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Noslo-19 slug rifle
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:20, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
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UberSoldat93 
(talk) 18:42, 30 September 2022 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 15:42, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
- - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:35, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
- Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 18:41, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
Backup link for SWG card, please.Context for Kessel and Tatooine upon first mentions.I fail to see the relevance of the last sentence in Biography if it does not mention the Noslo at all.The Databank entry does not include a date of publication and caledre's real name, so those need another source.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:37, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed. As for Tatooine, in the same sentence, I already said it's a planet after initially talking about it. Because the initial thing that talks about Tatooine doesn't list it as a planet, I considered that a better way to cite the information. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:04, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
- Ideally, you want the reader to know what a Tatooine is when you introduce it, you cannot expect them to instantly know that "the planet" mentioned later on is Tatooine. UberSoldat93 (talk)
- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:29, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
- Ideally, you want the reader to know what a Tatooine is when you introduce it, you cannot expect them to instantly know that "the planet" mentioned later on is Tatooine. UberSoldat93
- Fixed. As for Tatooine, in the same sentence, I already said it's a planet after initially talking about it. Because the initial thing that talks about Tatooine doesn't list it as a planet, I considered that a better way to cite the information. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:04, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead
You should cover the fact that the Hasbro figures gun is silver rather then black in the BTS, especially since it's the infobox image.Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:07, 6 November 2022 (UTC)- Done. I'm not 100% sure if the source for the toy release is reliable, though. As for Databank entry, from the forums, I can't be 100% sure if January 2008 was the specific time of entry. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:21, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
- I've added a more specific date for the What's the Story feature, but otherwise looks good to me. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:55, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
- Done. I'm not 100% sure if the source for the toy release is reliable, though. As for Databank entry, from the forums, I can't be 100% sure if January 2008 was the specific time of entry. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:21, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
I don't really see how Malar connecting with Skywalker is relevant to the rifle so I think that sentence can be removed.Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:07, 6 November 2022 (UTC)- Fixed the second one. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:37, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
Fred strikes back
Forgive me if I'm misunderstanding, but was the rifle not created for ROTJ? Even if it's in a deleted scene, it wouldn't be accurate to say it was created for the RPG.MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 08:49, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
- First image of any prop was used in the CCG. As that card game sometimes creates things, combined with the fact that there were no promotional photos of Bane Malar that are confirmed to be the film set that include the weapon model, I couldn't be 100% sure that the rifle was also created for the film as opposed to only Malar. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:30, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
- In that case, I would say "first appeared" instead of "was created for," and I wouldn't identify it as a prop in the second to last sentence. MasterFred(talk) (he/him) 08:57, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
- Rewrote. CCG image is the same live action photo for all other sources picturing rifle. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:43, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
- In that case, I would say "first appeared" instead of "was created for," and I wouldn't identify it as a prop in the second to last sentence. MasterFred
- First image of any prop was used in the CCG. As that card game sometimes creates things, combined with the fact that there were no promotional photos of Bane Malar that are confirmed to be the film set that include the weapon model, I couldn't be 100% sure that the rifle was also created for the film as opposed to only Malar. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:30, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:41, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
- Note I am aware of Star Wars Galaxies Trading Card Game — Galactic Hunters (Destroy All Droids promotional scenario), and it's not clear if the rifle Bane Malar uses is the Noslo-19. "Star Wars Style: Return of the Jedi, Part 6" — Star Wars Insider 158 doesn't include, so can't seem to confirm if the rifle was onset for Return of the Jedi, even when Bane Malar was confirmed as such. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:01, 27 July 2022 (UTC)
- Star Wars Customizable Card Game — Jabba's Palace Limited Card: Bane Malar (backup link) is the first live action image of the rifle, and all other live action images are the same image. Per earlier comment, with "Star Wars Style: Return of the Jedi, Part 6" — Star Wars Insider 158 not including the rifle, unclear if the prop was for the film, or created by the CCG. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:09, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
