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Starship manufacturer redlink

ExiledJedi I put all the starship manufacturer redlinks back.--Exiledjedi 23:01, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Gun of Command

I reverted all the edits I made since they were bad.--Exiledjedi 13:41, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Today's Work

Today, I plan to work on the remaining redlinks in the Arms and Equipment Guide article.--Exiledjedi 13:32, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I didn't expect to finish this project so soon. I guess I'll find something else to do.--Exiledjedi 15:13, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Today, I am working on the redlinks in the Bloodhawk Down article. If anyone has any comments please leave a message on my talk page.--Exiledjedi 17:45, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Project Finished!--Exiledjedi 18:46, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Min Erethen

Hi, you might like to familiarise yourself with our Manual of Style and Layout Guide, I just had to correct some basic stuff in the Min Erethen article. You may check those guidelines and adjust your other recent articles accordingly, and if you need any help, just ask. Happy editing. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 19:02, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Help

Yeah i want to make a page for all the force powers that don't have pages but their far and few between(ex. Force summon is mentioned under one of the Starwars clonewars episodes)Please help!Donmax 03:05, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Could I have a list of powers that you want to have pages for? I need to know which powers I need to write pages for. And exactly what kind of force summon is this you are talking about? Is it summoning creatures like Silri in Empire at War: Forces of Corruption? I do not believe I saw this particular episode of the Clone Wars. Please elaborate on what you want done.--Exiledjedi 15:21, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Merry Christmas

I will not be working on articles this weekend.--Exiledjedi 00:43, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

College

Since the spring semester started, I have not had much time to do work on articles.--Exiledjedi 23:53, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Help

Where can i find star wars galaxies card images either here or elsewhere. Please direct me, thankyou and who is Darth Homiiz?Donmax 17:57, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I do not know where you can get Star Wars Galaxies card images. Darth Homiiz was going to be in Jedi: Yoda but he was cut.--Exiledjedi 18:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Atlas

Hello, please note that there are no planets listed in the Atlas Online Companion. If you look at the directory page's titles, the Companion only lists systems, rather than individual planets. As such, the Online Companion should not be added to planet Sources lists. Thanks. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:29, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Entry requests

Major Project Beginning

I am begginning my attempt to clean up the Category:Technology. Please place any comments or complaints to this work here.--Exiledjedi 16:19, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cularin age

Hey Exiledjedi! I've noticed you seem to have access to the Living Force Campaign Guide. Could you please check whether there's any mention of Cularin system's age in the book? Thanks! Imperators II(Talk) 00:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

For space!

Do you really have Star Wars Gamer 5? If so, you're my savior. Could you tell me what "A Campaign Guide to the Centrality" has to say about the Dilonexa system? Specifically the planets that it is made up of. If you can help me, thank you. NaruHina Talk 14px 07:36, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

  • Thank you! You shall receive commendations after the completion of Operation Centurian Deathstroke! NaruHina Talk 14px 22:03, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Spring Semester is Finished!!!!!

Now I can get to work on some bigger projects.--Exiledjedi 16:56, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Jurgan Kalta

These weapons are only mentioned in the back of the book in a list of all the weapons in the game. Just shows stats and what not, and the misspelling of the carbine is already mentioned, so it seems nothing new. OLIOSTER (talk) 20:20, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

  • The power suit is listed in the back of the book with all the other armor in the game. OLIOSTER (talk) 07:08, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Comprehensive article votes

They haven't changed because you didn't change them. You have to adjust them manually when you vote. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:45, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sev (pirate)

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Sev (pirate) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — 1358 (Talk) 18:23, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Implant Level

I'd treat it as canon in the sense that one needs to train to be able to handle the stronger implants. It's a little like building immunity to poison. NaruHina Talk 14px 03:42, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

  • Just for the record the phrase "Implant Level System" does not appear in the game. The implant levels also aren't mentioned in dialogue, only in items and feat lists. This is just from searching the dialog.tlk file for "implant". NAYAYEN 17:22, May 22, 2011 (UTC)
  • Implant Level systems are indeed to be taken as game mechanics. The implants themselves are canon, though unless it's Canderous using his cybernetic implants, you cannot say for certain whether a character used one. I hope this helps.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:34, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
    • Oh, and thanks for joining the project. Any contribs will be appreciated 100%.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 17:38, May 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • Also don't forget that you can use our project IRC channel and forum to reach several of us instead of "crossposting" to multiple talkpages. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 13:47, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

A small hint too

While I'm at it... I would like to thank you for your contributions to Wookieepedia. It is recommended that you use the preview button before you save; this helps you find any errors you have made, and prevents clogging up recent changes and the page history. Thanks again. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 13:47, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Wurokkk

Wurokkk has been moved to GAN, so you may want to re-support or review it again. Thanks. :) MasterFred20px(Whatever) 14:05, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Jurgan Kalta's assault rifle

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Jurgan Kalta's assault rifle has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 01:41, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Fanon warning to IP

You may have been a bit late :).—TK-999 20px(Rise of the Empire) 15:35, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Cyber reaction system

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Cyber reaction system has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Keep up the good work on the GAN page! Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:34, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Freyyr's warblade

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Freyyr's warblade has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — CC7567 (talk) 05:18, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Pre-nom

Sure, I would be happy to do a pre-nom for you. It is my job after all. :P

  • The first sentence in the Intro, "An unidentified gold-skinned man was present in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina, located in Mos Eisley, on the planet Tatooine, when Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi came to the cantina looking for a pilot to take them to Alderaan in 0 BBY." First, we generally don't say "unidentified" in articles as it shows doubt and conjecture. Alos, this sentence reads a bit awkwardly. I would recommend saying something like, "In 0 BBY, a gold–skinned male was present in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina—located on the planet Tatooine—when Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi came to the cantina looking for a pilot to take them to Alderaan."
  • Just as a note, when you say "gold-skinned man" you should instead say, "gold–skinned man". Look at the this page's edit window to see what I mean.
  • In the Bio, "He was seated at a table with..." It's unclear here who you are referring to. Replace "he" with "the gold–skinned being" or something like that.
  • And yeah, as you suspected, the sourcing isn't completely done. You must find sources that identify the species and names of all the different characters the guy sits with. I could help you look those up, if you want.
  • I also made a few minor corrections. Look them over so you get what I did. As for the word count, after you make your corrections, message me a again and I'll see where we stand. If it's short of 250 words but close, I can probably help you reach the limit.
  • That's all I have at the moment Exile. Nice work. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 02:14, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, sorry it took me awhile to respond, I was a bit busy. There's still a few thing we still have to work on.

  • "In 0 BBY, a gold–skinned male was present in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina, located in Mos Eisley, on the planet Tatooine, when Luke Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi came to the cantina looking for a pilot to take them to Alderaan in 0 BBY." Don't mention 0 BBY twice, you only need to mention it once.
  • Also, you don't need to ref each separate character if they're all the same ref. What I mean is: don't put, "Defel named Arleil Schous,[2] an Advozse male named Bom Vimdin,[2] a male Arcona named Hem Dazon,[2] and a Siniteen male named Pons Limbic,[2]" put "Defel named Arleil Schous, an Advozse male named Bom Vimdin, a male Arcona named Hem Dazon, and a Siniteen male named Pons Limbic,[2]"
  • You're currently reffing "A male with gold–colored skin was in the city of Mos Eisley on the planet Tatooine, during the year 0 BBY, shortly after the Corellian corvette, Tantive IV was boarded by the Imperial Star Destroyer, Devastator. He was in Chalmun's Spaceport Cantina when Luke Skywalker and the Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi entered the cantina, searching for a pilot to take them and the droids, C-3PO and R2-D2, to the planet Alderaan. The gold–skinned being was seated at a table near the entrance to the cantina with..." to source number two, when it should be reffed to source one. You should put source one after "catina with".
  • Finally, I did a quick word count and your article's at over 260 words, so I would recommend putting it up on the GAN page. Also, thanks for the support vote in the WotM, in means a lot to me. Thanks. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:27, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I made one last copyedit, and now I think you're good to go. I'll support when you nom it. Good job. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 01:48, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Kae Kwaad TC

Hey ExiledJedi, just letting you know that a new voting option has been created on the Kae Kwaad TC per general demand. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 14:38, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Comprehensive

Thanks for your help. But what do you mean by increment?Cal Jedi10px (Personal Comm Channel) 20:12, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

PS-29-3

Hello ExiledJedi, with comprehensive articles, specifically PS-29-3, biography sections are not required unless they fall under 200 words, per the CA rules. Sans the intro, PS-29-3 is 176 words long. I have decided to get rid of the bio, despite your original objections. Please respond if you are okay with that, and if so, I will get rid of the intro. Hanzo Hasashi 03:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

  • Over, not under, typo. :O Hanzo Hasashi 03:26, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

WP:KOTOR resources

Hi, wanted to inform you about two pages in our KoTOR project, list of resources and requests. There might be even more useful links for you in our project page, so feel free to familiarise yourself with it. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 05:20, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

  • Uh, and I notice you already did use... this is what you get when not getting coffee. (; –Tm_T (Talk) 05:30, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Rukil

Sure, I will happily give you a pre-nom. To respond to your question, first, I would recommend FAing after we're done as this article is well over 2,000 words, and to be honest, both the AC and the Inq. prefer that Users FA an article when it's that long. Second, I unfortunately don't have the Knights of the Old Republic: Prima's Official Strategy Guide. If nobody has replied to your posts on the WP:KotOR page, I would then recommend going on the IRC and asking someone for the information. In any case, I have a few pre-lim things you need to work on. Intro:

  • "He had lived a large portion of his life in the village as an Outcast, condemned like his ancestors to live forever in the bedrock levels of the ecumenopolis for rebelling against the wealthy nobles who ruled Taris." In this sentence, when you say that someone rebelled against the nobles, it is unclear whether you are referring to Rukil or his ancestors.
  • "...when the village was led by a male Human named Hendar, his apprentice, Malya, who continued his work because he was too old to do it himself, was the only one who truly believed him." While I know you're referring to Rukil, it's unclear here who Mayla is apprenticed to. Replace the "his" with "Rukil's." Also, it would be better to say, "...because Rukil was too old to do..."
  • You need to expand the Intro a bit to include Revan finding Mayla's corpse and the information on the Promise Land. Adding another two or three sentences, which should probably constitute a new paragraph, would be appropriate.

Early life:

  • For your reference 3, "The New Essential Chronology places the events of Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic at 3,956 BBY, and Rukil says this happened a century before." What is "this"? You must elaborate on this.
  • "However, the rebellion was routed by the nobles, killing millions of people, and the rest of the rebels were taken prisoner, and since the prisons on Taris could not hold them all, the nobles sent them all to the Undercity at the bottom of the cities of Taris." This is a bit of a run-on. You should probably split it into two sentences.
  • "Rukil's hope was to find the paradise to bring his people comfort and bring them out of their bleak existance in the Undercity." Read the sentence and you'll see how you repeated "bring." You should replace the second "bring" with a synonym.

Later years:

  • "...so his apprentice, Malya, a young woman who lived in the Outcast village..." I'm not sure it's necessary to refer to Malya in such a lengthy way. You could simply say, "a young woman Outcast..." Also, as a note, you misspelled Malya's name as "Mayla" and forgot to link to her article. Please be more careful about this in the future.
  • "By this year, Rukil's apprentice, Malya had been..." You've already mentioned that Malya is Rukil's apprentice, so you can just refer to her as Malya here and from now on.
  • The last two sentences in the subsection are a bit out of place. I would recommend moving them in front of the previously mentioned sentence.

I'll continue my review after you've addressed these. Just to let you know I checked the CSWE for any mention of Rukil, and while he does not have an entry, he is mention in the entries on Gendar and Malya. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 16:38, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot to mention there is no new info. You just need to update the Sources and Bts. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 17:10, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

OK, I'm back to continue the pre-nom. Sorry it took me a couple of days, I was busy with some AC matters. You did a good job addressing my previous objections. Here's what I have:

  • Here's something I forgot to mention before. In the Skin field of the Infobox, you have "Light" filled in. While this isn't incorrect, that more common phrase on the Wook at the moment is "Fair" skin. I would recommend you changing this.
  • I think you have over–subsectioned the part that is under the Gamemechanics template. You should combine the three subsections into just one subsection.
  • "The trek took Revan and Onasi to the Undercity where they searched for the Republic escape pods hoping to find Bastila." You already mentioned what the two are looking for in the previous sentence. You should cut out the part about what Revan and Onasi are looking for here and combine this sentence with the next.
  • "After finding that Rukil's apprentice was dead and discovering her journal, Revan and Onasi, along with their new companion, a young female Twi'lek named Mission Vao, returned to Rukil with the journal." How do you know for certain Revan talked to Rukil while Mission and Onasi are with him? It's completely up to the player who is with him at the time, so the way you have the sentence is incorrect. This is also incorrect in the previous paragraph where you say Revan and Onasi talked with Rukil. Onasi doesn't necessarily have to be with Revan at the time.
  • "He also tells Revan and his companions about his father, grandfather and lastly his lifelong search for the Promised Land," present tense here, that's a big no–no.
  • You need to work on word variation. You say "tell" or "told" a lot. Try switching them out with synonyms to make the article read better.
  • "While Rukil was hopeful upon seeing the journal of his dead apprentice, when the Outcast merchant, Igear..." You already referred to Igear as the merchant earlier, you don't need to do so again here.
  • "Revan found the journals of Rukil's father and grandfather in the Undercity sewers and brought them to Rukil, who was hesitant at first to even look at the journals." Is there information to explain why Rukil was hesitant to look at the journals?
  • "Gendar was skeptical at first, but when Rukil shows him the evidence he had found in the journal, Gendar believed Rukil." Again, present tense, you need to watch out for that.

I'm done with the Bio section mostly, I'll continue after you've finished these objections. I have to say, although there are many minor mistakes throughout the article, you've done a good job here. This is bigger than any article I've ever written. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 15:42, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Once again, sorry for taking along time to get back to you. I'll finish up the pre-nom, although I only have a couple:

  • In the P&t section, "Rukil was more of an adventurer in his younger days, searching throughout the Undercity sewers as well as other parts of the Undercity, looking for clues pertaining to its location." What's location? The promise land?
  • Do you know who voiced Rukil in the game. That's important to find out for the Bts.
    • I don't know for sure. Maybe ask the other KotOR experts. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 16:36, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
      • I asked about it on the KOTOR IRC channel and Tm_T told me that Rukil's voice actor was not mentioned in the manual. Just an update, I'll keep looking some more. Any suggestions are welcome.--Exiled Jedi 20px (Greetings) 16:59, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Otherwise, it looks good. I'll support after these are addressed. Once again, it's good to see you working hard on a future FAN. When you nominate it, if you need any help addressing objections, just ask. I'm pretty familiar with the character by now. :P Kilson(Let's have a chat) 16:16, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

I guess you should nominate it then. I'll support when you nominate, and once again, if you need any help addressing objections, just ask. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 20:31, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Another peek

I've been asked to include information about the greater Centrality in the Dilonexa articles. Could you please look at the Gamer article for me again and tell me if there is any more information on who controlled the system at various points? I put what the Wook already had to say on this in the Dilonexa I article. NaruHina Talk 14px 05:58, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

  • Thanks a lot. :D This should be one of the last steps before I can put it on the GAN. NaruHina Talk 14px 18:36, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

No Toc!

Hey there! __NOTOC__ should only be used in Comprehensive articles. It stands for "NO Table of Contents;" any CA that doesn't have an intro shouldn't have a TOC either. Sometimes they show up, and __NOTOC__ is how ya hide 'em. Menkooroo 11:02, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Vacation

Hey, I just wanted to let everyone know that I will be on vacation starting the 24th and probably won't be back until June 30th or maybe June 31st. I will have no internet access while on the trip, so I will not be responding to any posts on this page or any objections on my current nomination. I know I am still here right now, but I wanted to give everyone a little advance notice.--Exiled Jedi 20px (Greetings) 14:39, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm back now.--Exiled Jedi 20px (Greetings) 02:04, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Guineo

You still planning to nominate Guineo eventually? I've expanded Draag, and I thought it might be cool if we nominated them back-to-back when they're ready. (Feel free to move this message above your notice if you prefer, and have a great vacation!) ~Savagelink=User talk:SavageBob 22:52, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Cookie

Thank you for the recognition! :) Imperators II(Talk) 22:49, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Twitch

Hi, can you pop in to IRC to discuss about pics of Twitch? –Tm_T (Talk) 16:51, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified mustachioed individual

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Unidentified mustachioed individual has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Cavalier One20px(Squadron channel) 12:34, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

WP:VG

WookieecookieI give you this Wookiee cookiee for being the first (besides myself) to join WookieeProject Video Games. Welcome aboard!


Re: Transformers

Done and done. Sorry I missed the note on its talk page, I haven't updated it in a while.DD97Which bear is best? 18:30, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Guineo again

Hey, how's it coming on Guineo? I wanted to check in once again to see if you think it's near completion. If not, I'll go ahead and nominate Draag, but I'd still be happy to pre-nom Guineo once it's complete. ~Savagelink=User talk:SavageBob 15:01, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

  • I just realized I have to get a couple of body images for Draag, too, so it may be a bit before I actually nominate. I may just relent, though, and grab screencaps from YouTube. :( Good luck with Guineo; I look forward to reading the finished piece! ~Savagelink=User talk:SavageBob 15:12, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Panza and Co.

Heyo. Sorry for the delay. I grabbed an image of Panza Hondi, since he's right at the beginning, but my emulator is acting funny on that level. It seems like every time the camera is pointed sorta Northish, the screen gets filled with glitchy grey wall gobbledycrap. It become practically unplayable past the initial hanger. Let me know if you'd like a different shot for Panza, such as full body or bounty listing or something. I'll work on trying to grab the other two, but it does not look too hopeful. SinisterSamurai 01:09, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

Party Poster

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Party Poster has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 10:18, July 27, 2011 (UTC)

New CANs

Thanks EJ! Maybe we'll catch up to Naru one of these days. :p Cal Jedi10px (Personal Comm Channel) 15:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)

Quad Victor

Hey EJ, since you've already supported my Quad Victor nom, it appears I have met all of your objections. If that is the case, I just want to remind you to strike your objection to my nom, if that's cool with you. Thanks. :) Kilson(Let's have a chat) 18:41, July 31, 2011 (UTC)

Not-Lando Calrissian

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Galduran Calrissian has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Grand Moff Tranner 20px (Comlink) 01:51, August 3, 2011 (UTC)

What's up?

Hey EJ. Just had a question for ya. I'm getting ready to nominate CC-01/425 for FA status, (which is really cool, since it's going to be one of my first FAnoms and the first FAnom for the Project!) Anyway, I was wondering if you had the Prima Official Guide for Republic Commando, and if you do, if you could check to see if any relevant info about the that Clone Advisor is in there. Thanks! Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 00:15, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey EJ, I was just looking at your portfolio, and it appears that your promoted article count is off a bit. You have nine GAs instead eight, and nine CAs instead of seven. You need to keep track of this stuff, it's important. :P Haha Kilson(Let's have a chat) 12:39, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

HoloRed Estelar Sevilla

Please, I need help with the [HoloRed Estelar Sevilla] article in order to improve it and not being removed. Could you help me?

Concerning Treve (second nomination)

Exiled Jedi, since I have met all your demands on this article, could you please either give more objectons, or support it. Thanks, --Talrrivanian 15px (Headquarters) 19:17, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

WP:VG joining TFU articles

Hey EJ! Just thought I'd give you the heads-up that after long deliberation on the IRC, it has been decided that WP:VG will start working on The Force Unleashed articles as well. WP:TFU has worked on them in the past, but the Project lead has been inactive since November 2010 and the Project has been slowing down. So, until something else is done, Video Games Project is going to be working on TFU articles that have large parts in the video game part, too. Thanks alot, and happy editing! :P Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 23:17, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Air pistol

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Air pistol has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — CC7567 (talk) 00:39, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

We're halfway there

thumb|left|200px|Hey EJ... good job So guys, we're nearing the halfway point with this barn-burner. I just want to send out a broad message thanking everyone who has and plans on participating in Wookieepedia's second barn-burner, and update you guys on how it's going so far. So far, we have promoted nine Comprehensive Articles, twelve Good Articles, and one Featured Article! Fantastic job everyone who wrote and reviewed those weapons articles, I couldn't have asked for a better group to do so. We also have a number of current Good and Featured Article Nominations currently up, which you can see here.

However, as we approach the halfway point, I do want to encourage you all to keep writing and reviewing weapon articles for the barn-burner. Our goal should be to meet or surpass the level set by the previous barn-burner, which had over forty promoted articles. While we should aim to pass as many articles as possible by the end of the month, I may extend the barn-burner a little into September for any stragglers, especially for those Users who are writing extremely long Featured Articles for the project.

I should also notify participants of a recent Consensus Track over weapons that is about to pass. The CT is over when we should fill in the "Owners" field for Template:Weapon. Right now, it seems as if we are leaning towards filling in the field for unique weapon types, and not filling in the field for general weapon types. As such, we should fix any weapons we have, or will, write for the barn-burner to fit these new parameters. Thanks you for reading this, and keep up the good work. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 09:40, August 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Eras

XD okay. Orangegrub 17:34, August 15, 2011 (UTC)Orangegrub

Userboxes

how do you insert them under your character infobox? Orangegrub 17:46, August 15, 2011 (UTC)Orangegrub

k thanks Orangegrub 17:59, August 15, 2011 (UTC)Orangegrub

J'Meeb Gumb

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"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
J'Meeb Gumb has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 14:19, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Good articles for WP:VG

Hey EJ! Just wanted to say thanks for helping out and giving WookieeProject Video Games it's first good article! I'm thinking about formating the Good Articles and Featured Articles to look more professional. See here or here for examples. Let me know what you think of this idea. Cheers! Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 01:32, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

  • OK, I switched the format to look like this. When you get a chance, I'd appreciate it if you could make sure that I got the info about the article right. Let me know if you like that format. The next question is: Do you think we should leave the CA articles the way they are, or format them more like this. Let me know what you think again. Thanks! Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 15:55, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Zersium rifle

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"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Zersium rifle has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — CC7567 (talk) 09:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Comments on a revised Timeline of media

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Forum:SH:Making_a_better_%22Timeline_of_media%22

Hey

Hey Exiled Jedi, it's been two months since your previous request for EduCorps membership has ended. I see you've kept up the activity and thus I'd like to renominate you, with your permission. Let me know what you think. :) Cheers, 1358 (Talk) 12:58, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

You made it!

Hey Exiledjedi! Many congrats for being Wookieepedian of the Month! You really deserved it EJ, and I'm honored to be the first to congratulate you! Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 02:29, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

  • Thanks, Cal! When I started editing here, I never thought I would get this far. Thanks again.--Exiled Jedi 20px (Greetings) 03:01, September 4, 2011 (UTC)
  • Congrats from me too. Well deserved. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 07:30, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Zabrak Tystel Mark III

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"So—are you still worried about being sent to the Agricultural Corps?"
Zabrak Tystel Mark III has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:55, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

EduCorps

Even though it doesn't look like it has been officially released yet, I'd like to be the first to congratulate you on becoming an EC! It looks like you will pass unanimously, and no one deserves it more. Congrats, and good luck as you wield your new power on the CAN page! Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 12:52, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

  • Hey, congrats on becoming an EC, and apologies for the delay. :P Feel free to prefix your votes on the CAN with {{EC}}. Cheers. 1358 (Talk) 13:43, September 20, 2011 (UTC)
  • Yep, Congrats, man. Keep up the hard work! MasterFred20px(Whatever) 17:49, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Subject 1157

Greetings from a fellow gamer! I've more-or-less taken rsponsibility for the article Subject 1157, which is a TFU II tie-in, and I was thinking about taking it to CA status, if possible. Do you think you could give it a once-over to see if that can be done? Thanks, and MTFBWY! Corellian Premier20pxAll along the watchtower 19:19, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hello there, sorry to bother you, but are you going to have a chance to finish your review this week? If not, that's fine, i'll go ahead and place it on the GAN page. Corellian Premier20pxAll along the watchtower 02:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

IRC channel

Hey EJ! I'm just giving all the members of WP:VG the heads-up that we now have our own IRC channel! When in the IRC, just type /join #WP:VG to join the channel. Good luck, gamer!--Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 20:19, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rukil

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Rukil has been approved by the Inquisitorius and awarded Featured status. Please record your achievement here, and feel free to add the {{User featured}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The Inquisitorius thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Menkooroo 15:32, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Congrats on your first FA, Exiledjedi! You've been doing fantastic work here on the Wook. I'm glad that we finally have this notification thingie for FAs, because you definitely deserve it. Great job! Menkooroo 15:32, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I can only wholeheartedly congratulate and agree what Menkooroo says, you deserve it. (: –Tm_T (Talk) 18:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Eras

Could you explain to me why you think the articles from the TFU2 database could be from after the game? If it's anything like the database from the previous game, then it's accessed by an IU computer, which wouldn't have anything on it that didn't already exist. Even if it isn't an actual computer, it seems to have been written from an IU perspective (quotes and such), which would place it before the game as well. NaruHina Talk 14px 16:26, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

  • I still disgree. I can't think of one time when a databank has been treated that way before and I think we should find out how it's accessed first before we deal with this further. After that, we should hold a CT or at least an SH to gauge what the community thinks about it since it will impact quite a few articles. NaruHina Talk 14px 16:54, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Huloon

I know, but the Companion gives you the coordinates. MasterFred20px(Whatever) 03:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

  • Menk and I settled this today on the CAN page. He said to use the {{Imo}} tag which produces (Indirect mention only). I think that would work best. Thanks for bringing this to my attention, though. :) MasterFred20px(Whatever) 20:59, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re:EduCorps?

I am most honored that you have asked, and I most happily agree.--Cal Jedi8px (Personal Comm Channel) 21:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Adaptation check

Yeah, I can do that when I get home from work today. I'll get back to you then. Menkooroo 03:37, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

  • In the photocomic, there's a shot of the Cantina exterior. It's before Luke's landspeeder pulls up, and there are two spacers walking into the entrance. A few Jawas are sitting in the corner behind them. Is one of them Iasa? That's all I could find him in --- nothing in the Manga, the marvel comic, the dark Horse special edition comic, or Contemporary Motivators. There is, however, a Jawa checking out Threepio in Star Wars Manga: A New Hope 2 during the cantina interlude scene where he sees the stormtroopers coming and is like "I don't like the look of this." Not sure if it's the same guy. Bob might have access to a few more adaptations. Menkooroo 12:57, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ran Machado

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Ran Machado has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:30, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Limbala sector: Unstruck objection

Hey Exile, my suggestion would be to talk to Eyrezer about it. As it was his objection that was left unstruck, he would be able to tell you whether the his concerns have been satisfied. If so, there shouldn't be a problem; if his concerns haven't been properly addressed, the two of you could probably work something out to address them without removing the article's CA status. Hope this helps, and keep up the good work!—Axinal Convocation Chamber 22:30, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Wedge Antilles

Hey EJ. I appreciate your review of Wedge so far. The article has been updated for Choices of One, so if you would like to go back and review the update, you can find it at Wedge Antilles/Legends#Betrayal_in_the_Poln_system. Thanks. Master Jonathan — Jedi Council Chambers Friday, November 4, 2011, 00:32 UTC

Thank you for your review! After reading through the nomination one last time, I realized you still have two unstruck objections, one each under "Biography—Youth—Boyhood" (the fueling depot article) and "Biography—Rogue warrior—Freedom's winter" (redlinks). I believe both are addressed, so could you please take a look and strike them so we can get this monstrosity off the FAN page? Thanks! Master Jonathan — Jedi Council Chambers Monday, December 5, 2011, 18:31 UTC

Deadeye Duncan

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Deadeye Duncan has been approved by the Inquisitorius and awarded Featured status. Please record your achievement here, and feel free to add the {{User featured}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The Inquisitorius thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — CC7567 (talk) 06:54, November 11, 2011 (UTC)
  • Also, congratulations on passing Wookieepedia's 1,100th FA! CC7567 (talk) 06:54, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ola

Hey, ExiledJedi. I'm wondering if you can help me out! I hope you're getting pumped for the barn-burner; I know I am, but there's currently a single source that eludes me. Your collection says that you have Star Wars Gamer 7 --- is there any chance that you could let me know what the article University of Sanbra Guide to Intelligent Life: The Anx has to say about Graxol Kelvyyn? If it's too huge a chunk of info to type out, that's fine. Thanks for any help you can give. Cheers! Menkooroo 12:13, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

  • Shit, man, that's awesome. Thanks a lot; that's really helpful. Menkooroo 02:58, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ellberger

Hey, EJ. Just a heads up that, per the Bravo 5 CCG card, the starship she flew during the Naboo Space Battle was called Bravo 5 and needs its own article. Happy barn-burning. NaruHina Talk 14px 08:11, November 28, 2011 (UTC)

The Price of Victory

Hello Exiledjedi, as you clearly have access to The Price of Victory, does Cabbel also make any such appearance in that, though I definitely won't have time to work on him anytime soon? Thanks. Hanzo Hasashi 20:14, November 29, 2011 (UTC)

  • A belated thanks. When I have more time I will eventually nominate him. Hanzo Hasashi 18:18, December 3, 2011 (UTC)

Kill!

Hey there EJ. You seem to be online right now --- is there any chance I could get your help here? Killing needs one more vote, and it would be a shame if the article's CA status was kept. Thanks for your time! Menkooroo 16:30, December 4, 2011 (UTC)

css

Hey, the code you added to your personal css actually makes the section show... I added it just to be able to easier delete any comments that slip through. :P 1358 (Talk) 11:48, December 7, 2011 (UTC)

Unidentified Rebel captain (Champion)

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Unidentified Rebel captain (Champion) has been approved by the AgriCorps and awarded Good status. Feel free to add the {{User GA}} template to your userpage to acknowledge your hard work. The AgriCorps thanks you for your efforts, and looks forward to future nominations from you! — grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 10:10, December 11, 2011 (UTC)