Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Aurora Adasca

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Aurora Adasca

  • Nominated by: NAYAYEN 19:35, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I think the "prove you can't make an intro push it over 250 words" CAN rule is really just to supply the GAN. Be gentle, it's only 252 words.

(5 ACs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:46, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Kilson(Let's have a chat) 23:36, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:12, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Currently sitting pretty at an easy 274 words. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:19, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Imperators II(Talk) 19:23, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:44, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Yes, let's snowball it a few hours before it will pass anyway. 1358 (Talk) 18:03, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • Wouldn't Category:Nobility apply to Aurora, as well, since she was the heir to the House of Adasca?
    • Fair deduction to make, added. NAYAYEN 07:41, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
  • There should be a link to Jedi scout, since that's what she was. Imperators II(Talk) 23:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
    • Good point, it's better than linking to the generic scout article. NAYAYEN 07:41, May 5, 2011 (UTC)
Kilson
  • You can put Revanchist and the The Adasca BioMechanical Corporation of Arkania in the Affiliation field of the Infobox.
    • Added
  • In the intro and Bio, please mention the year Serroco was razed by the Mandos.
    • Added
  • Could you use the {{CSWECite}} for the CSWE source item?
    • I'm sure I've seen an INQ or AC or someone say to leave it for the reference, but added anyway.
      • We just don't list the page number for the source item. I fixed it though.
  • That's all I have otherwise, nice job. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 04:55, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review Kilson, let me know if you see anything else. NAYAYEN 22:40, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
  • "...her disappearance enabled bids for the takeover of the Adasca Corporation." - bids by whom?
    • Added NAYAYEN 20:42, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
  • I'm wondering if there is enough information to warrant a P&T or P&A. We know she's Force-sensitive and a Jedi, and that she subscribed to the beliefs of the Revanchists. What do you think?
    • I'm not overly keen on adding what would be a rather redundant sentence with a heading. I'm happy to do so if you think it entirely necessary though. NAYAYEN 20:42, May 8, 2011 (UTC)
      • In this case, I wouldn't say it was necessary. I just figured it would be a way to increase the word count, at the very least. Regardless, it's your call. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 00:12, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
  • Good work. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 19:41, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:03, May 11, 2011 (UTC)


  • Just FYI, you don't have to be an EC to archive CAN noms. Please do so before you nominate the article for GAN next time. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 22:08, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
    • Yeah... The archiving instructions weren't very clear on that. I'll bear it in mind. NAYAYEN 22:40, May 7, 2011 (UTC)
  • Two notes: I implemented the citeweb template for reference 4. There may in fact be an Internet Archive link to include with the template as well, but their site is down at the moment, so I'll look into that later. Also, I don't know whether "Jackson" is his middle name or part of his last name, so the name field may in fact need to be formatted "Jackson, John Miller." If that does need to be revised, feel free. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:44, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
    • He's normally credited in the little box of names on the front covers of the comics as Miller so I'll make that a fair assumption as his last name. I removed the random mention of Chee in there too :P NAYAYEN 21:56, May 9, 2011 (UTC)
      • Oops, sorry about the Chee thing. I just copy and paste the template from article to article. I actually meant to say that it might need to be "Miller, John Jackson." My mistake. Judging from your comment, that seems to be the most appropriate. Also, I've replaced the empty citeweb fields. Those are typically kept for the same technical reasons that we use the entire infobox template code, etc. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:04, May 9, 2011 (UTC)