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Companion Grek
- Nominated by:ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 13:32, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Can't believe nobody ever tried to bring a galaxy up to a status article
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Support
Imperators II(Talk) 16:56, 7 June 2022 (UTC)- Samonic
20:36, 7 June 2022 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 07:45, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:26, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
Object
Imp
Please add a quote.Please reference the BTS.Please avoid contracted forms of verbs (didn't -> did not) in encyclopedic writing."It was located many more light-years than 150,000 light years away from the galaxy" — this should be rephrased.Crix Q5 Baobab is not an astronomer.Imperators II(Talk) 13:37, 21 May 2022 (UTC)- All corrected. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 13:43, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
- Can I ask you once again to not hurry? Please add the missing part of the quote. While you're at it, please check the article for spelling errors. Imperators II(Talk) 13:49, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
- I am so sorry, I think I fixed all the spelling mistakes and the quote. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 23:31, 23 May 2022 (UTC)
- Can I ask you once again to not hurry? Please add the missing part of the quote. While you're at it, please check the article for spelling errors. Imperators II(Talk) 13:49, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
- All corrected. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 13:43, 21 May 2022 (UTC)
Please note in the article's body that the subject shared its name with the letter grek.Imperators II(Talk) 14:50, 2 June 2022 (UTC)- Noted. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Does The Essential Atlas really mention the letter? Imperators II(Talk) 15:46, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- I looked at the legends Aurebesh article and it wasn't sourced. What source gives the Aurebesh alphabet? -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:55, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Normally, it'd be your responsibility to research the info for your article, and indeed if you look at the grek article it lists a few sources that supposedly feature the letter. In the interest of not holding this nomination up for that, however, I can confirm for you that the very last source listed there, "The Written Word," does indeed identify the letter. You should source that entire sentence in this article to that source. Imperators II(Talk) 16:01, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- By the way, it did try to acess "The Written Word' but the wayback link didn't work and I couldn't access it. Does the wayback link for "The written word" work for you? -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 16:06, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Yeah, it was lacking a more specific archival date, which I've now added (on Archive.org, you can browse all the instances where a given webpage has been archived through the captures calendar accessible from the top bar). Ultimately, of course, it's all moot since Hyperspace was a subscription-based service that was obsoleted years ago, so all the info from that article comes from personal copies people have saved. But back to your article. Please make sure that only that sentence is referenced to "The Written Word," as it cannot support the rest of the info you currently have sourced to it. Also, it seems to me the letter's name should be lowercase, similarly to how the spelled-out names of the letters of real-world alphabets such as Greek are lowercase. Imperators II(Talk) 16:26, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks for the explanation. (Grek is now lowercase, and and only that sentence is sourced to "The Written Word." and the rest to The Essential Atlas.) -ThrawnChiss7 (talk)
- Yeah, it was lacking a more specific archival date, which I've now added (on Archive.org, you can browse all the instances where a given webpage has been archived through the captures calendar accessible from the top bar). Ultimately, of course, it's all moot since Hyperspace was a subscription-based service that was obsoleted years ago, so all the info from that article comes from personal copies people have saved. But back to your article. Please make sure that only that sentence is referenced to "The Written Word," as it cannot support the rest of the info you currently have sourced to it. Also, it seems to me the letter's name should be lowercase, similarly to how the spelled-out names of the letters of real-world alphabets such as Greek are lowercase. Imperators II(Talk) 16:26, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- By the way, it did try to acess "The Written Word' but the wayback link didn't work and I couldn't access it. Does the wayback link for "The written word" work for you? -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 16:06, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Normally, it'd be your responsibility to research the info for your article, and indeed if you look at the grek article it lists a few sources that supposedly feature the letter. In the interest of not holding this nomination up for that, however, I can confirm for you that the very last source listed there, "The Written Word," does indeed identify the letter. You should source that entire sentence in this article to that source. Imperators II(Talk) 16:01, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- I looked at the legends Aurebesh article and it wasn't sourced. What source gives the Aurebesh alphabet? -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:55, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Does The Essential Atlas really mention the letter? Imperators II(Talk) 15:46, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Noted. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Companion Kilji
First of all, please fix the remaining spelling issue.- Who is Crix Q5 Baobab? Context should be supplied at the first mention.
- Remove the links from the quote.
Context for the Unknown Regions perhaps?- (Review note) Please read the entire article when addressing objections.— Samonic 08:26, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
- Context is provided for Q5 Baobab, and the linking has been removed, but I looked through the article several times and can't seem to find any spelling mistakes. If you could point it out, I would fix it right away. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 01:49, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
- I fixed it myself. Please look at my edit.— Samonic 12:05, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
- I fixed it myself. Please look at my edit.— Samonic
- Context is provided for Q5 Baobab, and the linking has been removed, but I looked through the article several times and can't seem to find any spelling mistakes. If you could point it out, I would fix it right away. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 01:49, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
After you have introduced his full name, use his [Crix Q5 Baobab] last name.— Samonic 12:05, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
- I did that (I used Baobab as his last name, but if you think Q5 Baobab is more accurate, I'll change it) -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:15, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
Can you add an infobox?Context for "probot"- (Review note) Copy-edit. Samonic 16:17, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- Context has been provided for probot. What would the infobox be? Location wouldn't be applicable as their is nothing to put for the fields. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:08, 31 May 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
The source doesn't say that probots went to Grek, only that they went to Besh. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:27, 5 June 2022 (UTC)- The probot section has been removed. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
You mention twice that it is far away, first that its furthest out of the 7 and later that its further than 150,000 lys. Can we combine it so it reads better eg "and the farthest out of the seven—well beyond Companion Besh's 150,000 lys" Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:27, 5 June 2022 (UTC)- Yea, the way you suggested sounds much better and has now been incorporated. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
I think this needs a otheruses template to Companion with Companions Aurek, Besh and Cresh noted. It'll also need similar to point to the letter Grek (use the more template parameter) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:27, 5 June 2022 (UTC)- Added. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Check this edit, I moved the Companion disambig page as Companion itself was free, so didn't need the parenthetical descriptor. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:48, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Looks good, thanks for changing that. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 11:13, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Check this edit, I moved the Companion disambig page as Companion itself was free, so didn't need the parenthetical descriptor. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:48, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- Added. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Also think we should have Template:Galaxy with regions=Unknown regions Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:27, 5 June 2022 (UTC)I also can't see anywhere that states there are only 7 dwarf galaxies, can you clarify or remove this figure? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:45, 5 June 2022 (UTC)- I think the wording of TEA is clear that there are 7 ie. aurek, besh, cresh, dorn, esk, forn and grek. However, if dorn, esk and forn get TC'd I'll update the article to reflect that. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
- Irrespective of the TC, we shouldn't be definitively stating that there are 7 unless it is mentioned, we could potentially say that Baobab knew of 7. However, given the trend of the TC vote I would recommend not adding that and removing the seven. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:38, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- The mention of 7 was removed as those galaxies will be TC'd. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:56, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
- Irrespective of the TC, we shouldn't be definitively stating that there are 7 unless it is mentioned, we could potentially say that Baobab knew of 7. However, given the trend of the TC vote I would recommend not adding that and removing the seven. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:38, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- I think the wording of TEA is clear that there are 7 ie. aurek, besh, cresh, dorn, esk, forn and grek. However, if dorn, esk and forn get TC'd I'll update the article to reflect that. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 15:37, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
Please re-read the article when you make any changes and ensure grammar and spelling is fixed. "Companion Grek was a satellite dwarf galaxies of the galaxy located far away from the galaxy." Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 08:35, 14 June 2022 (UTC)- Sorry about that it is fixed now and I'll try to be more careful next time. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 14:04, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
Based on the quote, it doesn't seem like Baobab considered Grek to be the farthest out, just that it's among a group of galaxies that is "much farther out." Is there something else that led you to include that, or is it speculatory?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:26, 13 June 2022 (UTC)- TEA says the companion galaxies where ordered, with Companion Aurek being the first, and then Besh. I think it is clear that the ordered follows the Aurubesh alphabet and that there are 7 of them, but it seems others think otherwise, and so it is now changed to just be "much farther" out. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:56, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:30, 15 June 2022 (UTC)