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Vlex Onopin
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 23:21, 15 January 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This is something near 1070 words, was aiming for the GAN and slipped! Follow up nom to one of my first GAs, Ames Uravan
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Support
Nice work on this one! Just a quick note, I decided to reword the BTS per what Ayre does on his articles. Hope that's okay. UberSoldat93 
(talk) 08:30, 21 January 2023 (UTC)- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:29, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 22:44, 29 January 2023 (UTC)- Yo, really good job Fan26 (Talk) 22:56, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
- Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:59, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
- BloodOfIrizi (Syndicure) 03:16, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
- HeadSpikesWalls (she/they) (talk!) 10:41, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
Object
Imp
Date ref nitpick: "during the Republic Era" — can this please be expanded to "during the Republic Era, which preceded the Empire's reign per [source]"?Imperators II(Talk) 12:22, 28 January 2023 (UTC)- Amended.—spookywillowwtalk 19:09, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
I'm not seeing justification for the difference in referencing Onopin's species between the infobox and the body.Hmm, why is The Ultimate Visual Guide given ultimate precedence when discussing the 1stID in the BTS?Imperators II(Talk) 13:10, 29 January 2023 (UTC)- Both were holdovers from various swapovers, amended.—spookywillowwtalk 18:10, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Hanzo
Currently the final sentence says name was synonymously revealed in 2 things, and yet a citation tag only for one.Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:17, 30 January 2023 (UTC)- Amended.—spookywillowwtalk 00:23, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 10:44, 30 January 2023 (UTC)