Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tol Cressa

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Tol Cressa

  • Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 21:07, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Politics. For the barn-burner. WP:KOTOR for the win.

(3 ACs/7 Users/10 Total)

Support

  1. No objections from me. DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 21:40, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
  2. —MJ— Comlink 23:13, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Winterz (talk) 01:05, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  4. 501st dogma(talk) 01:03, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
  5. As the user who added most of the appearances :P Imperators II(Talk) 09:39, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
  6. Jinzler (talk) 16:40, December 22, 2012 (UTC)
  7. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:38, December 26, 2012 (UTC)
  8. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:33, December 31, 2012 (UTC)
  9. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:45, January 5, 2013 (UTC)
  10. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:54, January 9, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Hai
    • I understand that I've already signed my support but just noticed something. Can you give some context on the Dark Wars or even the Great Sith War?Winterz (talk) 01:30, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Imperators II
    • Ummm, no info on this subject? Imperators II(Talk) 15:43, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
      • Taken care of.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:04, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
        • Here's the problem. The entry on the G0-T0 droids mentions nothing of Cressa's involvement with the operation.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 21:06, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
          • Imperators, I was wrong. One of the codex entries does mention Cressa's involvement in the liberation. Please take a look over the article once more.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:46, December 20, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Jinzler
    • "During the last stages of that battle, Cressa began an investigation into how the planet Taris gained such a quick entry into the Republic." Is there any particular reason why Taris' quick entry into the Republic would be considered suspicious? If so, would the cause of his suspicion warrant a brief mention in the article, to give some further context?
      • Added some context, please take a look.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 18:12, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
    • A nice little article. For a guy who is mentioned in so many sources, so little is revealed about him. --Jinzler (talk) 09:53, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
      • There appear to be a lot of characters like that now. Thanks for the review, Jinzler.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 18:12, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • The first paragraph of bio skips around chronologically from 3963 to 3966, and then to 3962 at the start of the second paragraph. I think you need to reorder the paragraph to make more sense chronologically. Also, you make no mention of the Mandalorian Wars, during which the battle of Taris took place. Also, why was Rey assigned to the Senator? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:23, January 8, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:54, January 9, 2013 (UTC)