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Glurrg
Things to do
- For starters, I'd say we need to move the tiny "Biology and appearance" image into the infobox as the main image. The one being used currently, you really can't even see what's going on there. The glurrgs are virtually indecipherable. At least in the tiny image you can see what it is, and it's certainly not the only place where we're using these little images.
- Some general underlinking, double linking throughout
- The "Biology and appearance" could use a paragraph break and could be written better in some places. In the middle of the paragraph, there are three sentences in a row that begin the same way, "Glurrgs, Glurrgs, Glurrgs." Mix it up a little bit.
- In that same section, the first sentence isn't really referenced properly. It can't source the shorter-than-1.9m height straight to NEGAS like that, as that book does not mention this species. That will need a manual ref note to explain this.
- Second paragraph of "Behavior and intelligence" could use a paragraph break, and then that section could probably be subsectioned.
- I'd say the History section could benefit from subsectioning as well
- Glurrgs are not mentioned in Essential Atlas, so it's not clear how that source is being used to reference the 3000 BBY date. That should use an explanatory ref note.
- BTS is unsourced and could be written better than the "only appeared in" wording for the single source
- "Concept art" designation is unnecessary for Sources item
- I don't see why the parenthetical designation is necessary for the Databank ref note. Just use the correct archivedate URL in the template.
Removal of FA status
- Placed on probation at Meeting 118. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:02, October 4, 2020 (UTC)
- Status removed at Meeting 119. Imperators II(Talk) 11:20, 3 November 2020 (UTC)