Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Nar Shaddaa agri-utility crop sprayer

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Nar Shaddaa agri-utility crop sprayer

• Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 04:08, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 21:53, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:52, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

   UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:59, 30 December 2022 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- OOM 224 (he/him) 21:06, 1 February 2023 (UTC))

2. —spookywilloww^talk 17:50, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
3. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 18:32, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:43, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 (he/him) 21:53, 12 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• Per here you shouldn't link Nar Shaddaa as part of the subject's name. You should instead make a new sentence saying it shared it's name with the moon.
  • Nar Shaddaa is a planet? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:47, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed to moon. TK-462 (talk) 23:46, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
• History could use paragraph break.
• Context for Fleet Support?
  • Not seeing anything added for this. It's article says it's a structure. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:47, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
    • My bad, misunderstood. Fixed. TK-462 (talk) 23:46, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
• Does the 22 BBY date note cover that mention of Ord Mantell? Same applies to the referencing of Mid Rim for Quilora and the info before that.
  • Does TEAOC cover all of that stuff about the crop sprayer before the mention of Quilora? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:47, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed. TK-462 (talk) 23:46, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
• There's a complete inconsistency between Nar Shaddaa being hyphenated and spaced. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 13:34, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
  • All should be addressed. TK-462 (talk) 14:49, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Precedent is to mention date and place of death in the date note. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:18, 25 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:41, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
• Per precedent in vehicle status articles, you need to mention the existence of its engines in Description.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
• From the article it sounds like this is capable of space travel, or atmospheric flight at the very least. Either way, this warrants documentation in Description. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:55, 11 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:31, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
• Life support is currently infobox-exclusive. I could add this myself but I haven't read the novel to know if this is elaborated upon. UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:12, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Taken care of. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:05, 24 December 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• It seems to me that we should have an article for crop sprayer based on the way I'm reading this article. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:06, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Addressed. Samonic ^(Talk) 14:08, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

Dani

• Per the newly passed CT, the first usage of the name in Description should not have a link to crop. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 13:10, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Oh no, new rules. :P Amended. Samonic ^(he/him) 14:45, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
• Unfamiliar with the story, but does the R5 astromech deserve an article? NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 13:10, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't think so. Samonic ^(he/him) 14:45, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
• Given the fact that crop sprayer can only carry 4 passengers, would it be reasonable to list the names of those that rode it to Qiilura? This would, I assume, remove the linking from the header quote as well. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 13:10, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
  • Done. Samonic ^(he/him) 18:10, 11 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:53, 12 February 2023 (UTC)

• As Jade can't address the objections, I've taken over the nomination for now. Samonic ^(Talk) 14:08, 11 January 2023 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

JMM's objection is almost a month old. Jade has failed to respond on the server or here on the wiki despite multiple attempts to contact him. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:07, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 16:10, 5 January 2023 (UTC)

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:51, 11 January 2023 (UTC)