Wookieepedia:AC/Meeting 132

Another month, another gathering of the AgriCorps. This business meeting will take place on Saturday, September 12, at 3 PM ET in the AC Boardroom. You know the drill.

Agenda

Probed articles from Meeting 131

• Planet Prison (diff • review)
• VCX-350 light freighter (diff • review)
• Rokak'k (diff • review)
• Grunda Dolma (diff • review)
• Guybrush Threepkiller (diff • review)
• Unidentified Bith scientist (diff • review)
• Dams Denna (diff • review)
• Gantu (diff • review)
• Unidentified Imperial II-class Star Destroyer (asteroid collision) (diff • review)
• Nacronis (diff • review)
• Eron (soldier) (diff • review) — Seemingly left out at Meeting 131

New articles

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Ralltiir - Update needed. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:36, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Dreadnought-class heavy cruiser — 1872 words by my count; FAN has recently failed. Tommy-Macaroni 07:42, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified species (Imperial torching) - 94 words in article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:41, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
• The Hand of Thrawn
  • ABY dates are not referenced correctly
  • The History section would benefit from the introduction of subsectioning
  • Additionally, the image and the narrow width of the margins creates an unattractively large paragraph for the first History paragraph. That should be broken up.
  • If the article must use an image of Thrawn in the History section, a more description caption than just "Grand Admiral Thrawn" is preferred. The caption should tie the image to the article subject.
  • Nothing in the BTS after the first sentence is necessary. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 17:53, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Combined Clans Center Building
  • The double ref note in the infobox Destroyed field is unnecessary. Either source it all to one thing, or break up the ref notes according to individual pieces of information
  • Link in quote should be removed per Manual of Style
  • The History section would benefit from the introduction of subsectioning. Two subsections of two paragraphs each would look nice. Another quote could also then be added if available.
  • The BTS should be rewritten to avoid the unnecessary second sentence. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:01, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Unidentified Resolute naval officer (Battle of Ryloth)
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • Homeworld and physical traits require a separate note.
  • Last sentence of BTS feels really unnecessary and somewhat speculatory as this information doesn't appear to be in the source.
  • Ref 3 needs a source that actually mentions the character.
  • {{Mediacat}} can be added.
  • Episode air date missing. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:12, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Nebo
  • Digitize comic image
  • The Bio has room for another image. Is there nothing else that can be put there?
  • Some underlinking
  • BBY dates can't be sourced straight to TOTJ comics
  • The BTS should be rewritten to focus more specifically on his single appearance; the overall story arc really isn't that relevant. Full publication date for first comic appearance also.
  • Use CSWECite for ref 2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:59, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
  • Intro could definitely use a paragraph break, though I think the better option would be to just reduce its size and detail to one paragraph. A two-paragraph intro is a bit much for an article with three Bio paragraphs. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:02, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
• Droxine
  • This revision added info from an Old Republic crew skill mission. The actual mission description in-game mentions "government officials" assembling a team to track this "Fist of Justice", making no mention of either the Republic or Sith Empire or Droxine.
  • Additionally, the BBY date naturally cannot be cited to TOR
  • Human/Legends is linked to twice in the body. Fan26 (Talk) 13:20, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
• Ordo Skirata
  • Article is way over the word count.
  • Needs better formatting: more section breaks and more paragraph breaks.
  • Needs more images.
  • Duplicate links
  • "Skills and abilities" section looks extremely short
  • Bts can be expanded as well
  • Needs an Equipment section
  • Referencing needs to be cleaned up in terms of missing and redundant links
  • Infobox exclusive information (birth date, height, hair color, eye color, skin color)
  • Birth date can't be sourced directly Republic Commando: Triple Zero without a manual ref note. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:37, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • Also, both Legacy of the Force: Sacrifice and Legacy of the Force: Revelation have an abridged and an unabridged audiobook adaptation. Those need to be checked for a possible mention and added to appearances if applicable. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 12:03, August 30, 2020 (UTC)
• Booba Fett
  • Several of the references should be reworked to include the information cited within the article (e.g. physical traits should be specified within the notes)
  • Per precedent, Ref 3 should begin with the DB entry.
  • Ref 9 should implement {{SWBoards}}, followed by the explanation.
  • Biography can use a paragraph break.
  • Could use an Equipment section.
  • Dates should be sourced to The Essential Reader's Companion, which should also be checked for a mention of the character.
  • Seeing as "An Apology" is a short story, it should probably use a citation template of some sort as it is part of a larger work. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:33, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
• Luuuke Skywalker
  • Many of the reference notes should include the information cited in the article.
  • "An Apology" should probably be formatted with a citation template as it is a short story.
  • Ref 2 should begin with the DB entry.
  • Dates should be sourced to The Essential Reader's Companion, which should also be checked for a mention of the character.
  • BTS could use a paragraph break.
  • Much of the BTS is sourced to The Empire Strikes Back. This reference should probably be replaced with something else. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:38, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
• Conduit worm — This matter should be examined. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:52, September 4, 2020 (UTC)

Discussion items

Expand as needed.

• Membership discussion. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:01, September 12, 2020 (UTC)

Attendance

CEOs

1. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:19, August 21, 2020 (UTC)

   Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:46, August 21, 2020 (UTC)

2. MasterFred(talk) 03:12, September 12, 2020 (UTC)
3. All set up. Tommy-Macaroni 18:11, September 12, 2020 (UTC)

Junior executives

This is the day I'm moving into my uni accommodation so I have no idea where I'll be this evening. I may be able to make it but who knows. Notes below. Tommy-Macaroni 20:38, September 8, 2020 (UTC)

1. Maybe I'll make it. If not, notes below, totally not stolen from Tommy. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:24, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
2. Saturday nights are no good for me, unfortunately. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:04, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
3. Sorry something urgent has come up last minute. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:57, September 12, 2020 (UTC)

Secretarial notes

Tommy

• Kill: all old
• Probe: all new
• Anything else, Tope has my vote. Tommy-Macaroni 20:38, September 8, 2020 (UTC)

Imp

• Extremely per Tommy. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:24, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

Ecks

• Notes per Tommy. Ayre gets my vote. 1358 ^(Talk) 14:27, September 12, 2020 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• Notes per Tommy, but spare Nacronis. My vote and I guess ecks go to Fred. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:57, September 12, 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Master Fredcerique
• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir

Articles stripped of Good status

• Planet Prison
• VCX-350 light freighter
• Rokak'k
• Grunda Dolma
• Guybrush Threepkiller
• Unidentified Bith scientist
• Dams Denna
• Gantu
• Unidentified Imperial II-class Star Destroyer (asteroid collision)
• Eron (soldier)

Articles sent to Redux

• Nacronis

Articles placed on probation

• Ralltiir
• Dreadnought-class heavy cruiser
• Unidentified species (Imperial torching)
• The Hand of Thrawn
• Combined Clans Center Building
• Unidentified Resolute naval officer (Battle of Ryloth)
• Nebo
• Droxine
• Ordo Skirata
• Booba Fett
• Luuuke Skywalker
• Conduit worm
• C2-B5
• Chief gunnery officer/Legends

Notes

• Log
• Imperators is on paperwork and schedules Meeting 133