Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ixgil (second nomination)

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Ixgil

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Imperators II^(Talk) 18:04, 13 May 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:03, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
Nice work. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 23:47, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
Hope to see more from you. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:49, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
MasterFred(talk) 09:43, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

~~Remember what I told you about the dating of Sol'aa?~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 15:47, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Whoops. Thought I changed that. Fixed. ImpacticForce (Talk) 19:31, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
  - Right now, you're dating broader events, i.e., the invasion and occupation of Taris, not just Ixgil's (appearance and) death, to 3956 BBY. Can the invasion really be dated to that year? And in any case, the dating ref should include a brief mention of Revan and Onasi's arrival on Taris.
You're saying the Sith soldier was accompanied by "two battle droids". This image depicts the soldier together with a Sentinel droid - was the other droid a different model? If not, you should pipelink to that specific model.
~~Even if all the models of Duros in KOTOR share the same apparel, you should avoid generalizing that attire to "any other Duros at the time".~~
~~So why are we going with PC dialogue instead of the original Xbox one? Is there status article precedent for this?~~
~~Please add a link to an image category for Ixgil to the article.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 11:23, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
- The date note may still need some work, it was difficult to word properly. As for the dialogue, there's no status article precedent exactly. However, other articles, such as Sol'aa, assume that the appearance of the characters in the PC version is the correct one. This issue could use a policy addressing it. Fixed the other objections. ImpacticForce (Talk) 00:56, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

~~In the second paragraph of the Bts, can you clarify whose quotes were incorrectly subtitled?~~ JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:33, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. ImpacticForce (Talk) 20:37, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
~~I would get rid of the one sentence paragraph in Biography.~~ JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:56, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
- It did contain so important info, so I integrated it into the second paragraph. ImpacticForce (Talk) 23:18, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
  - That's what I meant, sorry. Looks good. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:19, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

I think there's some minor speculation in the P&T, the game doesn't suggest he was afraid to speak up against the Sith, just that he did it, and it doesn't specify that he accepted life in a Humanocentric city, just that he lived in one. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:42, 14 May 2021 (UTC)
- Tried to make it less speculative. It should be better now. ImpacticForce (Talk) 12:49, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

~~"He wore a mauve and white tunic, with matching pants and a black belt.", correct me if I'm wrong, but shouldn't this be in an equipment section?~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 17:49, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
- That's actually a good question. The nature of the text indicates it should, but some other noms I've seen have put their clothing in the traits section. I'll move it to a new equipment section for now. ImpacticForce (Talk) 23:00, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:43, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

While not directly relating to Ixgil, his friend was arrested for hiding the bodies. I wasn't sure if I should include it, so it was omitted. I could easily re-add it if deemed necessary. ImpacticForce (Talk) 15:40, 27 April 2021 (UTC)