Wookieepedia:Inq/Meeting 119

Inquisitorius Halloween is set for 6:00 PM UTC / 2:00 PM ET on October 31. Dress up in the costume that best represents the scariest article nomination you've ever had to review. Winner takes home a pillowcase full of candy.

Trick or treat

Smell my feet

• Mission to free Wookiee prisoners (diff • review)
• Xamar (diff • review)
• Spar (diff • review)
• Nosaurian/Legends (diff • review)
• Omwati/Legends (diff • review)
• Ranulf Trommer (diff • review)
• Lens Reekeene (diff • review)
• Houk–Weequay conflicts (diff • review)
• Glurrg (diff • review)
• Battle of the World-Well (diff • review)
• Imperial Sentinel (diff • review)

Give me something good to eat

Expand as needed. See Maintenance bin.

• Battle of Christophsis/Legends
  • A source was recently added, should be investigated.
  • Redirects.
  • Several paragraphs can be cut down.
  • "The battle" and BTS can be subsectioned further. In the latter's case, subsections for specific releases.
  • Unsourced BTS information.
    • Nevermind about this one, the only unsourced bits are assumptions made by the article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:49, October 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • There is a lot of free space for more images. This is a prominent battle, I don't see an issue in acquiring additional images.
  • Ref 13 needs to use SWArchive.
  • Star Wars: Build the Millennium Falcon 35 is listed in Sources. It's canonicity in Legends should be investigated UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:46, October 5, 2020 (UTC)
• Humbarine/Legends
  • General underlinking
  • Not all of the BBY/ABY dates are referenced correctly
  • Redirect and redlink
  • History section could be subsectioned
  • Not really sure the Locations section is necessary. The article has well established that the entire planet is one big city. If there are no specific locations within this city to call out, the Locations doesn't really add anything.
  • BTS is partly unsourced and should mention author of first-mentioned source. Additional sentence(s) regurgitating the Sources list can be removed.
  • Ref 5 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:14, October 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • The source that was recently added should be investigated. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:57, October 10, 2020 (UTC)
• Aargau/Legends
  • New source was added, should be investigated.
  • Duplicate links, redlink.
  • Unsourced BTS information.
  • BTS is missing full comic release date and redundant information from Appearances/Sources should be removed.
  • Ref 6 must use CSWECite.
  • Darth Plagueis and Labyrinth of Evil audiobooks should presumably be added to Appearances. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:55, October 10, 2020 (UTC)
• Clabburn the Elder
  • Dates require better referencing.
  • Biography needs to be split into several subsections for better presentation in the Oasis skin. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:01, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Kolatill
  • Duplicate link(s)
  • BTS needs to be reworded in light of the designation of the Expanded Universe to the Star Wars Legends continuity.
  • The title of the adventure needs to be formatted consistently.
  • {{CSWECite}} must be implemented under Sources.
  • The Online Companion reference must be expanded with a comment that says the info within applies to the Kolatill system
  • Per precedent established by recent articles, if there's a choice for referencing between several editions of a source, the latest edition, i.e., the Deluxe box set, should be used to source everything but the initial release info in BTS.
  • All the dates in the article need to be properly referenced.
  • The intro should be split into several paragraphs.
  • Description and History need to be subsectioned, which may allow for more room for images.
  • Per precedent for Legends astrographical articles, the grid coordinates from the Atlas should be noted in the BTS (not in the article's body, which violates the rules within the Layout Guide).
  • Underlinking. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:52, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Yanibar
  • Update needed.
  • BTS is completely unsourced and contains duplicate link(s).
  • All dates in the article need to be properly sourced.
  • Publication dates for all the sources mentioned in the BTS should be added.
  • Authors of Hero's Guide and illustrator of the Zeison Sha entry should be mentioned.
  • Bulleted list in infobox is improperly formatted.
  • Underlinking in infobox.
  • Per precedent established by astrographical articles, the Atlas grid coordinates should be added to BTS.
  • Since the BTS states that the article assumes the planet's placement in Wild Space to be correct, it shouldn't be noted in Description that there "accounts" placing it in the Outer Rim, especially since the entries related to Yanibar from those sources are not presented as IU narratives.
  • History should be subsectioned and definitely has room for more images, of Bodo-Baas, for example.
  • Why is "voorcat" listed under Immigrated species in infobox? The article presents it as a non-sentient creature native to the planet, and it should therefore be listed under Fauna.
  • The only mention of "Yanibar" in The Essential Atlas is in the book's Appendix section with regard to the Yanibar system, so the book isn't even a Source for the planet, and the wording in the BTS should be amended to better reflect the fact. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:08, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• New Bakstre
  • Redirects.
  • Per Sourcing policy, references can no longer list page numbers.
  • The Online Companion reference must be expanded with a comment that says the info within applies to the New Bakstre system.
  • The title of the adventure needs to be formatted consistently.
  • Any information from Atlas historical maps that don't explicitly mention New Bakstre must be removed as extrapolation, per the Layout Guide. The population map doesn't explicitly feature the planet, so the population figure applies to the system instead.
  • Per precedent for Legends astrographical articles, the grid coordinates from the Atlas should be noted in the BTS.
  • History must be subsectioned.
  • All the dates in the article must be referenced properly.
  • The image category must be linked to in the article.
  • Much of the BTS simply repeats what the Appearances and Sources lists say and should therefore just be removed. Furthermore, the third paragraph of BTS is speculatory and unnecessary on this article. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:33, October 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Boz Pity/Legends
  • New source should be investigated.
  • Page numbers no longer required in references.
  • Ref 10 must use CSWECite.
  • Ref 23 must use the Blog template.
  • Ref 24 must use Cite_web.
  • Grid coordinates are infobox-exclusive.
  • "Early history" and "Galactic Civil War" sections can use paragraph breaks.
  • Can 0 ABY be sourced straight to Star Wars Battlefront: Renegade Squadron without a note?
  • BTS needs a revamp: Unsourced information, redundant info about further appearances and mentions, and full comic release date.
  • Star Wars—Free Comic Book Day 2005 Special should be spelled out instead of pipelinked to another name.
  • Abridged Dark Lord: The Rise of Darth Vader audiobook should be investigated for a mention, and unabridged audiobook should presumably be added to Appearances. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:09, October 20, 2020 (UTC)
• Xamuel Lennox
  • Monobook-era paragraphs need resizing.
    • P&T should probably be subsectioned, as could the Captain of the Tyrant section.
  • Redirect.
  • Duplicate links.
  • Article needs to refer to the MOS' link formatting section.
  • The reasoning for the Tyrant's class is very dubious. For a start, as noted on Tyrant, the ship's model differs between shots. This should either be changed to label that ship as an ISD II or at the very least just an ISD. The ref also contains a redlink.
  • Equipment can be expanded (boots, rank plaque, code cylinders, cap, etc).
  • Image links need to use underscores instead of spaces.
  • Some source names need reformatting eg "''[[The Force Unleashed (novel)]]''."
  • Images should ideally be distributed in a right left patten. Article currently has three consecutive right-aligned images.
  • Images could probably be enlarged as many are rather small. This should be tackled in tandem with the paragraph resizing.
  • Article should use cut-out infobox image from the canon page.
  • Article should simply implement {{Otheruses}}.
  • Imagecat and soundcat should be added/created. Tommy-Macaroni 21:45, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

If you don't, I don't care. I'll pull down your underwear.

Expand as needed.

• Membership discussion. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:44, October 6, 2020 (UTC)
• Redux paperwork instructions. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:44, October 6, 2020 (UTC)
• An Inq page thing. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:05, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

The walking dead

Ghouls

1. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:46, October 4, 2020 (UTC)
2. Tommy-Macaroni 22:04, 27 October 2020 (UTC)

Goblins

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:18, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
2. Will be at work, notes are below. Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:14, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
3. 1358 ^(Talk) 15:26, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Suggestions for next year

Impgoblin

• Extend Imperial Sentinel, kill the rest of the old stuff.
• Probe all the new stuff.
• Give Tommy my vote on anything else. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:18, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

SE

• Extend Sentinel, kill the rest of the old. Probe all the new things. For anything else, Tope has my vote. Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:15, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Ecks

• Per the above gentlemen. Tommy gets my vote. 1358 ^(Talk) 15:26, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Minutes

Attendance

• Tommy-Macaroni
• Toprawa and Ralltiir

Articles stripped of status

• Mission to free Wookiee prisoners
• Xamar
• Spar
• Nosaurian/Legends
• Omwati/Legends
• Ranulf Trommer
• Lens Reekeene
• Houk–Weequay conflicts
• Glurrg
• Battle of the World-Well

Articles whose probation was extended

• Imperial Sentinel

Articles placed on probation

• Battle of Christophsis/Legends
• Humbarine/Legends
• Aargau/Legends
• Kolatill
• Yanibar
• New Bakstre
• Boz Pity/Legends
• Xamuel Lennox
• Moorja/Legends
• Intimidator (Executor-class)

Notes

• Log
• Imperators does paperwork
• MasterFredcerique admitted to the Inquisitorius
• Redux paperwork instructions motion passed
• On the Inquisitorius page, Inquisitors are no longer marked as being part of AgriCorps