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Carbon Freeze
- Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 06:49, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Previously a CAN, but exceeded the word count.
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
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Support
- OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:49, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, 3 April 2021 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 10:57, 5 April 2021 (UTC) - Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:57, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
- Still on my to-drink list! MasterFred
(talk) 15:56, 7 April 2021 (UTC) - Reviewed via Discord. Zed42 (talk) 07:56, 11 April 2021 (UTC)
Object
Imp
The passage by Tuggs is a legitimate IU quote that can go into Description.Please reflect the 1stp tag in the BTS.Now that the "potent" stuff is added to the body, I see no need to keep it in the BTS.Imperators II(Talk) 09:07, 3 April 2021 (UTC)Also, regarding the intro: can "to enjoy" really serve as a synonym for "to drink" as opposed to "to like what you're drinking"?Imperators II(Talk) 09:09, 3 April 2021 (UTC)Also, it seems to me that Description lends itself rather well to splitting into two paragraphs, one about the objective physical description, the other about opinions on it.Imperators II(Talk) 09:13, 3 April 2021 (UTC)- Think I got all of this done, and ooo, the paragraph split didn't occur to me, thank you! Immi Thrax (talk) 09:28, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
CC-8
I'm not seeing the containing worrt eggs part in the description.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:10, 4 April 2021 (UTC)- I've revised the wording to clarify that, thank you! Immi Thrax (talk) 11:36, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
Where's the wikipedia links in the Bts link you've had in these other food articles?Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:42, 4 April 2021 (UTC)- We have been doing those for the ingredients in recipes from Star Wars: Galaxy's Edge: The Official Black Spire Outpost Cookbook, but not for the theme park foods/beverages. The other ones I've worked on myself have mostly been from that cookbook. Got used to seeing them? Immi Thrax (talk) 12:33, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
- Very well then. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 13:57, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
- We have been doing those for the ingredients in recipes from Star Wars: Galaxy's Edge: The Official Black Spire Outpost Cookbook, but not for the theme park foods/beverages. The other ones I've worked on myself have mostly been from that cookbook. Got used to seeing them? Immi Thrax (talk) 12:33, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 07:56, 11 April 2021 (UTC)