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Allen Neff
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:40, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
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UberSoldat93 
(talk) 15:58, 28 May 2022 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 19:23, 28 May 2022 (UTC) - Samonic
08:56, 2 June 2022 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:37, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 11:01, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
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Fan
Missing link in the infoboxFan26 (Talk) 04:20, 13 May 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:25, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
Why is the body not using an image with Neff in it?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:11, 24 May 2022 (UTC)- Added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:29, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
- It looks to me like that image is from the Topps card instead of taken directly from the film - can you upload a higher-quality version, please? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:57, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- Image changed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:33, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- It looks to me like that image is from the Topps card instead of taken directly from the film - can you upload a higher-quality version, please? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:57, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- Added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:29, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay, couple more things: skin color should go in a P+T section.- Authors for novelization and storybook, please.
Is there any chance you can convert the pdf cited in the Facebook post to jpg or png?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:11, 10 June 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 23:53, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
The first instance of the character's name should be cited to the source that uses it.You source the first instance of 3 ABY to NEC but don't do it for the next one. If Rogues Gallery supports the date then the NEC reference can go.The BTS could use an image.No source supports the novelization release date.Link to Star Wars Insider.Please alphabetize the authors.- All addressed.
- Alphabetization was pending but I've done myself now. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:44, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- Alphabetization was pending but I've done myself now. UberSoldat93
- All addressed.
Does Neff's scene in Star Wars Infinities: The Empire Strikes Back 1 play out the same as the film? Either way, it requires documentation since this is an alternate history.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:10, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- It does, and literally I'm not quite seeing how it needs to be documented when it doesn't alter the events at hand. We wouldn't document LEGO games when the only nature of the subject appearing doesn't contradict or offer new information. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:26, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- FWIW, the scene in question has different dialogue between the other characters in the scene, acknowledging the different events being played out, but Neff remains without any lines, and as such, nothing different with him individually. Comparatively adaptations in similar situations, with characters saying different things in the scenes, or even different events around the characters, aren't documented. For Wuher, as an example, the LEGO games wouldn't be noted in behind the scenes for how, while he's in the cantina, unlike in the movie, Obi-Wan kills Ponda Baba, and doesn't attack Evazan, who just runs away, differing from how he injures both in the film. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:36, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- It does, and literally I'm not quite seeing how it needs to be documented when it doesn't alter the events at hand. We wouldn't document LEGO games when the only nature of the subject appearing doesn't contradict or offer new information. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 14:26, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
Speaking of LEGO games, it's unnecessary to mention omissions from them in the BTS, per precedent.UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:44, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- Deleted. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:50, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
Luca
There is inconsistent referencing for Bespin Wing Guard between the body and the infobox.- I think the first and second paragraphs could be merged, which would also make the article look cleaner, IMO.
- Is there a reason why the full date of release for SW Insider isn't provided in the BTS?
It appears to me that Allen Neff isn't clearly seen in TESB: how we can say that he wielded a Relby-k23 blaster pistol?LucaRoR (Talk) 17:38, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- All addressed except for third. For that, literally I gave a month, which was in the magazine itself. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:58, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- Okay on second though, gave a specific date, sourced to the Titan Magazines website. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:00, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- All addressed except for third. For that, literally I gave a month, which was in the magazine itself. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 17:58, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:01, 26 June 2022 (UTC)