Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Thaneespi/Legends

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Thaneespi/Legends

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:17, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This'll be the last Legends ROTJ Mon Cal from me, I think Dat is going to try to tackle Verrack once his block is up.
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Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:00, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
2. Nice work. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:30, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
3. Looks great! Minnabird ^(talk) 20:11, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:42, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 11:32, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
6. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:12, 8 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Any appearances in adaptations such as Return of the Jedi Storybook? UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:25, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Adaptations and such would have been added when I was checking sources for Haash'n, that specific one I've asked Ayrehead to check. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:13, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Nothing in the Storybook. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:39, 25 July 2021 (UTC)

Minnabird

• Review my copy-edits here; just awkward grammar, but some of the sentences ended up restructured to compensate. Also, is it necessary to note that the helmet is removable? One would hope that it is removable on the living Mon Cal wearing it. Minnabird ^(talk) 17:19, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Sure, removed. And thanks for the copy-edit, I like what you've done there--just note that I've removed the word "typically" as the source doesn't word it that way. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:46, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah, perfect, sorry about introducing the "typically"! Also, still seeing the "removable" description attached to the helmet; are you keeping that? Minnabird ^(talk) 18:19, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
      • No worries, and no, just forgot. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:25, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• "Thaneespi's helmet was originally intended to be worn by Admiral Ackbar, but it was given to her instead seeing as Ackbar's articulated head did not allow for the helmet to be used.[7]" — sourcing this entire sentence straight to Star Wars Costumes: The Original Trilogy implies that Thaneespi is mentioned in the book; is this intentional? Imperators II^(Talk) 09:26, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
  • The book explains that the helmet was given to another Mon Calamari on Home One but does not mention Thaneespi by name, hence an Imo for the canon version. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:51, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah, I didn't realize that book was Canon, sorry. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:42, 8 August 2021 (UTC)

Ecks

• I think it's definitely worth mentioning both in the intro that the Home One was the command ship/lead ship at Endor.
• Instead of mentioning that Ackbar stood beside Thaneespi, you should mention where that conversation takes place (the bridge, I presume?).
• "where it fought for the Alliance." This is unnecessary, you already say the Home One is an Alliance ship. I'd remove it myself but the resulting sentence becomes a bit awkward so I'll let you figure out how to rearrange the paragraph.
• I've made some minor rearranging in the bio, please ensure the referencing is still accurate. 1358 ^(Talk) 15:39, 8 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:12, 8 August 2021 (UTC)