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Telosian Jedi Academy

Things to do

  • Article should follow site precedent and use "Description" as section title opposed to "Layout"
  • None of the BBY dates are referenced correctly. They can't be sourced to the video games, for one. And neither of the double refs being used to cite "At some point between 3643 and 3641 BBY" statement mention those years at all. Whatever math is being used to arrive at these dates needs to be clearly explained.
  • Article could afford to hold more images in better formatted placements, such as not running into section quotes
  • BTS needs to include full publication data
  • Ref 3 is poor and needs to be cleaned up/modernized.
  • Short one-sentence paragraphs should be joined with larger paragraphs. Imperators II(Talk) 18:44, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • Image thumbnails are still Monobook-sized, as opposed to Oasis-sized. Imperators II(Talk) 18:44, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • The BTS is referenced wrong, with the source for the release date being used for info that should instead be referenced to the game itself; however, this is all moot anyway since the game should only get a release year, per the Layout Guide. Imperators II(Talk) 18:44, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • Since the Dark Side comic was added to the Appearances section by an anon, I'd like a confirmation that the comic doesn't, in fact, contain any new information that should be added to the article. Imperators II(Talk) 18:51, August 28, 2020 (UTC)
  • The BTS may or may not want to mention that the Crew Skill mission listed on the article is no longer present in the current version of SWTOR. Imperators II(Talk) 12:07, August 29, 2020 (UTC)

Removal of FA status

Redux review

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