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Chiss Expansionary Fleet medcenter

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  1. Last changes. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 09:07, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
  2. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:50, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
  3. AxMech (talk) 00:37, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:27, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:32, 18 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic
  • Please format core names as established a few days ago: "Mitth'raw'nuruodo, core name "Thrawn,"
  • The date note must be rewritten, as it doesn't state why Thrawn's therapy took place months before 19 BBY. It simply says when CR's events took place. The Vagaari pirate operations took place before CR.
  • You say "clashed" when pipelinking the Vagaari pirate operations and later mention some "operations." You must name the operations when you first mention them or reword to avoid confusion. I recommend the first option.
  • There's a page for the Vagaari pirates, so you shouldn't link Vagaari and pirates. (This would normally be a sofixit, but you should probably know this for future Vagaari-related noms if you plan on doing any)
  • The quote attribution should specify who Ba'kif's aide is referring to.
  • Ba'kif's aide says Thrawn underwent his last round of physical therapy in the medcenter. Please reword accordingly.
  • There's enough articles for a "Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet locations" category.
  • We don't know if Ba'kif himself visited Thrawn. I'd recommend rewording the article to establish that Ba'kif sent a shuttle to the medcenter to get Thrawn so that the senior captain could assist in Ba'kif's mission to the Dioya system.
  • Did the medcenter appear in Chaos Rising? The BTS says it was mentioned and the Appearances section says that it appeared in the novel. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 09:04, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
  • I reworded the Vagaari pirate operations date note. Please take a look at the changes. (Review note)
  • I think the article should state Ba'kif sent a shuttle to the medcenter around 18 BBY instead of "months later."Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 10:13, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Last thing: You should probably specify the Dioya system is an Ascendancy system. There's a duplicate link btw. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:26, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Review note(s) for your future nominations. I've fixed this myself this time since it's pretty minor stuff:
    • Steelious system — articles with self-explanatory titles such as the Steelious system's don't need to state "The Steelious system was a star system," for instance. The reader knows that.
    • Make sure to source everything correctly - you were sourcing that the medcenter was located on Naporar to the date note, for instance. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 09:07, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:33, 18 December 2022 (UTC)