Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Shea Hublin

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Shea Hublin

  • Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:17, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This is Shea Hublin… the famous Rebel-Destroyer!

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 15:08, September 14, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 00:05, September 18, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 15:41, September 26, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Awesome. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 06:51, October 4, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 10:20, November 8, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Protectorate (talk) 23:29, November 26, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 20:03, November 29, 2013 (UTC)

Object

El Jefe
  • "The answer came from Hublin's Kelrodoan valet, Fara, who informed the Imperials that the creatures' eggs could only be harvested by moving slowly enough to avoid disturbing the colony." This seems like some sort of off-hand remark, since there's nothing previous mentioning harvesting eggs. Or was the valet telling them about the beast in general? I'd like a little more info on this, since as it is right now it sticks out. IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:19, September 16, 2013 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Could you split the intro paragraph into two? It seems rather long.
  • Shouldn't "the Rebel Destroyer" be bolded in the intro as it is a nickname?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 16:03, September 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:03, November 29, 2013 (UTC)

  • Might be worth looking over the original newspaper comic (found via this post). jSarek (talk) 22:36, September 7, 2013 (UTC)
    • It was, thanks. That part of the story makes more sense there. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:11, September 8, 2013 (UTC)
  • How about another image from Princess Leia, Imperial Servant? The only one in the article has his face blocked, and the P&T is big enough to warrant an additional image. Menkooroo (talk) 13:58, October 28, 2013 (UTC)
    • Added one from the newspaper run since there's no decent shot of his face in the reprint. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:27, October 29, 2013 (UTC)