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Dressellian Projectile Rifle

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Support

  1. ACvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:50, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. Very interesting subject! AxMech (talk) 14:53, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 05:02, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote OOM 224 (he/him) 21:19, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
  5. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:49, 2 February 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni
  • I would mention the reason we're going with this name as the correct one, which I assume is for consistency with the Dressellian species name. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:17, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Per page 5 of the Arms & Equipment Guide, all non-thrown ranged weapons have a maximum range of 10 range increments, which is the standard for all weapons from the Revised RPG unless stated otherwise. This would give it a maximum range of 200 meters, not 20 meters.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 20:44, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 20:46, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
      • This probably needs additional referencing unless this is stated somewhere in the Ultimate Alien Anthology.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 00:41, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
Uber
  • Repeat information here: "The rifle included a long barrel with a scope, a cartridge loader, trigger, large stock, and a carry strap.[4] The weapon was colored brown, with a black scope, strap, cartridge loader, and trigger."
    • I reworded to make it more obvious what I was doing.
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    • Fixed.
  • Since you're referring to the spelling of the species' name, which exists outside this article, in the BTS, I would like to see a source with that spelling cited there. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:26, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Used one of the preexisting sources, which spells out species name. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:42, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 21:19, 1 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:29, 2 February 2023 (UTC)