Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Quermia

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Quermia

• Nominated by: AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 06:59, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Comprehensive article that got too long.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 03:20, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:00, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:02, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:47, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• The blockade can get an article.
  • Created. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 19:53, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
• Dates for Clone Wars. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:00, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 05:03, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

OOM

• "Ancestors" in the intro could be pipelinked to Xexto.
  • The source says that these "ansestors" were a genetic offshoot of the Xexto that was named for the world they were settled on, so Savage Spirits' use of the word ansestors is a little odd. Not sure if a piplink is necessary. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 20:18, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
    • I see. No need for a pipelink then; that would mean these Xexto genetic offshoots were simply the transitory organisms between the Xexto and Quermians. - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:49, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
• "It was located near the planet Troiken, homeworld of the Xexto species." Unclear as to what "it" is referring to.
  • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 20:18, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
• Per the Manual of Style, individual words within proper compound nouns should not be linked. (Clone Wars) - - -OOM 224 ༼༽^{talk}༼༽ 20:07, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 20:18, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Lewis

• Per Star Wars 9, an update is needed for the page Lewisr (talk) 15:42, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Taken care of. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:31, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

Toprawa

• I've added a Canon redlink for "gene," which you should create an article for
  • Created. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:38, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
• I would suggest revising the wording of this sentence. I think the context we're meant to understand here is that the Empire took possession of the relic and brought it back to Coruscant to display in the Imperial Museum, which in the real world is a common result of imperial colonialism. For example, there are many artifacts from India on display in British museums, which some people native to India consider to have been "stolen" from their home. Likely, this wasn't the case of literal Imperial thievery in the truest sense of the word. Instead, it would be better to present the idea in the Inhabitants section that Needle considered the relic to have been stolen:"...a holy relic of the Quermian people had been stolen from Quermia and put on display in the Imperial Museum on the planet Coruscant."
  • Fixed. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:13, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
• If the planet is not pictured in USW, the Galactic Atlas needs a "first pictured" tag in the Sources list, and that fact needs to be mentioned in the BTS, along with the artist's name if possible. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 02:13, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:44, 21 December 2020 (UTC)