Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Rapacc's sun

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Contents

  • 1 Rapacc's sun
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Fan
        • 1.1.2.2 Generalirius Samonic
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Rapacc's sun

  • Nominated by:ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 01:40, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
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(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

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Support

— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 06:35, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:09, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:32, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  4. The sun is sunny.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 21:20, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote I strongly advise that you learn from the edits made during this nomination and apply those lessons in your other nominations. OOM 224 21:27, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • Context for the Paccian Governance
  • That final sentence needs to be broken up a little. Fan26 (Talk) 00:57, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Sorry to interject, but I'd argue that "Paccian Governance" is self-contextualising, especially when combined with "controlled by". OOM 224 01:03, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Fair, it is only relevant to the freighter after all. Fan26 (Talk) 01:21, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
        • ThrawnChiss7: just to say that it seems like Fan struck the wrong objection, so the only issue left now is the final sentence. OOM 224 12:13, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
          • I've now broken up the last sentence. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:42, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
Generalirius Samonic
  • The frigate did not enter the system, Kilji Illumine General Crofyp's task force, specifically, the Kilji war cruiser Anvil entered the system. This should be corrected.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 09:05, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Perhaps mentioning it was seen through the Anvil's viewport would be nice.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 09:07, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Sorry, I don't know what I was thinking, It has been fixed now. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:18, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Don't worry, you lack enlightenment ;) (this is a joke :P) — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 21:20, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Here is the mention in Thrawn Ascendancy: Lesser Evil In the distance he could see Rapacc's sun, though the planet itself was too far away for the unaided eye to see. Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:27, 12 May 2022 (UTC)