Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jaguada's star

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Jaguada's star

• Nominated by: Goodmind (talk) 22:45, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:56, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
2. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:22, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 14:10, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:01, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
5. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:34, 28 March 2022 (UTC)
6. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:16, 28 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• Inconsistent referencing for Trans-Hydian.
  • Fixed--Goodmind (talk) 09:50, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
• TERC doesn't directly mention the fact that the star was dying, please implement a reference similar to this.
• The second sentence of the second paragraph is all referenced to TERC, which I don't think is accurate. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:16, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Goodmind (talk) 09:50, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
• I don't think we need a reference to say "in that year."
  • Fixed --Goodmind (talk) 16:28, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
• Inconsistent referencing for the grid coordinates. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 20:01, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed --Goodmind (talk) 11:54, 22 March 2022 (UTC)

Imp

• The Outer Rim sectors map does not feature the Jaguada system, so you'll have to explain in a reference note how that map can be used to derive the Esstran sector placement for the star. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:22, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Handled via Discord --Goodmind (talk) 14:48, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:16, 28 March 2022 (UTC)