Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Unidentified Jedi Master (Endar Spire) (second nomination)

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Unidentified Jedi Master (Endar Spire)

  • Nominated by: Jedi symbol SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 03:49, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 05:39, 28 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 670 words (90 introduction, 371 body, 209 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional):WP:KOTOR

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Goodmind (talk) 22:52, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:59, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:06, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 18:19, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Objection handled via Discord. So glad to see both you and KOTOR back on the GAN, Cosmos! Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:38, 28 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • Please revise the two instances of [[Jedi Knight/Legends|Jedi Padawn]] TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:31, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Done. Can't believe I didn't catch that. :p Jedi symbol SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 19:09, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • Is there a reason this page isn't titled Unidentified Jedi Master (Endar Spire)? Lewisr (talk) 23:06, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Precedent is to include the date and location of death in a single written note for the death field Lewisr (talk) 23:06, 20 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Combined the references. I don't see any reason it couldn't be moved if that title is better. Jedi symbol SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 02:34, 21 December 2023 (UTC)
      • It's more specific than just Jedi, so if they are a Jedi Master then I'd defo recommend moving to that Lewisr (talk) 17:24, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • Intro-exclusive mention of Jedi Civil War.
  • Would like to see consistent referencing for species, which is also mentioned twice in the body currently.
  • Context for Campaign Guide and strategy guide. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:00, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Having looked at the probation page, please confirm/deny the second-to-last objection there. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:01, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
    • I think I got everything. As for the previous objection, the Campaign guide confirms his gender by calling him "prodigal son." Jedi symbol SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 15:34, 26 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:38, 28 December 2023 (UTC)