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Battle of Hypori

  • Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 00:53, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Fixed the issues it had during probation review as a Comprehensive Article, but doing so pushed it over the word limit. I'm now nominating it for GA status (and have gotten prior consent from Lewisr this time).
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Support

  1. ACvote OOM 224 06:27, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
  2. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 07:36, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
  3. Fan26 (Talk) 15:23, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:12, 17 October 2022 (UTC)
  5. (copy edit) ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 19:41, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 13:38, 4 November 2022 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Please ensure this article complies with the Layout Guide regarding event articles.
    • The only missing section is the "Prelude" section, for which we have no information regarding this specific battle. Should context regarding the Clone Wars itself be given here if nothing else? DFaceG (talk) 17:09, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
      • Adjusted per Discord. DFaceG (talk) 05:56, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Missing mention of comic in BTS. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:59, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
Imp
  • I'm afraid the anchor link for the Rishi Station defense date doesn't work. I'd suggest you try calling the TCW dating template for that specific episode as one would normally do (i.e., {{TCWcanondates|105}}) and then work around that. Imperators II(Talk) 09:45, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Please document the 1stp in the BTS. Imperators II(Talk) 11:50, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Can you please note the comic issue's writer and penciller? Imperators II(Talk) 13:26, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:48, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Does Chapter 20 of the 2003 CW series actually use the name "Battle of Hypori" for the Legends battle? If not, you should find out in which source that name was first used. Imperators II(Talk) 21:36, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Scoured through all the Legends sources and found the first one to refer to it as such. Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 01:01, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
  • In the images, can you please whiten out the cut-off panels that aren't relevant? Imperators II(Talk) 20:07, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:43, 4 November 2022 (UTC)
Editor
  • Since it is a journal, not thoughts, you can include Kenobi's quotes about the battle.
  • The comic makes sure to note the battle occured in the aftermath of republic victories on christophsis and dantooine, creating a major failure among their successes. This needs to be noted, perhaps a prelude section? By the way, the confusing status of Dantooine's battle is described on Battle of Abrion Bridge, it would be concurrent in the infobox not previous Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:52, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. DFaceG (talk) 08:02, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
      • It needs to have a date note of some kind to prove its concurrent Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:07, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
        • Added (while offline but it was me who added it) - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 19:29, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • The intro was shortened per discussion on Discord so it wasn't just repeating the body nearly ver batim. DFaceG (talk) 00:55, 11 October 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:38, 4 November 2022 (UTC)