Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Coosta mouse

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Coosta mouse

• Nominated by: Bonzane10 (holonet) 05:23, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 09:36, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 91 words (0 introduction, 61 body, 30 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 20:02, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 18:30, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:36, 17 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• Bts missing.
  • Added Bonzane10 (holonet) 06:47, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
• Context for chylaroo.
  • Done Bonzane10 (holonet) 06:47, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
    • You should add what they are just something like "the chylaroo creatures" should suffice - that's what we usually mean when we ask for context.
      • ahh ok, added Bonzane10 (holonet) 04:16, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
• Source doesn't say that they're native to Tenoo so the planet should be removed from the infobox. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:51, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed Bonzane10 (holonet) 06:47, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
• Per the precedent I've been setting with other YJA articles, I'd like you to pipelink the name of the full episode but put the full name of the specific episode - this is because for the purposes of coosta mice, we're more concerned with what it did appear in than an episode in which it did not. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:38, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Bonzane10 (holonet) 04:16, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
• Since we're talking about television, you need the full release date, not just the year.
  • Done Bonzane10 (holonet) 11:20, 27 June 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• I think it would be worth specifiying where the Temple garden was located on Tenoo (at the Jedi Temple)
• Context for Kai needed Lewisr (talk) 14:14, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Added both Bonzane10 (holonet) 08:29, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
• Would it be fair to add it's a type of mouse instead of generally rodent? Lewisr (talk) 14:48, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Do we treat mouse separate from rodent? If so, sure I'll change it Bonzane10 (holonet) 08:16, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Apparently canon hasn't established mouses as a type of rodent. Just curious, what made you say rodent? Lewisr (talk) 14:20, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
      • Changed. I used rodent because I initially thought mouse were treated as a rodent. Bonzane10 (holonet) 07:26, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
• 'because of their similarities' What similarities? The quote seems to suggest they just look the same, so you could say their similar appearance or something Lewisr (talk) 00:40, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Bonzane10 (holonet) 19:25, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• The article is in both Category:Non-sentient species and Category:Species of undefined sentience which conflict; the correct one should stay.
  • Corrected Bonzane10 (holonet) 16:56, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
• Should prpbably make a category for mice and add it to this page; so that the article has a biology category supporting it (there's a few other mice species on the site to support its creation, as well).
  • Added Bonzane10 (holonet) 16:56, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
• Article will need an additional ref to support the episode release date. Perhaps steal the one from this BtS, seems to be the one most YJA noms are using.—spookywilloww^talk 03:36, 28 June 2023 (UTC
  • Done Bonzane10 (holonet) 16:56, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

CC-8

• The first sentence should be reworded so that the singlular form of the subject (Coosta mouse) is used. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:54, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Done Bonzane10 (holonet) 13:00, 10 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:36, 17 July 2023 (UTC)