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Reventine

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Support

  1. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 09:21, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:35, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
  3. Panther436 (talk) 17:56, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:09, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 02:12, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • It should be noted that Reventine appeared on the map that Bell/Harlak were looking at when they pinpointed where Melis would strike Lewisr (talk) 18:24, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:45, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Should also be in the BTS/appearance section Lewisr (talk) 21:30, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
        • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:01, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Melis herself notes about Reventine while heading there that 'It was going to be interesting. The first time she'd raided somewhere so far out, and so populated.' Lewisr (talk) 18:24, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:45, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Context needed for Eriadu in the intro and body Lewisr (talk) 18:27, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Source never specifies if it's referring to the system or the planet. I thought it best to simply say "Eriadu" and leave it there. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:37, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Actually, come to think of it, it doesn't matter if the article says the planet or system; it's still two systems away either way so it wouldn't be untrue. Added context. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:02, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't see reference to Eye of Darkness being part of Phase III in the current cite, you can just change it to this Lewisr (talk) 18:29, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Changed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:45, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Unless I missed something, I don't see a direct reference to Reventine/the Seswenna sector being in the Outer Rim, so that'll need a note in a reference Lewisr (talk) 20:45, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:03, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Melis' planned raid is notable for a page, even if it never actually happened Lewisr (talk) 21:34, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:13, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
  • The intro should make it clear that Reventine was actually going to be raided, currently it's only established as theorized Lewisr (talk) 21:37, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:13, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
Imp
  • Any chance the first History sentence could be rewritten (and possibly split up) in order to make it clearer? The two uses of "expanded" there make it really confusing for me. Imperators II(Talk) 10:55, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Adjusted. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:09, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Very nice that you also split that long paragraph there. Imperators II(Talk) 09:21, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • I'd say The Eye of Darkness date note used for "A year later" is not necessary if the novel itself explicitly says that. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:51, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
Panther
  • The Stormwall's expansion should have its own article and is thus a redlink. I believe it's referred to as the "expansion of the Stormwall" in the text so the article should probably be titled that.
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:13, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Avar didn't use the Path engine to go through the Stormwall, it was disabled by that time. She used hyperspace info from an EX droid. Panther436 (talk) 20:12, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:13, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Really the most minor thing, but was unsure if there was a reason Shryke was contextualized only as a "Nihil member." It might be more fitting to refer to her as Nihil Storm, given the context of the Reventine events are that she's a bit of a ringleader with forces to command under her. Or if not by rank, identifying her as a leader. Though the current version is also accurate if it was written that way intentionally, figured to ask.—spookywillowwtalk 21:18, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Is there a source identifying her as a Storm? I wasn't sure about her rank and I never saw it mentioned in Eye of Darkness or on her wiki page. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:36, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
      • EoD uses Storm on pages 343-344 (which seems to be the Reventine-connected scene), or alternatively, THR encylopedia uses captain.—spookywillowwtalk 18:43, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
        • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:08, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • I'm aware that there are more quotes fitting for the other sections of the article, and I will be adding them later today; I presently don't have The Eye of Darkness on hand with me but I will after work. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 16:54, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Whose typo is the "Cacophany" in the quote? Imperators II(Talk) 20:53, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Pretty sure that's my typo, but I don't have the book on hand for a few hours so it'll be a bit before I can check to make sure. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:58, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
      • It was, but I've corrected it Lewisr (talk) 21:27, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:12, 12 December 2023 (UTC)