Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Davnar II

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Davnar II

• Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 10:37, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. VergenceScatter (talk) 18:38, 18 January 2021 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:09, 26 January 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:33, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
4. Erebus Chronus (talk) 19:03, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
5. Immi Thrax (talk) 02:02, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
6. Zed42 (talk) 08:05, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• This exists, please add a link to it to the article.
  • Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:57, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
• Han Solo at Stars' End is only an {{Mo}}, please add the Legends Davnar's first full appearance. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:23, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
  • I will need to double check if SW:X-wing really featured Davnar, otherwise SW Rebellion would be the 1st appearance.--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:57, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Changed to Star Wars: Rebellion--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 05:28, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
• Is Traveler's Guide to Batuu 100% presented from an IU perspective, or does it have OOU sections, too?
  • Yup, Its an IU book--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:57, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
    • In that case, does the mention of Davnar being Throno's homeworld come in a form that can be used to add a quote to the article? Imperators II^(Talk) 08:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 03:10, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
        • Can you also note the fact that Davnar was specifically mentioned in the book in the body? Imperators II^(Talk) 07:43, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
          • Mentioned--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 00:22, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
• Looking at the map from which the image is cropped, it looks to me as if a crop can be obtained that does not cut off any of the map labels currently present. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:26, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Done--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:57, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
• One more thing. I believe you should mention that Throno eventually left Davnar at some point (don't know if there's enough indication as to the timeframe) to travel the galaxy. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:04, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 23:05, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• It looks like an update is needed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:12, 14 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Updated--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 22:50, 15 February 2021 (UTC)
    • Page needs to be moved to its full title and the 1stID for the alternate name detailed in the BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:30, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
      • Moved--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 00:06, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
        • The latter is still missing. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:13, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
          • AddedDarthRuiz30 (talk) 07:36, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

Zed

• There is a precedent to derive the orbital position of planets whose names include a numbered designation (such as here or here.)
  • Added
    • Infobox-exclusive. Imperators II^(Talk) 06:42, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
      • AddedDarthRuiz30 (talk) 07:36, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
• The image category should be updated to reflect the page's new name. Zed42 (talk) 02:54, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Changed--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 03:42, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:05, 17 February 2021 (UTC)