Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jafan/Legends

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Jafan/Legends

Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:37, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
Nomination comments: WookieeProject Naboo
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Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:35, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:50, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
Assuming JMM's objection gets addressed. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:38, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
—spookywilloww^talk 23:51, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 02:03, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

~~I'd say the Nabbo temple deserves a page.~~
- Done
~~Why is the word "declared" referenced to TOS&VC but "newly" to NoP?~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:41, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
- The sources are a little bit conflicting, the magazine says that Theed was a small city that got expanded while NoP says that it was newly founded in 832 BBY, so that was my attempt at reconciling those sources. However, this got me to double check the sources and it turns out the magazine never mentions when it was made the capital so I've had to reword the whole thing anyway Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:23, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
~~What would you say about specifying that he was male in the first line (or at least paragraph) of the article? Something like: "was a male general" would work.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 10:57, 13 March 2022 (UTC)
- Never mind this. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:38, 15 March 2022 (UTC)

~~I'm personally on the fence about this, but do you think Darth Plagueis should be listed as a mention of the subject akin to this?~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:53, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
- I think not just because the name is more likely to be in reference to a different king named Jafan, though on that basis I've removed that reference from the article body. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:23, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

~~Suc boxes go before references and require citations.~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:07, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:05, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
  - Does NOP really give BBY dates? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:51, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
    - Sure does Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:24, 23 March 2022 (UTC)
      - Who knew? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:33, 23 March 2022 (UTC)