful yes. Fan26 (Talk) 23:15, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:41, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:27, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
4. Tommy-Macaroni 17:08, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Negative

I will be spending all of July working as a camp counselor in a place with no wireless, sorry. Will leave notes. Fan26 (Talk) 14:02, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:47, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
2. At work, notes are below. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 19:39, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
3. I have too many people to go drinking with. If I happen to swing by I will not be in a functional condition :) Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:48, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
4. I'm home now, but I won't be home then. Zed42 (talk) 06:26, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Notes

Imp

• Keep unidentified minelayer, kill the rest of the old stuff
• Spare 128th Flight, probe the rest of the new stuff. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:47, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

SE

• Per Imp's notes. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 19:39, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Keep Graffam, Cade just fixed it. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 19:44, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• Keep minelayer and Graffam, kill the rest.
• Spare Steadfast, 128th, and Battle of Yn, probe all else. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:48, 7 July 2021 (UTC)

Zed

• Keep minelayer & Graffam, kill everything else
• Spare Steadfast, 128th, and Yn. Spare canary if all issues are addressed and no others arise. Probe the rest. Zed42 (talk) 06:26, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Ayrehead02
• Fan26
• OOM 224
• UberSoldat93
• Tommy-Macaroni

Articles stripped of Comprehensive article status

• Team Fondor
• Lio
• Graekus Shubelle
• Hand of Justice
• Neimoidia
• 41st Ranger Platoon
• Refresher Booth
• Manaan
• Enrichment Dome
• Unidentified Tsyklen forger

Articles that kept Comprehensive article status

• Unidentified minelayer
• Graffam

Articles placed on probation

• Orchis 2
• Iridonia
• Dybrin 12
• Vuras
• Utility vibroblade
• Canary
• 631
• Ku Chusar
• TuskBlaster
• Taung & Zhell Society

Articles spared from probation

• Steadfast (Imperial-class)
• 128th Flight
• Battle of Yn
• Shao to Gok
• Tarron Neb

Notes

• Zed42 does paperwork and schedules Meeting 81.
• Log