Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Senior Cadet

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Senior Cadet

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 03:37, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: that i must bow so low
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:Novels

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 00:46, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:28, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:42, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
4. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:51, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:58, 29 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Senior Kilji-in-progress

• Infobox exclusive information: that Senior Cadet was a military rank. Chiss Ascendancy is infobox exclusive; if the rank was used by the EXP fleet and not the Ascendancy, the infobox should establish that.
• I'd recommend mentioning that Naporar was an Ascendancy planet.
• The BtS should document the subject's Legends origins.
• Inconsistent capitalization of Senior Cadet: Is it "senior cadet" or "Senior Cadet"?
• Review note: files and templates need to use underscores in place of spaces (e.g. {{Chiss_Ascendancy_ranks}}, not {{Chiss Ascendancy ranks}}). Samonic ^(Talk) 10:42, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
  • all done, although im not entirely sure if the referencing of the Legends bit in BTS is acceptable. BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 18:38, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
    • You didn't; you should use {{SWG|An Empire Divided}}. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:23, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
• Galaxies is a massively multiplayer online role-playing game, not just a roleplaying game.
• If Expansionary Defense Fleet cadets held the title, the fleet should be added to the infobox's |organization= field. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:23, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
  • hows that? BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 15:37, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
• "As Ziara held the rank of senior cadet during Thrawn's tenure at the academy, it must have been approximately between 39 and 37 BBY." What is the "it" referring to? Thrawn's tenure? If so, that last sentence is unnecessary since you already establish when Thrawn's tenure takes place in the previous sentences. Samonic ^(Talk) 21:20, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
  • reworded BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 00:05, 23 January 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Unfortunately you'll need to implement {{SWGcite}}. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:04, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
  • after speaking with Starsider, i believe that should suffice BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 19:58, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

Uber

• From what I've seen in status articles, Galaxies supports its own context. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:25, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 19:58, 26 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:58, 29 January 2023 (UTC)