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Rapacc's sun
- Nominated by:ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 01:40, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
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Support
— Samonic06:35, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 10:09, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:27, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:32, 12 May 2022 (UTC)- The sun is sunny.— Samonic
21:20, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
I strongly advise that you learn from the edits made during this nomination and apply those lessons in your other nominations. OOM 224 21:27, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Object
Fan
Context for the Paccian GovernanceThat final sentence needs to be broken up a little.Fan26 (Talk) 00:57, 3 May 2022 (UTC)- Sorry to interject, but I'd argue that "Paccian Governance" is self-contextualising, especially when combined with "controlled by". OOM 224 01:03, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
- Fair, it is only relevant to the freighter after all. Fan26 (Talk) 01:21, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
- ThrawnChiss7: just to say that it seems like Fan struck the wrong objection, so the only issue left now is the final sentence. OOM 224 12:13, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
- I've now broken up the last sentence. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:42, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
- ThrawnChiss7: just to say that it seems like Fan struck the wrong objection, so the only issue left now is the final sentence. OOM 224 12:13, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
- Fair, it is only relevant to the freighter after all. Fan26 (Talk) 01:21, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry to interject, but I'd argue that "Paccian Governance" is self-contextualising, especially when combined with "controlled by". OOM 224 01:03, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
Generalirius Samonic
The frigate did not enter the system, Kilji Illumine General Crofyp's task force, specifically, the Kilji war cruiser Anvil entered the system. This should be corrected.— Samonic09:05, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
Perhaps mentioning it was seen through the Anvil's viewport would be nice.— Samonic09:07, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
- Sorry, I don't know what I was thinking, It has been fixed now. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:18, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- Don't worry, you lack enlightenment ;) (this is a joke :P) — Samonic
21:20, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- Don't worry, you lack enlightenment ;) (this is a joke :P) — Samonic
- Sorry, I don't know what I was thinking, It has been fixed now. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:18, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Here is the mention in Thrawn Ascendancy: Lesser Evil In the distance he could see Rapacc's sun, though the planet itself was too far away for the unaided eye to see. Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:27, 12 May 2022 (UTC)