Wookieepedia:AC/Meeting 136

AgriCorps Meeting 136 Inner Rim Meeting will be held at 8:00 PM UTC / 3:00 PM ET on Saturday, January 9. Please leave notes if you are unable to attend.

From the Northern Dependencies to the Trailing Sectors

Even the Filordi want to leave their own homeworld

• K-16 Bryar Pistol (diff • review)
• Laser trip mine (diff • review)
• Beri Tulon (diff • review)
• Tolo (diff • review)
• Kane Griggs (diff • review)
• Davan (diff • review)
• Jan Stakross (diff • review)
• DV-692 (diff • review)
• DS-61-4 (diff • review)
• Bursk (diff • review)
• Narthax (diff • review)

Kith Kark was rudely ignored twice on Truuine

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• Battle of Anx Minor
  • The infobox fails to list the New Republic Fifth Fleet as a participant.
  • Ref 6 needs to implement {{CSWECite}}.
  • The lead quote misleadingly uses an ellipsis where, in fact, text has been omitted from the source text.
  • The {{ID}} in Sources is just blatantly wrong. The battle is fully identified upon its original introduction into canon.
  • I suppose that the Tangrene battle, not the Ketaris battle, is listed in the infobox as being directly previous to the Anx Minor battle due to the fact that inline text of The Essential Atlas and The Essential Guide to Warfare lists both of them just like that, "encounters at Ketaris, Tangrene, and finally Anx Minor" and "Champala, Ketaris, and Tangrene". However, in both of the books, all three of these battles are also placed on maps (one of those maps can be seen in the Prelude section of this article), and the engagements at Ketaris and Anx Minor are a part of a single move by both New Republic and Imperial Remnant forces. The battle at Tangrene, on the other hand, is a result of a different move. Because of this reason, I would at least consider listing both Ketaris and Tangrene as being previous to Anx Minor, if not outright replacing Tangrene with Ketaris. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:25, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Contrary to what the article currently states, The Essential Atlas does not identify Anx Minor as a planet, or even a "world." Imperators II^(Talk) 19:41, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
• Melvin Fett
  • Citation required.
  • Image size in Biography can be increased, and there seems to be space for another image.
  • BTS is missing full comic release date. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:20, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
• Trandosha
  • There is a redlink.
  • A date note needs to be written to establish the Resistance's formation taking place in 28 ABY to resolve the fact tag. Lewisr (talk) 18:16, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
• Yuvernian/Legends
  • Update tag since October, from a source released in 2012. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:43, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• Gana Lavin
  • Both BBY dates in the article will need expanded reference notes to explain how they work. They are not self-sourcing.
  • General underlinking
  • Article recently had an expansion to the BTS that should be checked for accuracy
  • Last BTS sentence can just be removed
  • Ref 1 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:53, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• Lana
  • I'm to understand that the BBY referencing in ref note 2 either doesn't exactly work that way (in that it's not supported as such by KOTORCG), or that there's otherwise a more specific way of referencing that date to apply directly to the first KOTOR game itself.
  • Biography could use a paragraph break
  • The BTS should receive a minor update/revision to introduce Legends phrasing when referring to matters of "canon." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:03, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified B1 battle droid captain
  • Sourcing information to databank entry without any kind of reference note written up. This droid is not mentioned in that entry.
  • The "Around 21 BBY" date reference needs more detail as well.
  • Per discord discussion, it should not be assumed Baktoid Combat Automata built this unit, as it could have been Baktoid Armor Workshop. Editoronthewiki (talk) 20:07, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Redirects.
  • Image caption needs to do a better job of connecting to the article.
  • BTS needs to include full webcomic release date. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:13, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
• Neebo/Legends — 131 words in body, needs intro removed. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:31, 29 December 2020 (UTC)
• Evax
  • BBY dates not referenced correctly
  • Missing data from infobox and P/T
  • There's a bit of extrapolation and/or mis-sourced information in this article. For example:
    • CSWE doesn't say he had a "talent" for "accurately" predicting Rebel fleet movements
    • Nor does it say "this ability saved vulnerable Imperial installations from enemy attack"
    • Nor does it say he was stationed aboard the Death Star
    • The infobox source uses CSWE to source his death location to the Yavin system, which is not supported by that source
  • Could use an Equipment section
  • I'd like to see the BTS written and presented in a more traditional manner. The opening of this section is rather strange, like we're presenting his CCG appearance as an aside or an oddity. Publication date(s) also needed, and the last sentence also cannot be fully sourced to that individual CCG card. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:27, 2 January 2021 (UTC)
• Oodoc
  • Some minor underlinking
  • 17 ABY cannot be sourced to The New Rebellion
  • Article's referencing needs to be reworked to remove page and chapter numbers
  • The article should be reexamine to see which (possibly all) information from the History actually belongs in thes "[Species] in the galaxy" section per the Layout Guide entry for sentient species
  • BTS is unsourced and doesn't need to mention publisher. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:33, 2 January 2021 (UTC)

CALIGINOUS AUTOMATON OF TOMO-RETH. CALIGINOUS AUTOMATON OF TOMO-RETH. CALIGINOUS AUTOMATON OF TOMO-RETH.

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The Negs? Are you kidding me? And we already double-checked the Western Regions!

Positive

1. How do you kick back and relax after your last exam of the week? With an ACmoot of course! Tommy-Macaroni 18:29, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:57, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
3. Ew the Negs. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:22, 9 January 2021 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:00, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

Negative

1. MasterFred(talk) 18:55, 7 January 2021 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:42, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

Notes

Fred

• Kill all old except Jan Stakross, probe all new, Tope has my vote for anything else. MasterFred(talk) 18:55, 7 January 2021 (UTC)

Ecks

• Per Fred. Tommy gets my vote. 1358 ^(Talk) 18:32, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• Ecks says it best. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:42, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Ayrehead02
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles stripped of Good article status

• Beri Tulon
• Bursk
• Davan
• DS-61-4
• DV-692
• K-16 Bryar Pistol
• Kane Griggs
• Laser trip mine
• Narthax
• Tolo

Articles that had their probation extended

• Jan Stakross

Articles placed on probation

• Battle of Anx Minor
• Evax
• Gana Lavin
• Lana
• Melvin Fett
• Neebo/Legends
• Oodoc
• Trandosha
• Unidentified B1 battle droid captain
• Yuvernian/Legends

Notes

• Fred does paperwork and schedules Meeting 137.
• Log