Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Data siphon

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Data siphon

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Support

  1. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:41, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 13:08, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 17:36, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:04, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) RainbowRebellion2 (talk!) 18:16, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Thrawn disagrees with your statement
  • Pontriss should be formatted with quote marks if it's a nickname.
  • The flashbacks of Lesser Evil take place before Chaos Rising's main events. The date note should be rewritten to reflect this. See unidentified Lesser Space starship and/or Desum Industrial Field. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 17:11, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
  • You mention some "downloaded payments" but don't establish that "Pontriss" used a data siphon to steal those payments from the bistro's register. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 10:09, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
    • hows that? BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 18:39, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
      • I think you should mention the register bit when you introduce "Pontriss." e.g. "Pontriss attempted to rob a bistro on the Ascendancy's planet Csilla, using a data siphon to download payments from the establishment's register." Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:45, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
        • i dont see a difference, i think its fine as is BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 04:25, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
Imp
  • Can we get an article for data containers?
    • reworded per discord convo
  • I've changed the subject in the last sentence from "they" to "the latter" for clarity, please check for accuracy.
    • reworded slightly. the "they" is referring to the patrollers, using "the latter" makes it sound like Thrawn imo
  • Review note: removed Pontriss from infobox per Wookieepedia:Layout_Guide/In-universe#Infobox: "The "owners" field of {{Armor}}, {{Device}}, and {{Weapon}} shall only be used for unique items". Imperators II(Talk) 16:22, 9 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:19, 9 January 2023 (UTC)